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                                                                    Book Title : Incendium

                                                                            Genre : Vampire

                                                                Reviewed by Shreeimagines

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Title: 4/5 

It will indeed be unjust if I don't acknowledge the fact that the title is amazing. The word 'Incendium' is very uncommon and unfamiliar and the meaning of it seems to sit well with the theme and usually when readers find such a less known but interesting word, they tend to be automatically attracted to the book.

Cover : 4/5 

Just like the title the cover is so beautiful. It's color scheme matches so well with the plot, that is dark and mysterious. It's definitely eye-catching and quite a deserving cover for the book.

Blurb : 9/10 

The blurb definitely has all the basic characteristics of a proper blurb. It contains an intro of the story and also acquaints us with the major characters, while at the same time keeping a trail of mysteries behind which sparks the interest of the readers. So it deserves a nine.

Storyline : 8/10 

Since I haven't read Vampire Diaries so I really have no idea about how the characters are. But since it's a fanfiction, I find the plot to be admirable. Since the number of chapters is less, it's a bit difficult to get a hold of the story. But till what I read I get to understand that there are still a lot of mysteries waiting to be unveiled and it's just the trailer. 

Writing style: 8/10 

 It's simple but indeed pleasing. Especially I like the way of your presenting dark humour which is quite explicably presented in the first chapter when Arin sucks blood out of that girl. The blend of fear, brutality and humour in it makes it more interesting and you did your job well as an author.

Character Development: 7/10 

Again it's a bit hard to judge at this point of the story since I have read only first 6 chapters. But yeah Jason Cruise's character development is definitely what the story demands. I would have been disappointed if it had not been like this. He loves his mother, yet he's totally confused about her aging and other qualities. He deserves to know it all yet he never terribly misbehaves with her for keeping her in the dark. And also Thalia is such a strong woman. I love female leads like her who are independent, and badass. Definitely a fitting lead for such a story.

Actions/Emotions: 7.5/10 

It's definitely a full on back to back action story and there's a completely new thing coming up in every chapter. But I believe the descriptions could have been better. So maybe you need to work more on them.I won't say the same for emotions in this story because I believe the way you've described them is perfect for adventure genre.

Grammar and Vocabulary: 8/10 

Grammar is almost perfect. It's very hard to find a mistake there. But maybe your vocabulary may still require some improvement. It makes the story better and more interesting.

Originality/ Creativity and Innovation: 8/10

 Personal enjoyment: 8.5/10 

I enjoyed reading this one. Although it was just initial few chapters but still it captures both attention and interest of the readers. So for me it's quite dope.

Total : 72/100 

 Additional reviews: I have given all my reviews with each criteria so nothing more to say. Just keep in mind the things I pointed out. Otherwise the story is almost perfect. I look forward to reading more of it. My best wishes are with you.