🐋 Best Blurb - Results 🐋


1. The Law Of Beast Book 1: JabreelWilson

Hooking power: 15/20
Originality: 9/10
Writing Style: 8/10
Grammar: 10/10
Sync with the plot: 18/20.

Total: 60/70

Review: The grammar is perfect. I didn't really find any mistakes. But as I said earlier you can add something to make it a bit more attractive. Other than that everything seemed pretty good to me.

2. Thoroughbreds: JustNicole0001

Hooking power: 18/20.
Originality: 7/10
Writing Style: 8/10
Grammar: 10/10.
Sync with the plot: 16/20.

Total: 59/70

Review: It's interesting, the grammar is good, just work on the description so that it looks a bit real. Other than that I love it.

3. Bound by Love: Sirinfathima

Hooking power: 19/20
Originality: 8/10
Writing Style: 10/10
Grammar: 9/10
Sync with the plot: 17/20

Total: 63/70

Review: Overall, it's good. It's interesting, I didn't really find any mistakes in grammar. BUT I feel there's something lacking. I don't know why.

4. LOVE BUG: feufeu15

Hooking Power: 20/20.
Originality: 10/10
Writing Style: 9/10
Grammar: 10/10
Sync with the plot: 19/20.

Total: 68/70

Review: I really love it, it's something new for me if I am honest. I love the character description, and how you put it into words to describe their life.

5. What If: A Harry Potter FanFic: Demiwitch_Fangirl

Hooking power: 15/20
Originality: 9/10
Writing Style: 5/10
Grammar: 7/10
Sync with the plot: 16/20.

Total: 52/70

Review: The concept is unique and funny. You can work on the grammatical mistakes and maybe add something more to hook the readers. Other than that everything's good.

6. Let Me Find You: nutellaxgirlx

Hooking power: 18/20
Originality: 8/10
Grammar: 7/10
Writing Style: 8/10
Sync with the plot: 17/20

Total: 58/70

Review: It's a good book with an amazing concept. I don't blame you, stories about fairies aren't really my thing but I'm pretty sure it hooks the readers.

7. The Mangled Fingers: Asna29saqib

Hooking power: 14/20
Originality: 6/10
Writing Style: 6/10
Grammar: 8/10
Sync with the plot: 16/20

Total: 50/70

Review: You can add something to make it a little interesting.

8. Stuck In A Sonderland: Oceaness15

Hooking power: 20/20
Originality: 8/10
Writing Style: 8/10
Grammar: 9/10
Sync with the plot: 20/20

Total: 65/70

Review: I loved the word you chose how to describe it. Overall it's amazing.

9. Black Clouds: AnshaBhatia

Hooking power: 18/20
Originality: 9/10
Writing Style: 9/10
Grammar: 10/10
Sync with the plot: 19/20

Total: 65/70

Review: Overall it's a pretty interesting book, the grammar is perfect. It was hard for me to find any mistakes.

10. Chaos and Perfect confusion: 

Hooking power: 17/20
Originality: 8/10
Writing style: 9/10
Grammar: 9/10
Sync with the plot: 18.5/20

Total: 61.5/70

Review: The blurb was great. But I felt something was amiss for the hooking power in the blurb. You can describe the Male lead in the blurb to add fuel to hooking power.

11. A love so blind:

Hooking power: 18/20
Originality: 7/10
Writing style: 8/10
Grammar: 8/10
Sync with the plot: 16/20

Total: 57/70

Review: It was a cute description. I liked it. You can improve more on the plot. It will help you reach many people and Grammar was a bit down. A bit more descriptive would be able to hook up the audience.

12. My perfect sunset:

Hooking power: 12/20
Originality: 6/10
Writing style: 8/10
Grammar: 7/10
Sync with the plot: 14/20

Total: 47/70

Review: The blurb wasn't descriptive at all. It didn't have the hooking power where you can get the audience. You should work more on the descriptive. It was something which everybody writes maybe you could bring something new to the story. Description of the character would do good if not the description of the story.

13. Love letter to my Scarlett:

Hooking power: 18.5/20
Originality: 9/10
Writing style: 8/10
Grammar: 8/10
Sync with the plot: 18.5/20

Total: 62/70

Review: The blurb was good. It was apt to the plot. But grammar must be corrected here and there, not much. Overall it had a good hooking power.

14. A trip to Odisha:

Hooking power- 17/20
Originality- 10/10
Writing style- 7/10
Grammar- 10/10
Sync with the plot- 16/20

Total: 60/70

Review- attractive for those who love traveling (like me) but also who have knowledge about the place (unlike me). No grammar mistakes or typos. The way of writing can be improved, try making it more descriptive. There wasn't any plot to start with, the only chapter was info from Wikipedia itself, but I hope the coming chapters have interesting stories about Odisha from your POV. Never seen anyone write their travel experiences here so yeah full marks for creativity.

15. Komoreby:

Hooking power- 18/20
Originality- 9/10
Writing style- 9/10
Grammar- 10/10
Sync with the plot- 19/20

Total: 65/70

Review- yes the story seems very interesting and attractive from the description, but mostly for the science geeks (not me). The way of writing is really nice but try using layman words for better understanding. No spelling or grammar errors. Sync is good but the name 'komoreby' is a city according to your plot but the cover has a girl's pic (it is giving a different perspective to your story), try mending that.

16. Operation 499:

Hooking power: 16/20
Originality: 7/10
Writing style:  9/10
Grammar: 10/10
Sync with the plot: 19/20

Total: 61/70

Review: It's good but twisted. Doesn't give much info.

17. Mystical Mutant: @kikibtsstan

Hooking power: 19/20
Originality: 9/10
Writing style: 10/10
Grammar: 10
Sync with the plot: 18/20

Total: 66/70

Review: Great and new story.

18. The quest of the destined: @anora0901

Hooking power: 18/20
Originality: 9/10
Writing style:  9/10
Grammar: 10/10
Sync with the plot: 19/20

Total: 65/70

Review: Great blurb. Is kind of original.

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