Bambi

Alright, Bambi, let's talk about it.

So I'm going to be upfront and say that with this story I don't want to rush it, nor do I want to elongate it more than it already is. Right now in the story, we are kinda a bit before the middle of the story. As we know, we are going a bit past Jeongguk's youth years and now we are entering young adulthood. I have a bit of the next chapter written, and not to say any spoilers but to better get a vision of things, both main characters are seeing someone else. They are currently going on a mission and that's the first time in a while that they have privacy together, but at the same time not since they're on a mission with everyone else.

However I kinda want that to be a turning point in the story, for the two to 'split' because of an argument of because of different views of things, I'm not sure yet.

I was thinking of years passing by, and including more of Jeongguk's character change and things he has to do. I want this to be more centric with him in the gang life, since this story is quite personal and I want to keep it faithful to that.

Hmmm.... It's like I have an idea how it goes but then again I don't. I'm debating whether ending it like how it does in Erroneous, or differently.

So all in all, I just want your perspectives on this. Be as critical as possible and don't be afraid to share your thoughts. I really want your understanding as those reading the story.

The Spawn

This story feels like it's been going on for as long as Jimin in that cube (You'd get the reference if you read Jewel ;)) So this story well, I've been stuck on it for a good minute, and it saddens me because I get such thrills whenever I read it because it's good. I have this crazy plot twist to do with it, but I think it'll be stretching the story a bit and I don't want to unnecessarily add too many plot twists. From that point on though, without the plot twists I had in mind, all I can think about is for them just to track down the Orchids leader and for the Oasis leader to handle it as a demonstration of power and things go back to how they were.

Now if you were curious about the plot twist, I don't know if I should or not, plot twist one is that Yeosang's biological parents pop up, and they were in fact the leaders of Orchids - which explains why they've been after Oasis the entire time.

Or, plot twists two, Jimin is the secret heir of Orchids, which explains why his violent tendencies, because he was trained as a kid to be an assassin, but he can't remember anything due to a traumatic experience he probably went through.

Idiosyncratic

This story I kinda have an idea on what to do for it, but I think what has me restraining from updating is the fact that I have to pay very close attention to detail, and making sure to distinguish every character well. Every character and their ability is so so so important to the story. It's giving major Subject X vibes, but more complex. I have to know where the story is going, why it is, and how each character will grow.

For this story I think what I need the most is motivation.

Why do you wish to see this story go on? What are you excited about? Or should this story possibly wait until I have a solid hold on it? Any thoughts really?

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A/N:

Moving onto the next!!

Thank you all for your insights and thoughts about this! I will need all hands on deck as much as I can. Thank you once again!

I PURPLE YOU! <33