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"Love like in movies , jo hero ko heroine se aur heroine ko hero se hota hai , like that "she cutely asked while manik shaked in head in a disbelief thinking that how she could be so cute every time .

"Yes , that love jo hero ko heroine se hota hai and heroine ko hero se and now it happened to you with me "manik replied back in same way like she had asked.

"Wow , love is so beautiful , i have seen in movies , i am still shocked i am in love with you , but without any regret now , as you are not my kidnapper , you are my saviour , so i love you my hero "manik was in a shock after listening the 3 magical word from her mouth. He didn't think that she would confess her love so easily but she confessed.

"You know I was so confused from past few days , when you come close me , when you touch me , why i always feel good but now no confusion as now i know the answer"she said happily but is she really in love with him or it's just the physical attraction . As love doesn't only mean physically feeling good , love is trust.

"That's good , now let's go home back, if you will remain in water for long time you will catch fever , i really can't take that risk " manik said again being over caring.

"What ? Why ? We have just took a one ride only , no i don't want to go back home "she said sadly holding his hand and tried to convince him.

"We are going back home and that's finale , i don't want to listen no "he said being dominating and she looked at him sadly.

"That's so unfair , i will not talk to you "she said angrily , crossing her hands around her chest and made angry pout.

"Okay fine no home "manik said as he can't see her angry or sad and nandini show him 32 teeth

"and not water park also"he said making her again sad .

"I mean , we could go somewhere else , where ever you want but not water park "he said and she nodded her head positively and started thinking where they could go.

"Ahaa Why you picked me up "nandini shouted as suddenly manik picked her in his arm in bridal style and he was just smiling looking at her.

"To take you in changing room mam , so that you can able to change your wet cloth or else you will catch cold "he said and in next movement nandini sneezed.

"Oh no , you catch cold , now we should go to doctor "manik freaked out on a one sneeze only. Which was clearly showing that how much overprotective he was for nandini.

"Manik , i am fine "nandini was trying to explain him but he was in his own world and immediately he reached in rest room and put her down and now she started coughing also

"No you are not fine , see now you have started coughing also , it's all my fault , we shouldn't have came here "he said sadly as he can't see her in a little pain also and nandini was constantly coughing and all this was making him even more worried for her.

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Then in no time they reached hospital and nandini was now having a bad cold and cough and little fever.

"Bhai , what happened to nandini " mukti asked worriedly , when manik walked inside , nandini was in his arm and still she was constantly coughing.

"Didu , i am fine , it's just a cold don't worry"nandini said cutely in between her cough looking at mukti , when manik laid her on bed.

"Not only cold , fever also , i am so stupid that i took her there after knowing that she could catch cold "manik blamed himself and sat beside nandini worriedly.

"Bhai , she will be fine stop nblaming yourself , it's just a cold , don't worry "Mukti said and nandini nodded her head cutely agreeing to mukti's words.

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Nandini was sitting on bed in blanket , tissue paper was kept on her lap and manik was making her drink soup and she was showing him her childish tantrums. Who can said that he was the same manik only who ordered others and today he was bearing tantrums of a girl.

"No hero , no more , you have said me that was last "nandini cried denying to drink more.

"Okay this one will be last , I promise you "he said and made her drink , she make bad face , which made him smile.

"You are looking cabir , how nandini is Changing bhai "mukti said happily , standing outside of manan room with cabir.

"I am so happy mukti , finally bhai is happy and living his life happily, before nandini , bhai always remained busy in work , hardly smile and today "cabir said looking at smiling manik.

"Nandini hai hi itni cute and sweet , kisko bhi smile karwade , seriously i am lucky to have a such a great brother and now bhabhi too "mukti said while looking at manan.

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"I will be back in 3 hours and that's mean , you are sleeping for 3 hours and i don't want to listen no , your are sleeping and that's it" he said while tugging her in blanket and she was like a baby nodded her head positively.

"Okay hero but come back in 3 hours as your heroine will gonna miss you "she said holding his hand when manik was about to left. Manik smiled hearing her words and turned toward her.

"I promise you baby , i will try to come back before 3 hours "he said and Kissed her forhead and left from there.

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Nandini was not feeling sleepy so she went toward mukti room rubbing her nose with handkerchief. Her nose had became red due to cold , she was looking more cute.

She entered inside the room and smiled seeing Alia sitting with mukti. Alia had came in good books of nandini as she helped her in escaping out of this house. Poor girl didn't know her evil intentions.

"Hello , Alia di " she happily said hugging Alia and mukti looked at them confusingly , Alia also hugged her back and gave fake smile.

"How do you know each other "mukti asked confusingly and then nandini and Alia looked at each other , Alia in gesture said nandini to be quite.

"When you was not at home mukti , i met nandini , she is so sweet "Alia said putting hand on nandini face and nandini give her smile.

"How are you sweety now "mukti asked from nandini "i am good didu but didu I want to eat some tasty food , manik is not letting me eat it , ganda sa soup pila diya "she said in crying tone and mukti smiled on her request while Alia made irritated face.

"Okay sweety but don't tell bhai about this "mukti said as she know her brother very well "didu , telling manik about this , it is like putting hand in lions den na na baba na didu i will not tell this to manik " nandini said dramatically while mukti laugh on her words. Then she went to bring some tasty food for her.

"Nandini , you remember about the promise "Alia asked and nandini gave her confusing looks " that you will not tell anyone that i had helped you in escaping out from this house" Alia asked having little fear in her eyes , she was getting scared from manik.

"Alia di , don't worry , nandini never breaks her nandu promise at any cost , i will never tell manik about this and thank you alia di you have helped me otherwise i haven't came to know about the truth of manik "nandini said trusting on Alia while Alia smile taking relief , Poor nandini .

"Nandini just wait and watch that how i will make manik again monster in your eyes "she said to herself thinking evil plan in her mind.

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"How are you baby , see i am back on time "manik said entering inside room and saw nandini was watching tv and she smile showing her teeth to him .

"Nandini i want to ask something from you "he said while sitting beside her and she nodded her head positively "who had help you in escaping from here that night " he asked and he was noticing her each and every expression.

"No one , i myself ran away from back gate , i am smart very smart Mr. malhotra and you know this very well "she said happily while manik was now not in mood of fun.

"Nandini it's enough of your bakbak , tell me who had helped you in escaping from this house that day "manik shouted angrily pulling her toward himself , holding her arms and nandini was looking at him having fear in her eyes.

"This is truth , no one helped me "she said giving pause after every word as she got scared seeing his anger.

"Nandini , please tell me truth "he again shouted pushing her away and now she started sobbing seeing his anger.

"I am saying truth , no one helped me "she said in crying tone while manik put his hand his forhead , getting irritated with her constant lies.

"Nandini.. "he called her as she fainted down in manik's arm. He immediately picking her in his arm put her on bed. He got so much worried for her.

"Stupid manik , she is like a kid , don't you get that be little calm with her , you always shout on her like a monster and how can you forget that she is ill , she need more care and you are spoiling everything "Manik's heart scolded him for his anger.

"I am sorry baby , i will never shout on you , i will try to control my anger and i will try to change myself for you , forgive me "he said cubbing her face , his each and every word clearly showing that how much he loved her. Nandini's love was not changing him , he was changing himself for nandini.

1. Howz the part ???

2. Few word for cute nandini ?

3. Few word for possessive manik and his love ?

4. What do you think , alia will do now ?

5. How do find first scene ?

Love Mehak