Cahpter 12 The Sark Forest
"NO!" yewled StarKit. She run after TigerClaw. Didn't Tigerstar grab her, shouldn't she be squirming to get out of his grasp, instead of running after him? but he was to fat. I feel like there's something I can say here, but I can't quite put my finger on it... She cudlnt catch up. Finly she stoped. She was so tried so sad, Teres begun to role down her face: her sitser You mean sisters. Both of them should (key word: should) be dead by now. was deed and tigerstar had ExcapeD!

"y am I so ulsess?/?/' You... you fought off ShadowClan. How are you saying this to yourself? she dsked. "why couldnt i kill her?" "its not opur falt. Sadi a voice from bedide her. "WHAT WHOSE THEIR" SHE SAID JUMPED.

It juts me. " said JayWing Jaywing? Do you mean Jay's Wing, or Jayfeather? waking to bedside her. "Yo couldt kill im becas u're nut dead." "what" said StarGleam "What dlo you men."

"hes in the Dakr Froset!" said JayFeather. "hess allready ded!" oh no what do I do thouth starGeam.

"we can go to teh Dark Forste but its ver danger." Mewled Jayfeater. "tack me their!" sad StarGleam. Why is Jayfeather, a medicine cat, with little to no fighting experience, and who is blind, taking his daughter into the Dark Forest, even if she's part of a super-special prophecy?

She slepped and then they were in the Fark Forest. It was dark. Here was no mono 2 lighte the way and it wass heard to see. They herd voices! It wass TiggerStar!

"ok tjen well kell her ND invade Thundercaln" Yay! Maybe they can kill the brainless people (or should I say cats?) in this fic! he was said. "WHAT NOO!" said StarPaw she jumped at him. Why is she blowing her cover this quickly? Why not wait a bit longer to see what his plan exactly is, so that you can prevent it when you go back to camp? she was aboot to hit him when BlackStripe was there! "TIGERSAR WATCH OUT" said BlackStrip. TierStar loocked at her and he clawed her. It wasnt fare!

StarGleam fell to the ground blood was cuming from a wand A wand? Is Tigerstar a magician for birthday parties in his spare time? on her sholder. It was a lot of red blod. HawekFrost Looked at her. She was so buetiful so kawai, Not another one! he was thought just like FirStar. Wait, what? He loved her. He had to save her. Cliche "redeemed villain" is cliche.

He jumped in TiggerStar! He bit him! But it wa s to lat. StarPaw was dyeing. She was dyeing her fur a different color? What color? "it was turning balkc. Oh, she dyed her fur black! "I love you seh said as she did.

AND THEN STARGLEAM WAS DIED!11!111!11111!1!11! YAY!!!!!