chapter 6(Edited)

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Time: 8:00 pm

Cabir was sitting beside unconscious nandini with navya on other side of bed....

Manik was standing near window looking at the stars....

Neyonika and raj with nandini's parents were in living room...

Avantika was going to come in nandini's room but cabir stopped her saying that manik and nandini needs some privacy making them confuse...

They were still unaware of manik's possessive behaviour and cabir is well aware of the same...

So he asked them to take rest for sometime...

Navya felt nandini's fingers moving...

"Manik...nandini ko hosh aa raha hai"manik stiffens for a second hearing navya but again his expression turns hard and he keeps looking at stars...

Nandini slowly opens her eyes and frowns in pain holding her wrist

She blinks her eyes for few times before opening them fully...

She saw cabir and navya sitting on her either side but he was missing...

Navya makes her sit and that is when her eyes fell on him who was looking outside with no expression on his face....

"How are u feeling nandini"cabir asks in concern...

"I m fine cabir"she says but her eyes never moved from manik..

She could see his stiffened body...his clenched fist..

He was trying hard to control himself....

"Manik"she called him softly while he unclenched his fist and sighs in relief listening her voice....he craved so much to listen her this voice...

Still he did'nt looked at her...

"Manik"she again called this time with pleading look but still same response...

Cabir and navya shares a look and then nods their head in disbelief....

"Jugnu"a lone tear escape his eye but he did'nt wipe it..

Even nandini saw his tear and she cursed herself as she was the reason behind his tears..

"Mujhse baat nahi karoge.."she asks innocently making his heart wrench..he could feel the sadness in her voice..

"Gale nahi lagaoge"she asks while pearls formed in her eyes ...

Here manik's condition was no different..tears were already flowing from his eyes..

His body was shaking..voice was choking...his fist was clenching unclenching..

"Now that stars are more beautiful than your star..."she asks getting little jealous as he was continuously looking at the sky....

"Nandu..dekho amma ne tumhare liye soup bheja hai..chalo ab jaldi se pee lo"navya says trying to change the gloomy atmosphere..

Cabir sighs and gets up..

He walks towards manik and kept his hand on his shoulder..

"Manik...go..she needs u"manik jerks his hand away making nandini flinch

"Mujhe nahi peena"she says like a kid hoping any reaction from manik..

"Nandini...tumne subah se kuch nahi khaya..u have to drink this..now come on..be a good girl and have it"cabir says like a loving brother..

But nandini ignores them and stays adamant..

Manik sighs knowing that she will not have it untill he makes her drink..

He wipes his tears with his hands after controlling his emotions and takes the soup bowl from navya..

He sits beside her and starts feeding her soup silently..he was not looking in her eyes...

And here nandini was drinking soup like a obedient kid while staring at him continuosly...

After finishing her soup...he gives the bowl to navya and was about to get up but nandini did'nt let him do that...

She climbs on his lap hurriedly and hugs him tightly...

And that's it..

He lost his all control and hugs her tightly with all his might...with each passing second she could feel his grip tighten on her waist...

He hides his face in her neck and next second she felt wetness on her neck...

He was crying silently on her neck...

"I m here manik..with you.."she says breaking the hug while he just peppers kisses on her face ..

Cabir and navya smiled seeing their love...

Their love was unique..

No one can match their level of love...

It was infinite..

THEIR LOVE WAS BEYOND ALL MEASURES..

And Not everyone would be able to understand their love because for this you have to be in love...

Mad love..where no one matters..no other relation matters...what matters is the love...which crossess every limit of craziness..

"Why"he asked only one question which made her silent...

"Why taara..kyun kiya aisa...yeh step uthane se pehle kya tumne ek baar bhi mere baare main nahi socha..."he asked angrily while she just avoided the eye contact with him...

"I m asking u something...and look at me when i m talking to you"he says in possessive yet stern tone making her shiver...

"I... i was scared"she answered while stammering...

"Scared of what"he asked this time calmly as he knows that his anger can cause more damage to the situation..

"I..i don't want to lose u mani....amma...appa...they..they wanted me to marry someone else....and..and i thought..that what if they force me...main..main unhe koi chance nahi dena chahti thi....i...i was an emotional mess that time...kuch samajh nhi aa raha tha..all i was thinking about our love...about our moments which we spended in london..about you*she says all this while looking straight in his eyes* and then suddenly i don't know what got into me...i just grabbed the blade and...and..."before she could complete her sentence Manik captures her lips for a kiss which she immediately reciprocates while cabir and navya turns around seeing this..

Both were lost in the kiss that they forgot that someone else too was present there waiting for their kiss to end..

Cabir looks at navya mischievously and winks at her making her blush...

"Always remember nandini...i will never let anyone snatch you from me...bhale hi voh tumhari family ho yaa meri...i can fight with this whole damn world for you...you are the reason behind my existence...agar galti se bhi tumhe kuch ho jaata naa..then i would have first destroy this world and then would have kill myself..aage se tumne agar kabhi bhi aisa kuch karne kaa socha...then u will face this monster..joh kisi ko nahi chodega...sabko barbaad kar dunga agar kisi bhi vajah se tum mujhse dur ho gayi toh...if you are with me then i am at peace...but without you i m devil...understand"he says in serious yet dangerous tone making cabir and navya shiver while nandini was just staring at him with all love...

Devil..I m sure no one would like to face this devil...
Bacause trust me..You will regret your whole life if this devil is Awaken..

BECAUSE DEVIL HAS NO HEART...HE IS HEARTLESS...WITHOUT ANY EMOTION...

IF ANYONE DARE TO CROSS HIS PATH..THAT PERSON WILL REGRET HIS EXISTENCE HERE ON THIS EARTH..

Cabir thought to change this serious atmosphere...

"Uhhu"he clears his throat which broke manan moment....

Cabir and navya were giving them teasing look..

Manik sat on bed leaning against headrest and made nandini sit on his lap...

"What..don't give me that look...sochna bhi mat..varna i have many secrets of your stored in my head which i will blurt out to navya..do u want that Mr.Cabir Dhavan"Manik says in stern tone when he sees that cabir was about to tease them as he saw him giving them a teasing look...

"Secrets..konse secrets..cabir..don't tell me ki tumhara bahar kisike saath chakkar chal raha hai"navya asks glaring at him making him scared..

"Navya..mera bahar tumhare alava kisi ke saath chakkar nahi chal raha..isliye ye khyaali pulaav pakana band karo..."cabir says defending himself...

"Tujhe toh main baad main dekhunga bacchu"cabir thought while glaring at manik while manik just smirk in return as he know what cabir must be thinking...

"Nandini"suddenly they heard a voice...

They saw elders standing at doorstep while the voice was of avantika..

Nandini did'nt look at avantika..she just hugs manik tightly hiding her face in his neck....

Manik sighs and caress her back as he know the reason why nandini committed suicide...navya told him when nandini was unconscious...

He glares at avantika while his parents just sighs knowing his anger..

"Manik...she is elder to you..keep your eyes down"neyonika scolds him while he just turns his head other side...

"Mani...mujhe sirf tumse shaadi karni hai..amma ko bolo naa...voh..voh maan nahi rahi"nandini whispers in his ears...

Manik broke the hug and cups his face...

"Tum chinta mat karo..tumhari shaadi sirf mujhse hogi...aur koi bhi..i repeat koi bhi hume alag nahi kar payega"he says lovingly and then lastly glares at the elders....

"Nandu"avantika calls her in pleading tone but she avoids her..

"Aap log jaiye yaha se..main aapke bete se shaadi nahi kar sakti..samjhi aap..jaiye yaha se..mujhe kisi se baat nahi karni"nandini shouts at them making manik confuse..

"Nandini...tum kise jaane ko keh rahi ho"

"Inko"she points towards neyo-raj while manik frowns...

"Mom-dad..kya hai yeh sab"manik asks them while nandini stares at him in shock..

"Hawww...yeh tumhare mom dad hai...matlab inka beta tumhara bhai hua...lekin tumne toh kaha tha ki tumhara bhai already married hai"nandini asks so cutely that manik just wanted to gobble her while elders smile seeing her cuteness...

"Mom...yeh sab kya hai...what's going on..koi mujhe batayega yaha ho kya raha hai"manik asks in stern tone while avantika and harish was shocked seeing him talking like this...

That too with his parents...

This was very new for them as they are still unaware of his short tempered and monsterous behaviour..

"Haa aunty..bataiye naa kya hua hai"cabir asks this time calmly as he can sense manik's anger through his voice..and also he don't want nandini's parents to get any wrong thoughts about manik in their mind..atleats till their marriage..

Neyonika sighs and then tell them every single thing...about their childhood marriage..about their promise...

"Wow...matlab meri shaadi manik se already ho chuki hai..mani..i m so happy"she says while jumping on his lap excitedly which was not at all helping manik as he was getting aroused feeling her on him..

He controls himself and them makes nandini still while holding her shoulder...

"Mom...dad...there is something more to it right..kya chal raha hai aap logo ke dimaag main"he asks suspiciously...

Neyo and raj shares a nervous look...

"Manik beta voh"avantika was going to say something but neyonika held her hand..

"Ek min avantika..manik..dekho..abhi joh hum tumse kehne vaale hai voh dhyaan se sunna ok..tum gussa mat hona...and no impulsiveness plz.."neyo says this while harish and avantika shares a confuse look..

"Go ahead mom"he says this ignoring her previous talk...

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Precap:Shocker...death..some hard decisions taken by sunanda malhotra

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