Chaphtrt 22 LEBIANS 1 111 Arguably the best chapter title in this book thus far.
StarKit dind know why eh was so upest, THEN WHY BE UPSET? but she new that it was NOT A GOD THINGG for there to be LESBIA. And how do you "know" this information, exactly?

"Whats wrong StarGleam" asked RedPaw as she kised LakePaw ON THE LISP! Cats cannot kiss. They can lick each other, but not kiss. "Your just a it why do you not like that ides EXACTLY!!!

"Becuse being lesbna is WONG! No it's not! You can love whatever gender(s) you want! My queer friend group would be PISSED if they ever saw this- StarKti yelled back. "Its against the BibTen Comandamnt." The "bib" at the start implies that she was about to say bible. May I bring up (again), that HUMAN RELIGION DOES NOT APPLY TO A BOOK SERIES ABOUT WILD CATS?!

"How would you know of the ten commandnts " akxed LekePaw "you werf here for that." EXACTLY x2

"I know" said StarKkit thuning "but I somehow now aboot it." Then why not discover how exactly you know?

LakePaol shruged she didnt know how to responing. "Well the ten comadnt sarent' real" she said "so me and RedFur think its oka." I know there's something I can say here, but I'm not sure what it is...

"Come backc to the nursey with us" saud RedPFur "your too youg to be out of the nurseyr for log." Correct! Reincarnated Starkit was only born a couple chapters ago, therefore she should be really young, unless this book decided to timeskip, and timeskip without letting us readers know.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!111!1!" yelled SarPaw she refused to et herself be expod to the LESBITS!1!1!11!" But why though? Why?

Se ran out into the frost. AssKit folowed her. "Whats wrong StarStar" she asked "why are you so upset!" Ashkit, please talk some sense into Starkit. I'm begging you.

"I'm beng rased by PLEBIANS!" StarKite yeled back. "WHAT DO YOU THINK IS WRONG/" Nothing...?

"well come over her" said AshFit "maybe we can make them see the ligt. Dammit.

"giggle" siad SatrKit but whe went ofer to AshFur. The second time a character has said "giggle" in this fic.

But then a cat was coing throug the tress! It was... JazzSong! And, (other than plot convince) what is she doing here?

"JazzPaw what are you dong here!1!1"! asked Starkit. Almost as if Starkit heard my previous statement.

"It's JazzStar dint you hear I got mad letter after StarGleam died." "It was a sad deth." You... got your 9 lives that quickly?

"who is StarGlaem" asked StarGleam Asking a stupid question... she new the nam sounded family but she didnt know WHAT IT WAS. Are you sure?

"it doest mater" sud JazzSong lets go back to the camp." So was she looking for the two kits? That... actually makes sense...!

"Yay" said AshFurtk happly. They went back to the damp. The damp? Was the camp damp? Has it just rained?

"No go see RedPaw and lakePaw" said JaszStar "I now they'e wating for yo."

"finefine" saud StarKit but im not going to like it! *displeased sigh as I turn to the audience* Remember kids, LGBTphobia is NEVER okay, no matter the reason!

SIX MOONS LATER NOW we get a timeskip notice? But now I'm curious... what happened in that six moon period?

"StarKit from this day forwrd you will be NONE AS STARPAW!11!1"! sayd JazzSong. Then clan cheerid happily.

"Your mwneot will be" saiud JazzSeng.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!11!111!111!" YELLED STARFLEM!1!111!111 Jazzstar didn't even get to say who the mentor was! Let Jazzstar speak, Starpaw!