Chapter 30 The Revvel! Didn't we technically already have a reveal in the last chapter?
OMGOSH I CNAT BLEIFE THAT HIS HAS ONLY BEEN UP FOR A DAY AND YORU ALREDDY FMALING!1!11!1! :( STOP! JUSES MIGHT LIKE GAT PPPL NOW So you can control Jesus all of a sudden? BUT THAT DOENT MEAN EH LIKKS FLAMMERS

"Are you" said BrakenFur. The exact reaction I would've had.

"WHY WONT QNYONE BELIVE ME" Brackenfur is just one cat. Just because he doesn't believe doesn't mean that everyone doesn't believe you. said starGleam and she ran uot of the cmap.

/= What.

angry! What.

HOW cloud BrakinFor noy belivfe her after!11!11 After... what, exactly? And atfer averythign she done as a amaxing kit!She Not so sure about the "amazing kit" part but go off I guess... went to Satinclam and it wsa in a clerring just past the thunderclan boarder. And you only discovered this now? Considering how many times she's ran into the forest, it should be impossible for her to only discover this now. She saw all the catd who were in Satnclan and there were..... CXLOUDTAIL AND MOUTHWING!11!1!11!1111 Why so much emphasis?

"LakePaw and RedFur dd you tell FlameOelt and NightRani that they couls come back now?" And where are they? And were they just chill with Gleamstar breaking into their new clan's camp? said Stargleam?

"no were all stlill athletes" I don't feel like I need to say it again... StarGleam was bout to go home when realized soethinf. There cats were crepping towerd her!11!1! That certainly took a turn, except a very small one. Yet, that turn STILL somehow manages to make you nauseous.

"What are youo doing!1!" said she. Said she. I refuse to elaborate. SatinClaw wallked up to her now he was earing purple nail pollish I see we have more nail-polish wearing cats! and three was a blackk stirpe on his head. But why mention just the black stripe on his head? What's his main fur color? "We cnat' let you left Stargleam he said. you know to muchgt." According to the fanfic, she didn't hear anything. So what exactly does she know in this case?

HOlyLeaf kumped out form the shadows and turhned into a BOBCAT!1!1!

Bubcat HullyLeaf ran at StarGleam! She hit StarGleam!1!1 Satinclaw came up 2 and hestared to claw her. But why simply walk up? Gleamstar would've had time to escape if it wasn't a sneak attack.

But when thet clawed her stomich somtehgn inside of StarGleam hurted!1!1!1!11! IT WAS A KIT111! STARGLEAM COULD FELL HER KITS PAN! WHAT?! But how?! When?! Where?! Why?!

she was,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, PREGGANT. No crap...

"IIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEE !1!" Another thing to randomly say to shock my friends. SIAD STARGLEAM.

AUTHROS NTOE OMG JAZZY POSTED THIS CHPTAE WITHOU T ME SAYIGN SHE OULCD. What? IM SORRY I DIDNT GET TO ETID TI MROE! I DIDNT KNOW JAZZ COULD USE MY COUTN Me neither...