I call this art piece "Not Wanted in the Dark Forest"
Chapter Three The Traning Under The Star
OMGOSH GUkys im so sorry but SOMEONE glares at rainy days FLAMED ME AND I GOT REALLY HURT. OKKAY IF you dont LIKE thestor y you dont have to readit u know.
Ok guys so I looked up "flamming" and it's actually pretty serious.

Chapter Three The Traning Under The Stars

Shadowclan run from the camp. StarPaw smiled. Shed one! Noone cod hurt her family now .
I doubt they were gonna even try to hurt her family.

StarPaw!" said FireStar. "Its time we train!" I want to show you how to fight!"
Silly Firestar. She just beat Blackstar!

"Ok." Sad StarPaw happl;y. "but yo just saw I culd fight, write?" "Well, ya." said FireStar. "But I wnted tol see if that was all you new."
She's been a apprentice for less than a day. I'm pretty sure that's all she knows.

"Ok." They went to the frost togather and the other cats cleaned jp the bodies. "Ok StarPaw" said Firestar one they got their. "We'll start with how to dog."
1. THE OTHER CATS CLEANED UP JP THE BODIES? Did they kill part of Shadowclan!!!
2. I told you they were wolves.

"Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was ready for anything!
Ready for anything? Even a bad review?

"ok Ok" mewled FiresTar, lets learn how to claw an oponit.
Forgetting something? ""

"Ya." Yowled Starkit. She jumped at FireStar not Giving hiM time to attakc. "She hit his side he didn't move he was to surprise.d she clawed him and he started bledding. "wow StarPaw" he said ".Your doing awesome." "Really?" gaped StarPaw. She didn't think she was doing that god was she relly special like the porphesy meowed?
I'm pretty sure Firestar would move and attack. Surprised or not. And the prophecy meowed just sounds a little weird.

"Yes StarPaw." Snarled Firestar. "I couldnteven get away in fast enough. Only scourg was did that before.,"
Firestar snarled at Starpaw guys!

"OMGOSH REALLY?" asked StarPaw. Scourg?1? THE SCOURG? She dherad so muchj about him he was really evil and killed alot of cats. "I'M LIKE SCOURG? "I didnt mean it like that" FirePaw sad fastly. "I ment you wer a good fighter. Its really cool." At that minute he thought to himself 'Starpaws so kawaii look at her eys and her fur.
OMGOSH!!! What is Firestar saying?!?!?! Starpaw is WORSE than Scourge.

"Oh ok thanks." They trained floor awhile later StarPaw beat FireStar 8 times once she let him win to make him fel bettar and b y the last one she was alittle tired.
Not even a warrior could beat a leader 8 times.

"Hey FireStar can we hunt now." Said StarPaw. "im kinda hungry."
Wait what was that I hear? Oh it was just Firestar and Starpaw throwing the warrior code out the window! I wonder what Holly would say?

"Oh we'll if you want." Firestar was disappointed he and; starPaw had been having so much fun. So they went huntng, StarPaw messed up a couple times but FireStar said it was okaysince it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she was a littlekit and she and FireStar had snuck out together that's why he chose her as his apprentice_.
I wonder how they hid that.
1. Wouldn't someone notice a leader sneaking out of camp.
2. Firestar broke the warrior code

Later that night StarPaw locked up at the stars. She and Firestar had'd so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan.
Small clan. I bet most of them ran away because of this Mary Sue

Locking upn at the stars she turned to her best friend, JazzPaw, and said, "Do you think well ever be up there."
No. You'll totally go to the Dark Forest. And you'll TOTALLY never die! *sarcasm guys*

"Ya totally." Said JazzPaww. "I mean youll be l,eader and I'll be depudy one day well have too!"
Thunderclan is going downhill. I wonder how the other leaders are gonna react to Starstar.

"Ya." Said StarPaw smiling she loved JazzPaw NOT IN THAT WAY U SICKOS!) they were best friends. She loked up at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her head.
Yup because I thought they were gay.

REVIEW R MY LIFE
I AM REVIEWING THIS PILE OF GARBAGE!!!!

(lol u like it Jazzy I mead you as kawai as I could(