Catter 1 How did we come back to Chapter 1? The Fiht Aganst the Sitters Sitters? Is Stargleam and the patrol fighting some babysitters? 1 1?
"Oh nose!" yellded StarPaw she wus so horrorifed. "LakePaool is buck and seh is NUT OKA!" Gee, you think?

"Of coarse im not okay!" LakeFall I thought her Warrior name was Lakepool... screchemd loadly she issed at StarGlame. "I'm being posesd by HolyLeaf wut do you THINK!" If she was being possessed, how was she able to say this? she yelddl and hulrd hesselv at StarPaw. StarGlme was so surpissed she culdn;t mofe Kill her.

Then... "OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Like a Minecraft goat horn? It was...

REDPAW! Redpaw runnth over to StarPaw and jumped in font of herr and LakePolawm hit her insta. Darn it.

"Nuu Redpaw!" chked StarGlamea and she locked at RedPaw. "RedOaw are yu okayo?" she esked upsed. RedPaw cughed. "No im not but at leaat I sawed yuour lif! she sed and then he did. StarFlame locked at RedPaw she wus so buttifly then StarGleam shock her hud. "No Im STRREET!" Are you sure? Are you absolutely sure? Are you 100%, totally sure? Because it surely doesn't seem like it. she taught madly. "but now what do we dao agant LakePaw!" she lucked up. LakePaw was runnen toward Loinblzx and she was WIDESPED!

"NOWWWWWWW LIonHEAR!" wisprd StarGalem and she ran towed LionBlaze So both Lionheart and Lionblaze are here? Won't that get confusing? and she hit LakePaw, who did to. So she's dead again?

"StarGlame I will get u for thiss11 sed LakePaw Oh. as SatinClaw Satinclaw? drag away to hellClan. You mean the Dark Forest, right? He waswerng oink naie Polish. Pink nail polish! How would a cat have or need or get nail polish? I don't know! And frankly, I don't think I want to know either! then StarGlame stinted to crry as she realed that her sitter ass ded. I thought they were both dead a long time ago.

"you killd my Subjt!" HolyLeaf rared turng back in a bare. "Ilus get you for thi!" she saud and then she rudhed at StarPlame. "Oh o!" yelld every1 "tarPaw got our of the Way!" Tarpaw? Are Tarpaw's paws covered in tar?

Tim semd to slow danw as StarPawlem run awy from the bare. But she ran left into... TIGGERSTAR!" I thought Stargleam killed Tigerstar already? Or did one of Tigerstar's lives kick in and he's back? I'm guessing it's the latter, but this fanfic is so ambiguous that he could've been brought back through other means that his nine lives.

"Fuhrstar! yellded a TiggerStraw. "You ar gong to did now!" And he held out... SOME JEW!

"Omg jyew!" elld FamePaw she locked at the yew. "But it wooden work becas thers a lizded on it." That's not how it works. Even with the lizard on it, the yew would still poison whoever eats it. They all locked at the lizard. It wus a newt. The nwt ran away. Now force-feed her the yew. You know you want to.

"... NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" yelled FamePaw. "Now the yew is gunna wkr! It was always going to work.

"Ete the yew!" You don't just hold out poison to someone and say "drink the poison", you have to trick them into doing it through other means. I thought you were smarter than this, Tigerstar! sadi TiggerStar he thirst it at StarGlame StarGleam baked away. "You're never get moi to ete it!" If Tigerstar is being this dumb about you eating the yew, then yes, you'll never eat it, Stargleam. she esked and then she held "YOUE NEVER TOOK ME ALIV!" Unless Tigerstar gains some IQ points and kills you in another way.

"are you so sur?" aksed TigerClar and then he lung at StarGlema and grabed her and ran away. "Youl never cathg me!1111 he laght meanly. "Im gong to Shadowcaln!" And then he luf. Yay! A chance that she'll die! Everybody clap! *unanimous clapping*

Guyx I ben working relly hard on this wile I was gon. im sor'ry for the wait. Revew betetr and ill updat mor quick How old is this fanfic again?