Chapter 23 The The? The what?
The Starlan warriors stared attakihg the camp! And... at eh head of them.... WAS FIRESTAR! But he's technically not dead. Sure, he left ThunderClan, but he didn't die, if my memory serves me correct.

Yewls shotuted all around Starkit. She run arundo she didnt kno what to do!11! then a warrori ran up she clawed him. Blood porred down his sholder wher she clawed him. He yelled and run away. If blood poured down his shoulder, shouldn't he be dead? Because "pour" means to flow steadily, so that means that this cat should be dying at an alarmingly quick rate.

I can fight! Thouht Stargleam! I thought she was back to being a kit! She jumped at cat who was rruning he felled abckwered he did. She was godo at thes!11! But how did she know how ti fight? It was a mistery.! A mystery that will be solved very, very soon!

Then a warrier cam up to her! he was very big ans StarPaw was afraid. Now she's an apprentice?! She didn't know if hse cold fight a cat liek him! He clawed her er there was red stuff Red stuff? You mean blood, right? ...RIGHT?! cumming out of her era. "owch" said Starkits he was mad now!11! Anger borned in her chest. Again, HOW IS STARKIT/PAW/GLEAM MOODSWINGING SO QUICKLY?! She runa at him she clawed him real hard he yowled in pan! The pan of pain is back, and it's back with a vengeance! Then she bit him on the throught more blood came out. He cocked then died. Cocked? Like he cocked his head and then died? That sounds terrifying when you actually create a mental image of it... *shudders*

Nd then..... she looked up and there was Starclan warriers StarClan warriors? So, is anyone who wasn't a warrior at death just chilling back up in StarClan? running into the camp! There was CorFeather nad his bother EggleWing (ididnt mack hem up oka!11! Craw Feather relly had a brother named EagelWiKit!1) Yeah, but Eaglekit didn't have a Warrior name nor a confirmed gender. and Bluestar and YellowFang and Spotedleve, BlackStar, WitStarm! Since only the warriors in StarClan can be down here, all of these cats need to go back up to StarClan, since none of them were warriors at the time of their death.

She watched when the cats fouht!1 the Starclan cats drove back the Dark Forste ones. But there was nise from behind her. It wasl...... GITERSTAR!1!1! Tigerstar? Gutterstar? Or Glitterstar? Pick your favorite...

"NOO" he said "I WONT LET YOU WIN" And he jupped at BlueStar!11!11! But she scrathed him!11!1 And he dide!11!1111!11!1!11!1!11! THAT fast? This fanfic has so many one-hit kills and it's making my brain spin...

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!1" SAID HOLYLEAF HER MOTHER. Thanks for pointing that out, author. GleamStar saw the sad in her eyes. She ran from carp! She ran from carp? A carp is a fish. So is she running from a giant fish? Because if she was that would be hilarious.

"oh no StarKits hurt someone said. "Lets get her better. But didn't she run away from the cam- oh, sorry, carp? "There were allot of cats in the hurt but everone knew StarKit was spescal And, how exactly did you get this information? Please state it in your bibliography! so they let her get treted forst. But what if there's like a pregnant cat that's about to give birth? Do we just let her die in pain?

When sehe was better someone said "Oh no StarKits parents are gon. Someoen nedes 2 be her parents."

"Well do it." Said a cat Star looked aroud it was... REPDAW AND LAKEPOOOOOOL! The lesbian couple wants to adopt a kit! Good for them! Too bad it has to be the reincarnated Gleamstar though...

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" siad StarKit! You should be happy you get new parents at all.