Whoyoume critiques Fantasy, Short-story, Humour, Random (Even artbooks or books with manga/comics in them), The occasional Romance, Fanfiction (Percy Jackson, Harry Potter, Hetalia but please keep OCs to a minimum, Xingkong Club, Ouran Highschool Host Club, and Ace Attorney)

She critiques LGBT but preferably not mature. She is online the majority of her time until June--then she is only available on Fridays and Saturdays. Whoyoume accepts 1-3 requests depending on how much time she has on her hands. The chapters she will critique on will be discussed.

After payment, Whoyoume will take 1 - 1 and a half weeks to complete the request.

Payment:

- A permanent follow and then more discussion

Whoyoume thinks that marshmallows are, "Fluffy sugar formed into various shapes and sizes, sometimes they're just what you need and sometimes they're just too sweet."

Remember to comment your form into this chapter if you would like Whoyoume to critique your story and don't forget to tag her--MargarreteLian--so that she knows ^^