Real quick before I start this is my first book like this. So if you could tell me how I'm doing or if I could improve. Also  this is not what the comic is about I don't really know what it's about. But this short story is you have amnesia when you see someone you love no matter which type of love it is until someone else calls their name twice or they say their own name then the love amnesia will leave.
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Third person's POV

Marinette woke up and got ready for school. She then went downstairs and saw two people that look like her parents. She started freaking out.

Marinette: who are you, you look just like my parents Sabine and Tom

Sabine: we are you look just like our daughter Marinette.

Marinette: I am

They all then went downstairs to the bakery.

Lady: morning Sabine, Tom, Marinette

They were all confused after they heard their name.

Lady: Sabine, Tom,  Marinette

Sabine: oh sorry morning Marinette you should be getting to school

Marinette: right bye

Then she walked out and went to school . When she got to school she saw a girl who looked like Alya.

Marinette: oh it's Alya

Marinette; Hey Al-ya s-sorry you looked like someone I knew

Alya: no no I'm Alya but y'know you look a lot like someone I know too you can't be ......Marinette

Marinette: IT'S ME!!!!

Alya: you sure

Marinette: yeah I'm Marinette

Alya: oh wait how come we couldn't remember each other

Marinette: I don't know let's just get to class