Here we go...
Chpater 1: Prolouge
And we are already misspelling things.
The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright.
Ok not too bad...

"There is a prophecy!" She said. "out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."
I take it back. Yes prophecies are hard to make up but look...
As Tiger and Holly grow the Stars will come to PUT A SMACKDOWN ON THIS BOOK!!!!
Better? Lets continue :3

"Its about StarKit!" A white tom said.
They aren't even gonna consider other cats?
"Shes going to save the forest," He looked at a gold tom by BlueStar. "she has powers nobody dreamed of." Said the gold tom. "Should we tell JayFeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said BlueStar. "he needs to know."
Another cat with powers!!

She walked away from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy.
Misspelled prophecy. I will be putting that in your score.

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"In urm review" um what?
I Dub this chapter a 6/10! The spelling and grammar could use some work. Also the prophecy and huh? What's that I smell? *sniff sniff* ITS A MARY SUE!!!! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!!!