Chatter NEIN Teh Evil Tigger and holY
I SAID NO FLAMES! YOUR JUST JELOS YOUR GOING 2 HEL LJESS IS OYUR SAVER
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"Ohno its HolyLeaf!" yelled FireStra he ranned away. SandStrom wnet aftre him.
Why you running? Hollyleaf is in ThunderClan.

StarGlaem locked up. HolyLeaf was stnding their and their was anodder chat with hr.

"OMIGOSH ITS TIGGERSTAR!" she hossed. "WHTA WIL WE DO!"
LIKE I TOTALLY BELIEVE HES BACK FROM THE DEAD!!!!!!!

"we figt." saud Jayfeathre and he ran at HollyLeaf. StarGlema washed as HolyLefa locked at JayFather and kiled him with one shot.
Wow. So she MADE a Mary Sue and then she managed to take one of Erin's characters and make it a Mary Sue.

"YOU KILDED MY FTHER! she yelled and she attcked HolyLeaf. HollyPaw gut out of the way and StarPaw attaked TiggerSar.
OH NO NOT TIGGERSAR I MEAN WE ALL KNOW THAT TIGGERS ARE THE BEST!!! T-I-DOUBLE G-ER!!!!

"U killed TigerStra!" uelled FiresStar he locked happy. "You are speshil!"
No it says she attacked him. Not killed him.

StarGleam was sooo happy, she didng notse as HollyLea grabbed Firestar and took him way.
Because Hollyleaf can just grab Firestar and walk away.

"OH NO" yelled StarKit. "WE HAVE TO SAVE HIM!

a cilf hunger1!111! see im a god riter i no what thta id thx f4r the good revweiws JzzPaw && everon else WHOSE NIT A FALMER
I don't like this "cilf hunger" because it's so obvious on what's going to happen.