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Manik was drying her arms with towel and nandini was silently sitting as she was lost in thinking about her foreign feeling. Manik got up and took out new pair of cloth for her. It was full length gown. Manik had  only purchased  , full length gown and jeans top for her , no short dresses as even in house , he didn't want that she should wear short dresses as because of male servants.

"Baby , go and change your dress "manik said while putting the dress in front of her. Nandini came out of her thoughts by listening his words. She just hummed and left toward washroom after grabbing the cloth.

"What is happening to me , why i always feel like my body starts burning whenever he touches me , whenever he kisses me , this feeling is very new which i never felt before , what is this , i am not understanding anything  and why he cares for me too much  " Nandini closed the door after coming inside and said to herself standing in front of mirror , touching her lips.

"But He is a big big wala monster " she said angrily ,  fisting the dress tightly.

" I shouldn't think about him , i should think about mumma papa , they will be worried for me , they will be finding me " she said sadly and her eyes started becoming teary.

"I have to think something else to get rid of this monster , i will run away from here "she said looking at mirror having determination in her eyes.

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"Thank god monster is sitting outside , now i will  think about my escape plan comfortably "She came out , after changing her dress and took relief  , seeing him working on his laptop in balcony. She decided to take help of mukti.

Before she could walked out of room , manik stopped her holding her hand and she turned toward him and found him smiling. She looked at him confusingly.

"Are you thinking to run from this house baby ?"he asked sweetly , cubbing her face after leaving her hand.

"Yes , i will run away "she immediately replied back and he held her face little tightly and her eyes filled up with anger which made her scared and she closed her eyes.

"Okay , then try baby , i will not stop you "he said leaving her face and she opening her eyes , looked at him confusingly , she thought he will shout on her again but that didn't happen.

Manik was also about to shout on her but stopped after remembering mukti's words and replied back calmly. Mukti words  worked like a magic on manik that today the rude , arrogant Manik Malhotra trying to control his anger.

It was not just about mukti words , it was love , manik loved nandini that's why for her , he was trying to change and controlling his anger as he wanted that she should accept him as her husband from her heart not after getting scared from him.

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"Sweety , you can't run away from here , it is not easy , if bhai will come to know about this , i am helping you , he will kill me "nandini was in mukti room and she was trying explain nandini that it is not easy for her to escape from here.

After listening mukti's words , nandini's face hung down sadly and mukti felt bad for her but she was also helpless.

"Sweety , tell me something what you do you in your pass time , any games or something else"mukti asked and tried to change the topic.

"I used to play many games with my friends , will you play with me ? "She asked cutely and mukti smiled as she got succeeded in changing her mood.

"Offcourse sweety , tell me which game do you want to play ? "She asked putting hand on her face and she excitingly got up.

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They were playing Aankh Micholi , in this game , one of the players, the denner, is blindfolded with a piece of cloth. The denner has to catch hold of one of the other players while being blindfolded. Maids were also playing with mukti as nandini insisted them to play with her. Nandini was enjoying alot and mukti too but she was calling herself fool. In this age , she was playing this type childhood game.

On the other hand manik was listening noises from outside which were disturbing him. He couldn't able to concentrate on his works. His anger was rising.

"Now you will see , how  I easily i will catch , i am expert in this game " Nandini was blindfolded , she was moving her hand and finding other , she said confidently. She was stepping backward  and behind her there was stairs. She was just about to fall.

"Nandini "before mukti could stop her , we heard manik's voice , he shouted pulling nandini toward him by holding her arms and removed her blindfold making her shocked and she was blinking her eyelashes , trying to adjust her eyes in light.

"Mukti , are you blind , didn't you see that she was about to fall down , when you become such a child "manik shouted on mukti while mukti was looking down and nandini turned her face a little and got shocked to see that she was standing on the edges of stairs.

" i  pay you all for working in this house , not for enjoying and playing this bloody games in this house "manik shouted angrily on maids and they left from there immediately while nandini felt bad for them , because of her manik shouted on them and also on mukti.

Manik after giving angrily look to mukti , holding nandini hand , took her inside the room and closed the door. Now he was looking at nandini angrily who was standing silently and making herself ready to bear his anger , her eyes were looking down.

Manik was fisting his hand as he was trying to control his anger. He explained her many time to take care of herself but she again and again doing the same mistake and making him angry.

Manik didn't find any way and in next movement , nandini was pinned on the wall  and manik was kissing her lips hungrily holding her waist. His kiss again shocked her and her body became weak and she wanted to response him but he was not giving her chance as like he wanted to punish her through this dominant kiss. She moved her  hand upward to touch him but before she could touch him , he pinned her hand on wall , above her head. His aggressive kiss started becoming slow and the kiss was worked like magic on him like before as he started calming down but Nandini was feeling irritated as she wanted to touch him.

"Aahu " manik moved backward while shouting as nandini kicked on his foot as she was feeling irritated and after didn't finding any option , she kicked him.

"Why  you are not letting me to touch you and kiss you "she said being frustrated soul and manik who was got angry by her act few second  back , now after listening her words , he smirked looking at her and she bite her lower lips after realising that what she has said in frustration.

First her word and now The way she bite her lower lips , manik got hungry , hungry to eat up her lips and again without saying anything , he started to kiss her . This time he was kissing her softly and she also got relief as he let her to kiss him back this time. He held nandini's both hand and put them on his face as he wanted to fulfil her wish. He held her one leg and put it on his waist and kiss her lovingly. He was enjoying the kiss alot. He had waited for her so long. He had waited for to kiss her , to touch her , to feel her body . And  finally , he got her and now he didn't want to leave her.

But after getting breathless finally they broke the kiss. Nandini was still confused thinking that what was happening to her and manik was chilled out and feeling calm down after the kiss.

"I used to control myself before , whenever you bite your lower lips but today i feel good as now you are mine and i don't need to control my inner desire but don't worry , i will go very slow baby and i am damn  sure , you are also enjoying this as you proved this by your last word "he said moving her finger tip on her bare arms while she was looking down , feeling shy this time not scared.

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Manik was sleeping on couch and nandini was lost in same thoughts , why she was enjoying kissing this monster , why she wanted to kiss him and didn't pushing him back. Why she was loving the way , he was kissing her.

She was feeling thirsty , she got up and came outside. There was darkness outside , she got scared but she was feeling thirsty also and taking god name , she started to walk toward kitchen.

"Ahahah.. "she shouted loudly as she bumped with someone. She started running back to her room and she immediately open the room and saw manik was standing and looked her shockingly.

"I have seen someone outside "she said jumping into his arms and hugged him tightly and manik also hugged him back. He want to say thanks to the person whom she had seen. Because of him , nandini hugged him. He could able to feel her in his arms and it was heaven.

After didn't getting any reply , she broke the hug and said "i have seen someone , outside" listening her words , he came out of his thought and walked toward the door after holding her hand but before they could step outside , they saw cabir.

"Bhai , she has seen me outside before i could explain her , she ran from there "cabir said and nandini was looking at him confusingly and manik sign relief .

"Hi , I am cabir , manik's brother "cabir introduced himself while forwarding her hand and she made o-shape face after knowing this .

"Monster's brother , that's mean he will be also a monster "she thought and leave from there without shaking her hand with him.

"Cabir , you come back , how was the meeting "manik asked while hugging him.

"Bhai , we got the deal and the all credit goes to you and your hard work "cabir said feeling proud to be his brother.

"No , cabir it because of you we got the deal , you convinced the dealer and you held the meeting perfectly "manik said and then after few minutes cabir left and manik closed the door.

"What was you doing outside "manik asked coming toward her and she immediately replied back innocently and cutely " i was feeling thirsty and i am still feeling thirsty " He smiled on her innocence and walked out to bring water for her.

"Listen if you will feel thirsty and hungry next time at night then wake me up okay "he said Lovingly after giving her water and she immediately drank the water.

"Monster , please make me meet my parents for once , i promise you , i will do whatever you will say "she requested like a cute baby and manik became quite for a movement after listening to her words.

Without saying anything he started to make her lay down on bed and she was sadly looking at him as expected she got same reaction from him , that's mean no reply. She turned her face and silently started crying holding the blanket.

"I am sorry but now i will never let you meet them because you are mine , they don't have any right on you "he said in calm tone but his word held dominance and possessiveness.

Question time

1. Howz the part ?? Try to little long comments

2. What do u think that why manik is not letting her meet her parent ?

3. Your favourite scene and why do u like the most hehe ?

4. Few word for our manan from this udpate ? Do u liking their romance ?

5. What do you want to see next

6. Last one , how do find entry of cabir (credit goes to The_BloomyGirl thank u darling for this funny idea )

Love Mehak