I've made a few alterations to my chapter 5 and 6 because people were complaining that Gally said he loved her way too quickly. (Sorry that I don't want my story to drag on.)

I found out a little too late into changing the chapters that I can't insert a chapter into certain section, so it looks messy now.

If some of you could look over the chapters and see if they are alright then please do so and leave a comment on that chapter. It would be deeply appreciated!

I feel like nobody's enjoying my story anymore though, hence why I don't update as much as I used to.

People are constantly moaning about certain parts of my story which is really irritating. I enjoy receiving input and constructive criticism, but there's a point where it's downright rude.

Thanks to those who have supported my story and enjoy when I update and I will continue to update if you want me to.

Please check over chapter 5 and 6 if you have time and leave a comment saying if it's alright.

See you soon.