Hallie critiques Fantasy, Sci-fi, Teen, General, Mystery/Thriller, Vampire, Werewolf and Adventure. They are online at least once everyday and critiques both mature (with the exception of self harm/suicide) and LGBT. 

The maximum chapters that they accept is two, not including the prologue (e.g. prologue + two chapters) and only starts from the beginning. Hallie will take a total of two requests at any given time and will complete your critique within 1-2 weeks after payment. 

Payment: 

- Honest feedback on either 'Man on the Surface', 'Majik' or 'Rosalyn's Calling' 

Hallie thinks marshmallows are amazing, especially when the outside is burnt while the inside is still gooey ^^ 

Comment your form into this chapter if you would like Hallie to critique your story and don't forget to tag her--HallieTheWriter--to let her know!