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Manik was taking shower and he was clearly listening the sounds which were coming from outside. Still nandini was breaking the things. Manik was smiling all the time like a fool standing under the shower. He was not getting angry , infact he was enjoying this game with her. And for this he was calling himself a big fool.

He was having many ideas and tricks to make her quite as he knew how to control people and he was going pretty well in handling nandini before  mukti had explained manik , her words effected him as he wanted to make her accept him as her husband by her heart. So  rather  then smiling , he couldn't do anything , poor nandini's monster manik. It was just starting only.

As soon as he opened the door , he became hell angry. It was clearly said , after looking at his face that now nothing could control his anger. As he saw nandini was standing on the bed with a stick in her hand and she was jumping as she was trying to break Chandelier which was hanging above her head. Manik got worried for her and he ran toward her.

"Are you out of your mind "he shouted while snatching the stick from her hand not before standing on bed in front of her.

"Haha..  finally i won , so this was your favourite chandelier which i was trying break and finally this made you angry "she said between her laughs and feeling so proud after making him angry. Her cute laugh were still didn't calming the monster.

"You stupid , this chandelier was nothing for me , i got worried for you.. " he shouted while pulling her toward himself after holding her arms not so tightly as he didn't want to hurt her in any manner.

" If this would have broken down then it could fall on you "he continued to explain her , his one hand leaving her arm moved toward her face. This time his tone was calm.

His anger made her quite , she had never seen him so angry before . This was something new , she had seen in him. As  his words were clearly showing that how much he cared for her. For him nothing was more important than her. She was the most precious gift for him .

"Do what ever you want to but remember one think don't even try to harm yourself as you are mine and if you get single scratch on your body then i will show you , what i can do " he said , dangerously coming close to her face , his word made her shiver.  She was numb to react . She was not use to this kind of possessive behavior.

Then he jumped down from bed , he picked her in his arm in bridal style and  took her inside the bathroom. She was saying nothing now as she got scared. She was looking at him and trying to figure out that who is he ? And  he was not looking at her. He was a mysterious soul for nandini. As she was unaware about the word that was possessiveness.

"Take shower and come for breakfast , you haven't eaten anything in dinner also yesterday "he after saying this , he left out after closing the door. His voice held dominance and his words were showing his concern. 

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Manik and mukti were taking breakfast when nandini came there , mukti gave her smile but she didn't react . Just she sat beside mukti and started eating breakfast silently. Mukti found her behavior weird. She immediately came to know something serious had happened between manik and nandini as first she had seen manik angry and  without any reason , he was shouting on maids .

"Somebody is behaving like a good girl today "manik said while cleaning his hand with tissue paper after eating his breakfast. She knew that these words for her but then also she didn't look at him. Something was going in her little brain.

"Good bye and remember my words "he said while walking toward her and he pecked her lips  after leaning close to her face. She finally looked at him , her eyes were wide open in a shock as he kissed her lips in front of mukti. She looked at mukti who was pretending that she hadn't seen anything.

He left from there not before biting bye to mukti. As soon as manik left nandini took a long breath of relief , he was literally scaring her alot. He was having serious power of dominating and controlling others.

"What happened nandu , is everything okay "mukti asked while putting her hand on her shoulder , having concerned in her voice.

"Didu , nothing is alright , monster is not a monster , he is big wala monster "she said stretching the word "big" more , this also made mukti laugh as  the  way she was showing from her both hands how much big monster he was.

"Now what he has done with my sweety sister "she asked lovingly while caressing nandini's face and nandini told her everything and mukti burst out into laughter after hearing about her idea of breaking his room but she also got shocked to know that manik didn't even shout on her. She understood , it was effect of her words.

"Didu , but today he shouted on me so badly , i couldn't able to  cry also , didu please help me in running away from this house , i want to meet my mumma papa "nandini requested to mukti after holding her hand. Mukti felt bad for her but she even didn't want to go against his brother.

"Sweety , i am sorry i can't help you in this "mukti denied and nandini's face hung down sadly , mukti felt bad after breaking the heart of innocent soul.

"But i can try to make you meet your parent "mukti said and she immediately showed mukti her teeth while smiling. Which made mukti also smile.

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They walked out of the mansion happily . Mukti was  seeing the excited soul , the soul who was excited to meet her parent and she just hoped that she can help her in this.  But on the front main door security guards stopped them. Mukti showed them her eyes.

"Sir strictly ordered us that this girl shouldn't be gone out of this house "the man said pointing his hand toward nandini and her eyes filled up with anger. She was looking at him like in next movement she would eat him up and that happened also.

"You monkey , stupid , idiot let me go.. "nandini said while pulling the man's hair.  She was taking out all her anger on the security guard. Guards were unaware that with whom they had messed up.

"Sweety calm down , there is not any fault of them in this "mukti tired to pull nandini back while man was crying in pain. Finally mukti got successful in pulling her back and she found this task  very difficult.

"Didu , do something " at last nandini pleaded mukti and mukti looking at her helplessly.

"Sweety come inside first , i will talk to bhai , when he will get back home "mukti tried to make explain her but  she was not looking convinced with her words.

"No no , i will not go inside until monster don't let me to meet my parents " she said like a stubborn kid , sitting on floor. While security guards laugh on her and mukti showed them her eyes and they became quite.

"Sweety , it's so hot , you are sweating badly , come inside , i promise you "before mukti could complete her sentence , sitting in front of nandini holding her hand. Nandini cutted her words.

"No , no , no , i will not go from here anywhere , i want to meet mumma and papa , didu , you go inside "she said looking at mukti while mukti got up and hold her waist and  she was thinking what to do now ?

"Didu , you please go inside , you are sweating badly "nandini said seeing mukti who was standing in front of her and wiping her sweat with tissue paper.

" Sweety you also come inside with me na "mukti said and nandini wiping the sweat from her forehead with her hand only , she nodded her head negatively as like a innocent baby.

After an hour also nandini was sitting there and she was trying to manipulate security guards and mukti on the other hand , she was trying to contact her brother but he was not picking up her call. Mukti tried to make her drink water also but she was denying to take anything. Mukti was seeing her condition. Her body started getting red.

"Hello , bhai.. "finally manik picked up the phone and mukti immediately told manik everything and he freaked out.

"What ? From 1 hour , she is sitting outside , i am just coming mukti " before mukti could said anything more , manik after saying this cut the call. After 2 minutes only 2 3 maid came outside , one was handling umbrella ,others were handling fruits and juice for nandini.

"Mam , juice  "one maid said giving her juice and other one stood beside her opening the umbrella. Nandini throw the juice away angrily .

"No i don't want anything , i only need my mumma and papa "she said and pushed the maid who was standing beside her holding the umbrella.

Mukti  came outside and saw nandini was fighting with maids. "Go from here , go "nandini  shouting on maids frustratedly "no mam , we can't go sir has strictly ordered us to take care of you "one maid said and she frowned.

"Oh Bhaiya , let me go na , i am like your sister "nandini said to security guards and then he immediately started opening the door and she got happy as finally security guards were letting her go.

"Thank you so much "she immediately got up and ran toward door but her happiness flew away when she saw manik coming out of car and she came to know the guard had opened the gate for manik, not for her. Manik was giving her angrily looks and she looked down sadly. Manik was getting mad seeing  redness  on her skin and the way she was sweating.

"Leave me monster , i will not live with you mumma.."she cried out , kicking her legs and beating her small hands on his solid chest when manik picked her in his arm in bridal style , he was taking her inside without saying anything. Mukti with maids followed manan.

Manik took her inside guest room and put her on bed and she about to move out of bed but manik holding her arms gave her angry glare and she got scared by seeing his looks only.

"Bring ice cubes and towel and keeping the juice on table and go from here "manik shouted on maids and they immediately left and nandini shivered on her place.

"Bhai.. "mukti about to say something but manik cut her words" mukti you also leave right now "he said  and nandini looked toward mukti for help but she leave  from there helplessly and tears dropped down from her eyes and it fell directly on manik's hand.

He started kissing her lips hungrily and this time he didn't give any chance to her respond. It was a pure dominating kiss. He was kissing her to calm himself down. Nandini was about to held his face but manik didn't let her do that. He grabbing her hands ,  pinned them on bed. Nandini was feeling irritated as she wanted to touch him and this was totally a foreign feeling for her but this feeling was making her restless but she was enjoying this also.

"I told you , if you will try to  harm yourself , then i will show you "he said after breaking the kiss , leaving her hands and he smirk looking at her and nandini was looking at him confusingly as she was confused with her unknown feeling. She was not understanding what was happening to her.  Then their eye lock was distributed by knock on the door. Manik got up after winking at her.

He opened the door , maid came inside and left after putting the tray of ice cubes and towel on the table. Manik locked the door and came toward her. She was sitting confusingly taking support of bed. Manik put the tray in front of her. He held her hand and picking one ice cube started rubbing , on her hand which had became red. Nandini held his hand tightly digging her nails and closing her eye , she shivered when ice cube contact with her arms . His eyes were filled up with love and possession.

"I am again warning you baby , don't try to harm you , the consequences will be more worst next time "he was rubbing the ice cube on her neck and she was sitting , closing her eyes and enjoying this. Listening to his words , she immediately opened her eyes and saw smirk on his face.

Question Time

1. Howz the part ?

2. Who is manik for you , what do u think about his character ?

3. How do find our stubborn nandini ?

4. Few word for their last little romance ?

5. Your favourite scene ?

6. What do you want to see next ?

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