So happy finally the Target is complete 🥳🥳🥳🥳..

So here is the update..

Please please please do Inline comments 😁😁😁😁😁...

Let's start.....

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Vansh yells in anger, "Kabirrrr".
Vansh's blood boils and he gets uncontrollably angry. Riddhima takes her hand away from Kabir's hand..
Vansh grabs Kabir's collar in anger and his eyes turn red with rage. Riddhima gets scared seeing him like this.

V:Teri itni himmat tune humari patni ka hath pakra 🤬🤬..AJ main tujhe zinda nahi choronga..

Vansh punches Kabir hard on the face, causing him to fall to the ground. Vansh then grabs him by the collar and starts hitting him brutally....

K:vansh ruk ja ...Meri baat to sun ..

V:humein Teri koi baat nahi suni aaj TU humse nahi Bach sakta ..aik Baar to humne tujhe chor diya or wahi humari sabse bari galati thi 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬par aaj hum woh galati sudhar kar hi rahengy ..

Vansh again start beating him ..this time Kabir stop vansh hand ..

K:bas buhat hogaya 🤬🤬🤬...ab yeh dekh ..

Kabir show his and riddhima engagement pic to vansh ..
Vansh pause abruptly seeing that picture, as if he's instantly Lost his sense..Kabir gets up with a evil smirk..
Riddhima's eyes well up with tears and she can't understand what to do. Fear and despair grip her heart..

K:dekh vansh jiss riddhima ko tune apni patni banaya hai woh kabhi Meri mangetar thi .. mujhse Pyaar Karti thi woh ..meri patni bane wali thi par pata nahi kahan Sy TU beech mein agaya 😠😠😠..

Riddhima comes close to Vansh and holds his hand..

R:vansh 🥺🥺🥺 ...

Vansh jerk riddhima hand ..
Kabir smirk..

K:par dekh vansh kismat phir mujhe or riddhima ko qareeb ly aai ab Tere Liye yehi acha Hoga KY TU mere or ridd..

Kabir is unable to complete his words as his throat is being choked by vansh grabbing his neck tightly with force. Kabir can't breathe properly...vansh pin him to wall and tight his grip on his neck ..Kabir try to pull off vansh hand and panting like a fish ..

V:apni Gandi zubaan Sy humari patni ka Naam Lene ki Koshish bhi mat Karna 🤬🤬🤬...(furiously)

Kabir is almost near to lose his life when vansh leave him ..
Kabir choked badly and taking long breaths ...
Vansh angrily grabs Riddhima's hand and begins to lead her towards the room..

K:vansh to Jo bhi karly to riddhima ko mujhse dor nahi kar sakta 😂😂..woh Meri hokar hi rahegi dekh Lai

This is it for vansh ..
Vansh pushes Kabir with great force, causing Kabir to fall. Vansh picks up a rod and begins to hit Kabir with it brutally. Kabir screams in pain.. riddhima is watching all this with fear ..
Kabir also turns and attacks vansh.. the rod slips from vansh hand. They both start fighting each other....Even though they get hurt while fighting,.. but on one ready to give up and accept defeat easily. Seeing Vansh's condition, Riddhima starts crying and tries to stop him...

R:vansh please apko buhat chot lagi hai 😭😭😭😭 please ruk jaiye .. please 😭😭😭

V:(yells) Chup rahiye ...

Ganga come there and saw Kabir and vansh fighting like mad bulls ..
She stops them ..

G:oye pagal hojaye ho Tum dono ..kaise khully saand ki tarha lar Rahe ho 🤬🤬🤬🤬..

K:larai issne shuru ki thi ..main to bas issy khatam karne ki Koshish kar raha tha 🤬🤬🤬..

G:hua Kya hai Kyu lar Rahe ho 🤬🤬..

K:tumhare bety ko aaina dikha raha tha ...isski biwi .

V:Kabir 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬Agar tune agy aik or lafz bhi bola na to jaan ly laingy hum Teri 🤬🤬🤬..

G:vansh Kya hogaya hai tujhe ..

V:chup karo Tum 🤬🤬Kal subha Agar yeh admi humein iss Ghar mein Nazar agaya na to ussky anjaam ki zimedar Tum khud Hogi 🤬🤬🤬🤬..

Vansh leads toward his room ..
Riddhima follows him..

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Riddhima gets scared and stands outside the room..

Strange sounds of breaking can be heard from inside the room. After a while, when these sounds stop, riddhima enters the room scared and looks around to see that the entire room has been messed up and vansh is sitting on bed with a angry face..she glups ..

In the fight, Vansh gets hurt a lot. Riddhima feels sad seeing Vansh in that condition, but she is scared that Vansh might yell at her...
She approaches him hesitantly, fearing Vansh might get angry..

R:vansh 🥺🥺🥺🥺..

Vansh didn't said anything..
She sits in front of him..
Riddhima takes water in a bowl and cleans the wounds on Vansh's face and neck with a soft cloth..In this process vansh is just looking at her with stern face.... Tears stream down her eyes as she gets closer to his lips to clean a cut.when She brust out in tears ..

V: riddhima 😟

Vansh holds her hand. Both of them look deeply into each other's eyes, with love and pain reflecting in them. Without a moment wasted, Vansh wraps his arms around Riddhima and pulls her close into his embrace. She clings to him tighter and he caresses her back lovingly. Both of them are overwhelmed with emotion.

R:I am sorry vansh 😭😭😭😭I am really sorry 😭😭😭😭😭.. please humse naraz mat Hoon .. please 😭😭😭😭😭😭

V:shhh rona band karain..(crassing her back)

R:vansh woh Kabir 🥺🥺 ..

Vansh put his finger on her lips ..

V:shhhh humein Kuch nahi Sunna ..

R:par 🥺🥺🥺..

Vansh clears Riddhima's tears and rests his head on hers..

V:humein ap par khudse bhi zyada yaqeen hai ..hum janty hain humari riddhima kabhi Kuch galat nahi kar sakti 🥺..

Riddhima look at him in disbelief her heart starts pounding loudly..her heart clutch listing his confession..she feel angry on herself that how can she think that her vansh won't believe her ..how can she even thought that Vansh yelled at her ..just how ..

V:apko Kya laga tha koi bhi ghatiya insaan akar humein apky bare main koi bhi kahani suna dyga or hum maan jayengy kabhi nahi ..hum apni riddhima ko buhat achy sy janty hain ..woh Sirf humse Pyaar Karti hain .. Sirf humsy 🥺

She nods like a baby ..vansh smile ..

R:vansh humein laga 😭😭😭😭..

V:apko laga KY vansh Bina apki baat sune Bina apse Kuch poochy apko qasoor war samjh laingy haina 🥲🥲..

R:nahi vansh aise baat nahi hai ..hum darr gaye thy 😭😭😭ap ko khone KY darr Sy ..

V: riddhima aik pati patni ky rishty main bharosa sabse ehem hota hai yehi kaha tha na apne..to yeh baat ap kaise Bhool Gai ...Khair humein apse koi shikayat nahi🥺🥺 ..shikayat to humein khudse hai KY hum abhi tak apka aitabaar nahi Jeet paye🥲🥲 ..apky Dil Sy yeh darr nahi nikal paye KY koi bhi aera gera insaan humare rishty main darrar nahi daal sakta ..i am sorry for it riddhima..i am really sorry..😞😞😞

R:bas karain vansh humein or sharminda mat karain 😭😭😭😭😭.. please 😭😭😭...

V:hum buhat Pyaar karty hain apse riddhima or hum kabhi nahi chahyeingy koi apki taraf ankh bhi utha kar dekhy ..usski ankhein nikaal laingy hum or aaj uss ghatiya insaan ny apka hath pakar Liya or kaise kaise ghatiya ilzam laga raha tha 🤬🤬🤬 ..humara to Dil chah raha tha jaan ly lain usski par phir humein ap ka khayal agaya 😔😔..par agli Baar ussne apki taraf ankh utha kar bhi dekha na to hum apna wadaa tor daingy riddhima hum jaan ly laingy usski 🤬🤬🤬..

Riddhima shudders upon hearing Vansh's angry and painful voice..

R:vansh humne apka buhat Dil dukhaya hai humein maaf kardain 🥺🥺🥺..hum buhat Bure hain 😭😭humein apko Kabir KY bare main buhat pehle bata Dena chahye tha ..humein apse apna or Kabir ka rishta nahi chupana chahye tha 😭😭😭😭😭

Vansh cup her face..

V: please stop it 🥺🥺🥺 ..hum janty hain apne Jo bhi Kiya kissi wajha Sy hi Kiya Hoga ..or aise maafi mat mangein humein apse koi shikayat nahi 🥺(he kisses her forehead)

Riddhima is sniffing..

R:vansh hum apko sab Batana chahty hain 🥺🥺🥺..

V:iski zaroorat nahi humein yaqeen hai ap par ..hum janty hai woh Kabir jhoot bol raha hai.. woh picture woh engagement sab past hai or humein apky past mein koi interest nahi 🥺🥺🥺..

R: please Vansh hum apko sab Batana chahty hain .. please 🥺🥺🥺apko suna Hoga...

V: riddhima 😔😔..

R: please 🥺🥺..hum ab apne or apky beech koi galat fehmi ki gunjaish nahi rakhna chahty 🥺🥺..

V:thek hai Agar issy apko relief milta hai to bol dijiye ..

Riddhima tells Vansh about her past with Kabir and also reveals how Kabir has been threatening her from the past few days.

Vansh fumes in anger..

V: riddhima Agar ap humein yeh sab pehle bata deti na uss Kabir ko yeh sab karne ka moka hi na milta .. or usski itni himmat ussne apko pareshan Kiya ..ussy to hum choraingy nahi 🤬🤬🤬🤬..

R:vansh please ..Bhool jaiye sab ..hum nahi chahty ap uss ghatiya insaan KY muh lagyein 😟😟..

V: thek hai..akhri Baar Sirf apky liye 🥺🥺..

Riddhima hugs Vansh tightly and Vansh holds her tightly in his arms...both clingy to each other..

R:vansh hum buhat khush kismat hain 🥺..(snuggle in his arms)

V:humse zyada nahi 🥰🥰🥰..

R:I love you vansh..(emotionally🥺)

V: I love you too riddhima..(tighter his grip on her waist )

He soothes her face with his hand and gently places his lips on hers. Riddhima joins him and they kiss each other with love and passion.
Riddhima is able to feel Vansh's pain. She knows that her small mistake has caused Vansh a lot of trouble and has created a fear in his heart..

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Kabir is sitting on his cot in his room applying ointment on his wounds...

K:saly vansh ny buhat buri tarha peeta hai 😣😣..

Ganga enters the room furiously and pushes Kabir off the cot..
Kabir screams in pain ..

K:aiii maa😣😣😣mar gaya ..tumhare bety ny kam dhulai ki hai humari Jo Tum bhi agai ..🤬🤬Kya hai ..

G:Teri toh 🤬🤬🤬..TU ruk ..

Ganga takes off her sandals and starts to attack Kabir. Kabir tries to stop her..

K:rok jaoo 😣😣..

G:yeh Kya kardiya tune 🤬🤬🤬..mana Kiya tha na abhi Kuch nahi bolna vansh KY samne or tune jaky sari ram kahani suna di ..

K:to or Kya karta ..mujhe Jo sahi laga Maine Kiya or Tum itna gussa Kyu kar Rahi ho Tum bhi to yehi chahti thi na vansh ko riddhima ki or Meri sagai ka pata chalay 😊😊..

G:🤬🤬🤬aby akal KY ullu ..tujhe samjh Kyu nahi ata ..Kya hi ukhar Liya tune bata kar ..🤬🤬kaha tha na jab hum kaheingy tab batna ..

K:Kya ukhar Liya ..😂..dekha nahi vansh kaise aag bagola horaha tha ..ab tak to ussne riddhima ka bag bhi pack karwadiya Hoga ...zaroor buhat bari larai hui Hogi unki .😂😂...

G:riddhima ka to pata nahi par TU apna Saman bandh ly 🤬🤬..

K:Kyu main Kyu Saman bandho🙄🙄 ..

G:suna nahi tha vansh ny Kya kaha tha 🤬🤬..apni Zindagi pyaari hai to Chala ja yahan Sy ..

K:abhi nahi darling apni riddhima ko subha sath ly kar hi jaonga 😊😊..

G:Teri to 🤬🤬🤬..

K:are are Mazak kar raha tha gussa Kyu hogai 😂😂..subha tak intazar karne do na ..ap ghee main chingari daali hai to aag lagti dekh kar hi jaonga na 😂😂😂..

G:tujhe itna yaqeen kaise hai KY vansh riddhima ko chor dy ga🤨🤨 ..

K:haha Kyu KY vansh aik ghamandi insaan hai jab baat usski ana par ati hai na to woh kissi ko nahi dekhna ..poorani yaari hai sab Janta Hun ussky bare main 😈😈..

G:dekhy hain Kya Hota hai ..par subha tujhe yahan dekh kar vansh Jo bhi karega na usska hisaab humse mat mangna 🤬🤬🤬..

K:🤨🤨🤨..Kya hi karlyga ..subha to woh apni patni ki Jane ka sog mana raha Hoga 😂😂😂😂😂..

Ganga looks on 🤨🤨🤨
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Phewww 🙈🙈🙈done ..

Hope I didn't disappointed you...😕😕..

Must read..........

Some readers are saying I should right some intense talking while riansh makeover ..but I feel I couldn't be able to because it didn't match with the character of this story ..here riansh are purely in love with each other...so I don't think it's good to show them lustful towards each other's body ...
Well it's my opinion tell me yours..

Hope you like it..rate it out of 10 ..

Precap : intense make out 🌚🌚..

Target:70+votes and 30 +comments.....