Chapter - 54

Location - Peter Island; Forest

Kitna sukoon hai yahan. I never knew forests would be this good. Nandini remarked as they roved through the God's sun - dappled and ethereal private chapel; the Lush Forest - ambling along the soft, damp moss of the path that lay grown amidst the friable fallen leaves, inhaling the untainted, refreshing, mildewy and minty perfume of the forest and delighting in the nature's own melodies - the lullaby - like whispers of the majestic trees against the wind, the continuous yet lyrical buzzes of the bees humming in and out of the Pennyroyals, the euphonious chirps of a distant charm of finches and the swish sound of water whooshing over the rocks somewhere nearby. Manik hmmed and then smiled; seeing her play with the design on her palm formed by the sunshine filtering through the high knotted branches of trees and said, after capturing the moment in a still for a forever Kabhi apni smile ko meri aankhon se dekho - I bet you'll find something way more peaceful than this. Red leaked into her cheeks turning everything around pale in comparison; as the blood coursed into them sensitively to his compliment and not having anything to say in return; she just gave a gentle blow on his heart and smiled profusely. A crescent lit up his face at the lovely reaction of her body to his action and he said, bending close and kissing the corners of her lips Aise hi blush karogi na tum toh humein U - turn lena padega. Phir mujhe blame mat karna. Pecking back instantly on his lips; she poked him away and then replied, veering about and squinting around the area Mr. Manik Malhotra! Mujhe pata hai aapke iraadey and you know I Love them; per abhi mujhe yeh jungle explore karna hai. Ab hum kahan jaenge Mani? He securely framed his one arm around her shoulder and answered, leading her towards a slight slope Ab hum jaenge ek bohot hi interesting jagah but promise me ke you'll be careful. Rolling her eyes; she pretended to count something on her fingers for a minute; intriguing him and then chucking it; she said, giving him a look Mr. Manik Malhotra! This is the end of the worldth time that you have warned me to be careful. Ek kaam karo; Main chalna bandh kardeti hoon aur tum mujhe godi mein hi uthalo. Okaye? More than happy with the suggestion and deliberately ignoring the sarcasm; he promptly scooped her in his arms on which her jaw - dropped and shaking her head in disbelief; she folded her arms across her chest and spoke, glaring at him I was being sarcastic! Manik mujhe neeche utaaro! I am not Baby Malhotra! I am Nandini Manik Malhotra! Strong, Wise and Good Girl. Main sambhal kar hi chal rahi thi na. He smiled at her self - praise and then replied, after pecking her angry pout But for me toh you are Baby Malhotra! Grumbling harmless curses; she looked menacingly at him and before she could get more mad; he said, drawing her face close to him and sucking her lips My Jungli Billi! Itna gussa mat ho! Yeh slope mujhe thoda dangerous lagraha hai. Yeh cross karke - Main tumhe neeche utaar dunga. Okaye? Now smile. Convinced; she bobbed her head happily and gave him his prized possession; her ever so gorgeous smile.

Wow! Nandini gasped in astonishment; on climbing the slope, rounding a corner and finally descrying the elegant sight of water - distilled as pure and clear as an angel's tear - gushing over the rocks, surging down the mountain and toppling vibrantly into a pristine serenity - pool; foaming with silver lather at its fringes and lending a hallucinatory quality to the scene. Run - off water tingled the rocks as it seeped away and spilled over the gravelly bed - chiming with chinking, tickling sound that echoed as it slid; svelte and slinky; past the rocks. The cool rays of setting sun over its glassy brilliance looked like a spritz of fairy dust; creating a filmy mystique above the pool and adding to soul - swelling magic of the waterfall.

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Hey Guys! Thursday Again and I am here with the next update. Everyone was asking for some masala; so I have spiced up this update :P Don't worry already! Nothing of serious sorts. Technically; the island on which I have sent them, does not having any waterfall :P But I am a crazy lover of falls. I find them really romantic and soothing. So I have included here in this chapter :D
Not only waterfalls; I basically love every natural place and have been to many forests and jungles. I love travelling and I love nature. So based on my love only; I have tried describing the destinations. I hope you guys like it and I hope I wasn't too complicated with words.
I had literally taken a fine tooth comb and searched Google for a nice waterfall but sadly nothing matched my imagination. I hope you guys will be able to relate and please feel free to imagine any other beautiful one if you feel like.
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Chapter - 54

Location - Peter Island; Forest
Kitna sukoon hai yahan. I never knew forests would be this good. Nandini remarked as they roved through the God's sun - dappled and ethereal private chapel; the Lush Forest - ambling along the soft, damp moss of the path that lay grown amidst the friable fallen leaves, inhaling the untainted, refreshing, mildewy and minty perfume of the forest and delighting in the nature's own melodies - the lullaby - like whispers of the majestic trees against the wind, the continuous yet lyrical buzzes of the bees humming in and out of the Pennyroyals, the euphonious chirps of a distant charm of finches and the swish sound of water whooshing over the rocks somewhere nearby. Manik hmmed and then smiled; seeing her play with the design on her palm formed by the sunshine filtering through the high knotted branches of trees and said, after capturing the moment in a still for a forever Kabhi apni smile ko meri aankhon se dekho - I bet you'll find something way more peaceful than this. Red leaked into her cheeks turning everything around pale in comparison; as the blood coursed into them sensitively to his compliment and not having anything to say in return; she just gave a gentle blow on his heart and smiled profusely. A crescent lit up his face at the lovely reaction of her body to his action and he said, bending close and kissing the corners of her lips Aise hi blush karogi na tum toh humein U - turn lena padega. Phir mujhe blame mat karna. Pecking back instantly on his lips; she poked him away and then replied, veering about and squinting around the area Mr. Manik Malhotra! Mujhe pata hai aapke iraadey and you know I Love them; per abhi mujhe yeh jungle explore karna hai. Ab hum kahan jaenge Mani? He securely framed his one arm around her shoulder and answered, leading her towards a slight slope Ab hum jaenge ek bohot hi interesting jagah but promise me ke you'll be careful. Rolling her eyes; she pretended to count something on her fingers for a minute; intriguing him and then chucking it; she said, giving him a look Mr. Manik Malhotra! This is the end of the worldth time that you have warned me to be careful. Ek kaam karo; Main chalna bandh kardeti hoon aur tum mujhe godi mein hi uthalo. Okaye? More than happy with the suggestion and deliberately ignoring the sarcasm; he promptly scooped her in his arms on which her jaw - dropped and shaking her head in disbelief; she folded her arms across her chest and spoke, glaring at him I was being sarcastic! Manik mujhe neeche utaaro! I am not Baby Malhotra! I am Nandini Manik Malhotra! Strong, Wise and Good Girl. Main sambhal kar hi chal rahi thi na. He smiled at her self - praise and then replied, after pecking her angry pout But for me toh you are Baby Malhotra! Grumbling harmless curses; she looked menacingly at him and before she could get more mad; he said, drawing her face close to him and sucking her lips My Jungli Billi! Itna gussa mat ho! Yeh slope mujhe thoda dangerous lagraha hai. Yeh cross karke - Main tumhe neeche utaar dunga. Okaye? Now smile. Convinced; she bobbed her head happily and gave him his prized possession; her ever so gorgeous smile.

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Wow! Nandini gasped in astonishment; on climbing the slope, rounding a corner and finally descrying the elegant sight of water - distilled as pure and clear as an angel's tear - gushing over the rocks, surging down the mountain and toppling vibrantly into a pristine serenity - pool; foaming with silver lather at its fringes and lending a hallucinatory quality to the scene. Run - off water tingled the rocks as it seeped away and spilled over the gravelly bed - chiming with chinking, tickling sound that echoed as it slid; svelte and slinky; past the rocks. The cool rays of setting sun over its glassy brilliance looked like a spritz of fairy dust; creating a filmy mystique above the pool and adding to soul - swelling magic of the waterfall.

Waterfall:

Absolutely enchanted and captivated; as it was her first encounter with a natural Waterfall unlike Manik; she took her own time to drink the beauty of the place with her mouth agape and beholding her instead of the breathtaking vista; for his eyes couldn't see anything beyond her; he enclosed her in a back hug and asked, keeping his chin on her shoulder I know its a stupid question but did you like it? Thrilled like a child; she nodded vigorously with a widest grin and then replied, still admiring the place Its So so so beautiful Manik. I can just stay here for a forever. Then pausing for a second; she turned her face sideways to give his lips a light brush with hers and rejoined, pushing herself more into him But only with You. Just flashing a warm smile in return; he took a step forward, sat down on the grass cocooning her from behind with their legs dipped in the lukewarm water and then she asked, entwining his hands with hers But Manik! How do you know about this waterfall? Tum toh yahan pehle kabhi nahi aye na. He nuzzled his face in her hair and answered or rather mumbled lazily, visibly affected by the tranquil environment Haan woh Manager se baat ki thi maine. Tab usne bataya tha. Also influenced by the Mother Nature's serene calmness like him; she just hmmed and spoke nothing further - as the silence seemed much more comfortable and her heart; along with his; reveled in pleasure of the mellifluous hush.

Minutes later; Manik pulled himself out of his own heaven - and asked, his words cutting through the spell of quietude in muted tones; after dropping a kiss on her shoulder Kya hua Baby? Why so silent? But the reply never came and instead; a bliss etched across his face until his lips could no longer stretch on finding her fast asleep like a baby in its first throes of slumber - her lashes curtaining her doe eyes from all the bright and dim lights around and her breathing deep and relaxed. Not a twitch; not a spasm - barely any movement of her chest rising and falling with each intake of air; such was the intensity of her oblivion. Mesmerized and basking in her soothing soft breaths and her peaceful smile; he gently laid her down with her head in his lap and warming his heart all the more; her tiny hands encircled his waist and she burrowed her face into his blazer. His fingers grazed her hair relentlessly just the way his eyes never stopped clapping on her innocent face with awe and wonder as No matter how beguiling the world gets; she would always be the only one pleasing his senses and mind aesthetically and regardless of the age, hour and phase of Life; he could never get enough of gazing at her.

Oh My God! I am So Sorry Manik! Pata nahi kaise I slept. Tumne mujhe uthaya kiun nahi? Nandini freaked out as soon as she woke up after taking an approximate 45 minutes catnap. Shushing her; Manik pulled her back in his lap and replied, easing the pucker formed between her brows Its Okay Baba! You don't need to be Sorry. We've walked so much. Baby thak gaya mera. She let out an exasperated sigh with a nod and then said, patting her rumbling stomach and making a babyish face Baby thak bhi gaya aur bhook bhi lagi hai. Kuch chahiye khaney ke liye. Only thing he felt like doing after her cutest conveyance of hunger was to kiss her loudly and keep kissing till the end of time but containing this urge for a while and getting a little roguish with her; he teased, eyeing her mischievously Oh! Aisa hai. Hmm. Per yahan toh kuch ni milega. Aur maine kuch pack bhi nahi kiya. Ab tumhara hi toh genius idea tha yeh - all of a sudden hiking karne ka; woh bhi bina kisi planning ke. Understanding the taunt; she stared at him with narrowed eyes and to ignite the annoyance that had just started to build up in her, he added, tongue - in cheek And moreover Nandu; don't you think now a days you're getting hungry very often. Haan! Matlab dekho na - hum abhi abhi toh lunch karke aye they. Aur tumhe phirse bhook lagrahi hai. His words did ruffle the angry bird's feathers; that too instantly; much to his benefit and being totally irked; she jumped out of his lap and snapped; shooting daggers at him while he suppressed his smile You're such a Monster Manik. I hate You! And FYI; its your baby asking for food so many times; not me. Huh! Monster! Then giving him a last scowl; she grabbed her water bottle from his side and stomping her feet - moved steps away; swilling down the water furiously and slumped on the ground facing her back to him. He knew he had rub up the wrong way; and he had done it on purpose - solely because he Loved her puffed up; red cheeks and the manaofying session that would eventually follow - gave him a special delight altogether.

Having already planned on how to mollify his honeybunch; he stealthily fished out a parcel that he had got packed in the restaurant from his backpack and asked, after crawling up to her and seating at her elbow Baby Gussha? Like a cross two - year old with ballooned up cheeks; she stayed tight - lipped and inched away from him. Smiling at her antic; he crept closer and again she edged away and once more nearing her; he quickly caged her in his arms and said, poking his index fingers in her pumped up cheeks Hmm! So Baby is Gussha. Isi liye toh mere cheeks ese shin-chan ke jese phool gaye hain. Per koi baat nahi. Mujhe pata hai baby ka gussa kese door karna hai. Saying so; he pulled out a delicate hand-made flower tiara from behind; showed it to her - on which her lips twitched in a small smile - and then fondly set it on her hair saying Jab tum sorahi thi na tab banaya tha maine. I hope tumhe accha laga. All her displeasure had evaporated into thin air and letting go of the dumbness; she pulled an adorable face and said, or to be more precise, complained You are really a Monster Manik! Pehle tum mujhe satatey ho aur phir naraz bhi honey ni dete ho. Jhat se mana lete ho. This is not done. I hate You! Very affectionately; he gave a smacker on her pursed lips and then replied, pinching her nose But I Love You! I was just kidding. Per agar tumhe bura laga toh I am Sorry. Now please Smile! He entreated and instantaneously; a bonny curve settled on her lips and she said, touching the tiara on her head I Love You Too! And this is so pretty. He just smiled and then pulled out another similar but a longer band made of flowers - seeing which she furrowed her brows in confusion and asked Yeh kis liye hai Mani? Bending down to her tum; he tied the band around her waist and answered, after planting a kiss along with it Yeh wala tiara is for my Princess. Mamma ko toh pretty laga and I know ke aapko bhi laga hoga. And you know a secret? Aap bhi bohot pretty lagrahe ho iske saath. Mamma se bhi zyada. Nandini was totally bowled over by his this gesture and had fallen for him; once and all over again. Her eyes moistened with tears; as his word strung the chord of her heart and letting them trickle down her cheeks, she yanked him closer and just fused her lips with his. A rush of heat started in his chest and slowly spread throughout his body, reaching every last limb as his lips molded into the kiss with passion and felt her emotions. Breathless; he parted but didn't break the contact and kept giving her lips tugs and little kisses with his for a considerable time and then suddenly jerking him closer, she said, locking him in her arms tightly Our baby hasn't come in this world yet and you already have the title of being the bestest Daddy. She smiled; feeling his lips curl against her skin and rejoined, after dropping a kiss on his neck Oh Manik! I Love You So Much. With a kiss on her temple; he muttered an 'I Love You Too!' and then pulling away; he held the parcel before her and said, wiping away her tears Ab yeh emotional baatein bandh karte hai - already my baby cried so much today. No more tears. Bhook lagi thi na - have this jaldi se. Your recent favorite - masala noodles. (P.S - This isn't the masala I was talking about :P) She opened her mouth to say something but before she could; he fed her a forkful of noodles and added, while she munched Before you accuse me of lying; let me defend myself. I was missing your this gussa and huffy cheeks. Isliye thoda sa jhoot bola. Tumhe sataney ke liye. Pressing her lips together; she first made him also eat and then twisted his ear lightly on which he did his usual drama of getting hurt - only to lighten up the mood and make her laugh heartily.

With loads of playful banters; they completed the meal and while Manik had gone to dump the parcel; Nandini casually zipped open the backpack to search for something sweet only to get surprised by the entire household that was crammed into the backpack. For a moment she wondered how so many things fit in such a small bag at first place but then chucked it; as she was well versed with the fact that the one who had done the packing; Her Manik; could do anything. Giggling at her own thought and weaving an evil idea in her mind; she began checking all the things he had carried and at the same - was and wasn't amazed to find everything that directly and indirectly concerns her. Kya Dhoondrahi ho Baby? You wan't something? Manik asked - startling Nandini - plopping down beside her and she replied, simpering at him Haan! Mujhe toh bas ek chocolate chahiye tha per see na Manik; iss bag mein toh pura ka pura food factory - in fact - sara ghar ka samaan hai. How magical na? He had easily caught the naughty impish glint in her eyes and sussing out that it was his turn to get ribbed; he just smugged sheepishly and then she asked, in a genuine way Why did you get all these things Manik? This Umbrella! Meri Jacket? Yeh bedsheet? Matchbox? And itna sara khana? Kya zaroorat thi in sab ki? Having the perfect answers to her questions; he sat upright and stated his point of view Zaroorat thi! Arey! Agar achanak baarish hogayi toh? Umbrella aur jacket hona chahiye na. And unfortunately agar hum jungle mein kho gaye toh? Khana chahiye hoga aur raat bitaney ke liye kuch toh hona chahiye. Main tumhe iss grass per thodi na soney desakta hoon. Isliye bedsheet. Aur blanket nahi fit horahi thi - isliye matchbox. We can light up fire na. Chuckling; she slapped his forehead mildly and replied, in a puckish manner Seriously Manik? Baarish? At least tum weather forecast toh check karlete. Aur hum ek private island mein hai! Pata hai yeh island bohot bada hai - per hum jungle ke chotey part me aye hai. Remember! You have only chosen. We cannot get 'Lost' She ended; quoting the word lost with her fingers and faking dejection, he said, turning the corners of his lips down Haan Haan! Udalo mazakh hamari care ka. Tsk! Koi value hi nahi rahi hamare pyaar ki ab. Pushing him on the ground; she got over him and replied, tracing the contours of his face with her nose Bohot drama karne lagey ho aap aaj kal Mr. Malhotra. Bohot tedhey hogaye ho. But jo bhi ho - ho to aap mere hi aur humesha mere rahogey. Aapke pyaar ki value hum dikhaney baithgaye agar toh aapki dhadkanein ap se sambhal nahi payengi. In one swift move; he flipped their position and then said, coming impossible close to her face Aapke aaney ke baad - kuch wese bhi kahan hamare kabu mein raha madam! Sab kuch toh aap control me lekar baithi ho. They looked at each other for a moment and then burst out laughing as indeed! - both have gone too cheesy and filmy and after a good amount of merry laughter; Nandini asked, snaking her arms around his neck Accha Manik! Can we swim in this pool? Its so inviting na. Moving his head sideways in a No; he answered, tucking an errant strand of hair behind her ear It is inviting but hum abhi swim nahi karsakte. Maine pucha tha Manager se toh usne kaha ke aaj water currents are too speedy and its not safe. Aur humare paas costumes; towels bhi toh nahi hai. Isliye abhi nahi. Do teen din baad phir ayenge hum yahan aur tab karenge hopefully. Okaye? She readily assented and then straightening himself up and helping her for the same - he stuffed all the things back in the bag and said, intertwining her hand with his Dusk has begun to crack. Andhera honey laga hai. Chalein? Gesticulating a Yes with a blink; she reposed her head on his shoulder and then calling the trek over - they exited the place.

The journey back to the Villa on foot was undoubtedly a pleasant and joyful along with the necessary pinch of romance until Manik; when they were just a half - meter away from Falcon's nest; felt thirsty and propped up against a random tree to sip on some water. Sad to relate; Both Manik and Nandini failed to observe that the particular tree had those blood Sucking worms - known as leeches - harbored on its trunk and the moment Manik's back made contact with the bole - the parasites(leeches) found their way into his shirt and stuck to his lower back. Manik flinched on feeling the sudden piercing pain but immediately shrugged it off guessing it as some insect bite even though the sting was way more excruciating and also because they were in the middle of nowhere and he didn't want Nandini to get agitated. Somehow dealing with the pricking and also hiding it from her at the same time; he managed to walk till inside the house and as he sensed the smarting get unbearable; he held her face in gentle hands and said, in a low voice Pareshaan mat hona zyada Nandini. Main theek hoon. And before Nandini could properly register anything; he collapsed on the bed, losing his consciousness as per the grave consequence of leech bite. Horror struck and also unnerved; she gathered him in her arms; yelping his name; and patted his cheeks - deliriously asking him to wake up. Drenched in tears and utterly bewildered; she began checking him for the cause of his blackout - any injury or a wound - and was all the more spooked on espying the blood seeping out from his back. She wailed in agony and her sobbing became hysterical; as she peeled the blazer and shirt off his body and saw three leeches preying on his back and making it bleed intensely. Reacting reflexively; she grasped one of the leech and wrested it in an attempt to detach it from his skin but according to its character - the organism dug his suckers deeper into his skin; rigidifying its grip and Manik squealed owing to the sharp tingle. Realizing that she is being impulsive and also that she needs to act wisely - she took a deep breath to compose herself and then it struck her that the only convenient way; in the absence of medical assistance; of getting rid of the leech is by using fire. But the only thought of subjecting his skin to fire - made not only her body shudder but also made her soul tremble. She tried working out some other way but nothing was knocking brains into her and so; reluctantly giving in to the only treatment; she hastened into the kitchen and came back as fast as she could after collecting some ice - cubes; cold water, a cloth and a candle. Lighting up the candle; she held the flame close to his skin and tore the leeches off his skin one by one; on which he shrieked painfully; and then threw the creepy creatures out of the house. His each cry was shredding her heart to threads and every next drop of his blood was murdering her - she couldn't bear even a minutest cut on his skin and here; she herself was giving him burns. Her fingers were badly burnt but she paid no heed and putting all her leftover energy - she lugged him to the room and laid him down on his stomach. Weeping silently all the time; she cleaned his injuries and rubbed some ice over to mitigate the pain. Then running back into the kitchen; she prepared a potent remedial paste at warp speed and applied it on his cuts; ever so softly and with all her care. When the ointment dried; she tenderly kissed on his back and his lips took the shape of a sweet smile; smile of relief but She didn't even blink for once and was too scared to sleep and hence spent the entire night in kissing him; loving him and looking vacantly at him with endless tears.

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Hey Guys! Thursday Again and I am here with the next update. Everyone was asking for some masala; so I have spiced up this update :P Don't worry already! Nothing of serious sorts. Technically; the island on which I have sent them, does not having any waterfall :P But I am a crazy lover of falls. I find them really romantic and soothing. So I have included here in this chapter :D
Not only waterfalls; I basically love every natural place and have been to many forests and jungles. I love travelling and I love nature. So based on my love only; I have tried describing the destinations. I hope you guys like it and I hope I wasn't too complicated with words.
I had literally taken a fine tooth comb and searched Google for a nice waterfall but sadly nothing matched my imagination. I hope you guys will be able to relate and please feel free to imagine any other beautiful one if you feel like.
Do read; hit like and definitely comment. Don't break my heart please! Do show up. :D

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Chapter - 54

Location - Peter Island; Forest
Kitna sukoon hai yahan. I never knew forests would be this good. Nandini remarked as they roved through the God's sun - dappled and ethereal private chapel; the Lush Forest - ambling along the soft, damp moss of the path that lay grown amidst the friable fallen leaves, inhaling the untainted, refreshing, mildewy and minty perfume of the forest and delighting in the nature's own melodies - the lullaby - like whispers of the majestic trees against the wind, the continuous yet lyrical buzzes of the bees humming in and out of the Pennyroyals, the euphonious chirps of a distant charm of finches and the swish sound of water whooshing over the rocks somewhere nearby. Manik hmmed and then smiled; seeing her play with the design on her palm formed by the sunshine filtering through the high knotted branches of trees and said, after capturing the moment in a still for a forever Kabhi apni smile ko meri aankhon se dekho - I bet you'll find something way more peaceful than this. Red leaked into her cheeks turning everything around pale in comparison; as the blood coursed into them sensitively to his compliment and not having anything to say in return; she just gave a gentle blow on his heart and smiled profusely. A crescent lit up his face at the lovely reaction of her body to his action and he said, bending close and kissing the corners of her lips Aise hi blush karogi na tum toh humein U - turn lena padega. Phir mujhe blame mat karna. Pecking back instantly on his lips; she poked him away and then replied, veering about and squinting around the area Mr. Manik Malhotra! Mujhe pata hai aapke iraadey and you know I Love them; per abhi mujhe yeh jungle explore karna hai. Ab hum kahan jaenge Mani? He securely framed his one arm around her shoulder and answered, leading her towards a slight slope Ab hum jaenge ek bohot hi interesting jagah but promise me ke you'll be careful. Rolling her eyes; she pretended to count something on her fingers for a minute; intriguing him and then chucking it; she said, giving him a look Mr. Manik Malhotra! This is the end of the worldth time that you have warned me to be careful. Ek kaam karo; Main chalna bandh kardeti hoon aur tum mujhe godi mein hi uthalo. Okaye? More than happy with the suggestion and deliberately ignoring the sarcasm; he promptly scooped her in his arms on which her jaw - dropped and shaking her head in disbelief; she folded her arms across her chest and spoke, glaring at him I was being sarcastic! Manik mujhe neeche utaaro! I am not Baby Malhotra! I am Nandini Manik Malhotra! Strong, Wise and Good Girl. Main sambhal kar hi chal rahi thi na. He smiled at her self - praise and then replied, after pecking her angry pout But for me toh you are Baby Malhotra! Grumbling harmless curses; she looked menacingly at him and before she could get more mad; he said, drawing her face close to him and sucking her lips My Jungli Billi! Itna gussa mat ho! Yeh slope mujhe thoda dangerous lagraha hai. Yeh cross karke - Main tumhe neeche utaar dunga. Okaye? Now smile. Convinced; she bobbed her head happily and gave him his prized possession; her ever so gorgeous smile.

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Wow! Nandini gasped in astonishment; on climbing the slope, rounding a corner and finally descrying the elegant sight of water - distilled as pure and clear as an angel's tear - gushing over the rocks, surging down the mountain and toppling vibrantly into a pristine serenity - pool; foaming with silver lather at its fringes and lending a hallucinatory quality to the scene. Run - off water tingled the rocks as it seeped away and spilled over the gravelly bed - chiming with chinking, tickling sound that echoed as it slid; svelte and slinky; past the rocks. The cool rays of setting sun over its glassy brilliance looked like a spritz of fairy dust; creating a filmy mystique above the pool and adding to soul - swelling magic of the waterfall.

Waterfall:

Absolutely enchanted and captivated; as it was her first encounter with a natural Waterfall unlike Manik; she took her own time to drink the beauty of the place with her mouth agape and beholding her instead of the breathtaking vista; for his eyes couldn't see anything beyond her; he enclosed her in a back hug and asked, keeping his chin on her shoulder I know its a stupid question but did you like it? Thrilled like a child; she nodded vigorously with a widest grin and then replied, still admiring the place Its So so so beautiful Manik. I can just stay here for a forever. Then pausing for a second; she turned her face sideways to give his lips a light brush with hers and rejoined, pushing herself more into him But only with You. Just flashing a warm smile in return; he took a step forward, sat down on the grass cocooning her from behind with their legs dipped in the lukewarm water and then she asked, entwining his hands with hers But Manik! How do you know about this waterfall? Tum toh yahan pehle kabhi nahi aye na. He nuzzled his face in her hair and answered or rather mumbled lazily, visibly affected by the tranquil environment Haan woh Manager se baat ki thi maine. Tab usne bataya tha. Also influenced by the Mother Nature's serene calmness like him; she just hmmed and spoke nothing further - as the silence seemed much more comfortable and her heart; along with his; reveled in pleasure of the mellifluous hush.

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Minutes later; Manik pulled himself out of his own heaven - and asked, his words cutting through the spell of quietude in muted tones; after dropping a kiss on her shoulder Kya hua Baby? Why so silent? But the reply never came and instead; a bliss etched across his face until his lips could no longer stretch on finding her fast asleep like a baby in its first throes of slumber - her lashes curtaining her doe eyes from all the bright and dim lights around and her breathing deep and relaxed. Not a twitch; not a spasm - barely any movement of her chest rising and falling with each intake of air; such was the intensity of her oblivion. Mesmerized and basking in her soothing soft breaths and her peaceful smile; he gently laid her down with her head in his lap and warming his heart all the more; her tiny hands encircled his waist and she burrowed her face into his blazer. His fingers grazed her hair relentlessly just the way his eyes never stopped clapping on her innocent face with awe and wonder as No matter how beguiling the world gets; she would always be the only one pleasing his senses and mind aesthetically and regardless of the age, hour and phase of Life; he could never get enough of gazing at her.

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Oh My God! I am So Sorry Manik! Pata nahi kaise I slept. Tumne mujhe uthaya kiun nahi? Nandini freaked out as soon as she woke up after taking an approximate 45 minutes catnap. Shushing her; Manik pulled her back in his lap and replied, easing the pucker formed between her brows Its Okay Baba! You don't need to be Sorry. We've walked so much. Baby thak gaya mera. She let out an exasperated sigh with a nod and then said, patting her rumbling stomach and making a babyish face Baby thak bhi gaya aur bhook bhi lagi hai. Kuch chahiye khaney ke liye. Only thing he felt like doing after her cutest conveyance of hunger was to kiss her loudly and keep kissing till the end of time but containing this urge for a while and getting a little roguish with her; he teased, eyeing her mischievously Oh! Aisa hai. Hmm. Per yahan toh kuch ni milega. Aur maine kuch pack bhi nahi kiya. Ab tumhara hi toh genius idea tha yeh - all of a sudden hiking karne ka; woh bhi bina kisi planning ke. Understanding the taunt; she stared at him with narrowed eyes and to ignite the annoyance that had just started to build up in her, he added, tongue - in cheek And moreover Nandu; don't you think now a days you're getting hungry very often. Haan! Matlab dekho na - hum abhi abhi toh lunch karke aye they. Aur tumhe phirse bhook lagrahi hai. His words did ruffle the angry bird's feathers; that too instantly; much to his benefit and being totally irked; she jumped out of his lap and snapped; shooting daggers at him while he suppressed his smile You're such a Monster Manik. I hate You! And FYI; its your baby asking for food so many times; not me. Huh! Monster! Then giving him a last scowl; she grabbed her water bottle from his side and stomping her feet - moved steps away; swilling down the water furiously and slumped on the ground facing her back to him. He knew he had rub up the wrong way; and he had done it on purpose - solely because he Loved her puffed up; red cheeks and the manaofying session that would eventually follow - gave him a special delight altogether.

Flower Tiara:

Having already planned on how to mollify his honeybunch; he stealthily fished out a parcel that he had got packed in the restaurant from his backpack and asked, after crawling up to her and seating at her elbow Baby Gussha? Like a cross two - year old with ballooned up cheeks; she stayed tight - lipped and inched away from him. Smiling at her antic; he crept closer and again she edged away and once more nearing her; he quickly caged her in his arms and said, poking his index fingers in her pumped up cheeks Hmm! So Baby is Gussha. Isi liye toh mere cheeks ese shin-chan ke jese phool gaye hain. Per koi baat nahi. Mujhe pata hai baby ka gussa kese door karna hai. Saying so; he pulled out a delicate hand-made flower tiara from behind; showed it to her - on which her lips twitched in a small smile - and then fondly set it on her hair saying Jab tum sorahi thi na tab banaya tha maine. I hope tumhe accha laga. All her displeasure had evaporated into thin air and letting go of the dumbness; she pulled an adorable face and said, or to be more precise, complained You are really a Monster Manik! Pehle tum mujhe satatey ho aur phir naraz bhi honey ni dete ho. Jhat se mana lete ho. This is not done. I hate You! Very affectionately; he gave a smacker on her pursed lips and then replied, pinching her nose But I Love You! I was just kidding. Per agar tumhe bura laga toh I am Sorry. Now please Smile! He entreated and instantaneously; a bonny curve settled on her lips and she said, touching the tiara on her head I Love You Too! And this is so pretty. He just smiled and then pulled out another similar but a longer band made of flowers - seeing which she furrowed her brows in confusion and asked Yeh kis liye hai Mani? Bending down to her tum; he tied the band around her waist and answered, after planting a kiss along with it Yeh wala tiara is for my Princess. Mamma ko toh pretty laga and I know ke aapko bhi laga hoga. And you know a secret? Aap bhi bohot pretty lagrahe ho iske saath. Mamma se bhi zyada. Nandini was totally bowled over by his this gesture and had fallen for him; once and all over again. Her eyes moistened with tears; as his word strung the chord of her heart and letting them trickle down her cheeks, she yanked him closer and just fused her lips with his. A rush of heat started in his chest and slowly spread throughout his body, reaching every last limb as his lips molded into the kiss with passion and felt her emotions. Breathless; he parted but didn't break the contact and kept giving her lips tugs and little kisses with his for a considerable time and then suddenly jerking him closer, she said, locking him in her arms tightly Our baby hasn't come in this world yet and you already have the title of being the bestest Daddy. She smiled; feeling his lips curl against her skin and rejoined, after dropping a kiss on his neck Oh Manik! I Love You So Much. With a kiss on her temple; he muttered an 'I Love You Too!' and then pulling away; he held the parcel before her and said, wiping away her tears Ab yeh emotional baatein bandh karte hai - already my baby cried so much today. No more tears. Bhook lagi thi na - have this jaldi se. Your recent favorite - masala noodles. (P.S - This isn't the masala I was talking about :P) She opened her mouth to say something but before she could; he fed her a forkful of noodles and added, while she munched Before you accuse me of lying; let me defend myself. I was missing your this gussa and huffy cheeks. Isliye thoda sa jhoot bola. Tumhe sataney ke liye. Pressing her lips together; she first made him also eat and then twisted his ear lightly on which he did his usual drama of getting hurt - only to lighten up the mood and make her laugh heartily.


With loads of playful banters; they completed the meal and while Manik had gone to dump the parcel; Nandini casually zipped open the backpack to search for something sweet only to get surprised by the entire household that was crammed into the backpack. For a moment she wondered how so many things fit in such a small bag at first place but then chucked it; as she was well versed with the fact that the one who had done the packing; Her Manik; could do anything. Giggling at her own thought and weaving an evil idea in her mind; she began checking all the things he had carried and at the same - was and wasn't amazed to find everything that directly and indirectly concerns her. Kya Dhoondrahi ho Baby? You wan't something? Manik asked - startling Nandini - plopping down beside her and she replied, simpering at him Haan! Mujhe toh bas ek chocolate chahiye tha per see na Manik; iss bag mein toh pura ka pura food factory - in fact - sara ghar ka samaan hai. How magical na? He had easily caught the naughty impish glint in her eyes and sussing out that it was his turn to get ribbed; he just smugged sheepishly and then she asked, in a genuine way Why did you get all these things Manik? This Umbrella! Meri Jacket? Yeh bedsheet? Matchbox? And itna sara khana? Kya zaroorat thi in sab ki? Having the perfect answers to her questions; he sat upright and stated his point of view Zaroorat thi! Arey! Agar achanak baarish hogayi toh? Umbrella aur jacket hona chahiye na. And unfortunately agar hum jungle mein kho gaye toh? Khana chahiye hoga aur raat bitaney ke liye kuch toh hona chahiye. Main tumhe iss grass per thodi na soney desakta hoon. Isliye bedsheet. Aur blanket nahi fit horahi thi - isliye matchbox. We can light up fire na. Chuckling; she slapped his forehead mildly and replied, in a puckish manner Seriously Manik? Baarish? At least tum weather forecast toh check karlete. Aur hum ek private island mein hai! Pata hai yeh island bohot bada hai - per hum jungle ke chotey part me aye hai. Remember! You have only chosen. We cannot get 'Lost' She ended; quoting the word lost with her fingers and faking dejection, he said, turning the corners of his lips down Haan Haan! Udalo mazakh hamari care ka. Tsk! Koi value hi nahi rahi hamare pyaar ki ab. Pushing him on the ground; she got over him and replied, tracing the contours of his face with her nose Bohot drama karne lagey ho aap aaj kal Mr. Malhotra. Bohot tedhey hogaye ho. But jo bhi ho - ho to aap mere hi aur humesha mere rahogey. Aapke pyaar ki value hum dikhaney baithgaye agar toh aapki dhadkanein ap se sambhal nahi payengi. In one swift move; he flipped their position and then said, coming impossible close to her face Aapke aaney ke baad - kuch wese bhi kahan hamare kabu mein raha madam! Sab kuch toh aap control me lekar baithi ho. They looked at each other for a moment and then burst out laughing as indeed! - both have gone too cheesy and filmy and after a good amount of merry laughter; Nandini asked, snaking her arms around his neck Accha Manik! Can we swim in this pool? Its so inviting na. Moving his head sideways in a No; he answered, tucking an errant strand of hair behind her ear It is inviting but hum abhi swim nahi karsakte. Maine pucha tha Manager se toh usne kaha ke aaj water currents are too speedy and its not safe. Aur humare paas costumes; towels bhi toh nahi hai. Isliye abhi nahi. Do teen din baad phir ayenge hum yahan aur tab karenge hopefully. Okaye? She readily assented and then straightening himself up and helping her for the same - he stuffed all the things back in the bag and said, intertwining her hand with his Dusk has begun to crack. Andhera honey laga hai. Chalein? Gesticulating a Yes with a blink; she reposed her head on his shoulder and then calling the trek over - they exited the place.

The journey back to the Villa on foot was undoubtedly a pleasant and joyful along with the necessary pinch of romance until Manik; when they were just a half - meter away from Falcon's nest; felt thirsty and propped up against a random tree to sip on some water. Sad to relate; Both Manik and Nandini failed to observe that the particular tree had those blood Sucking worms - known as leeches - harbored on its trunk and the moment Manik's back made contact with the bole - the parasites(leeches) found their way into his shirt and stuck to his lower back. Manik flinched on feeling the sudden piercing pain but immediately shrugged it off guessing it as some insect bite even though the sting was way more excruciating and also because they were in the middle of nowhere and he didn't want Nandini to get agitated. Somehow dealing with the pricking and also hiding it from her at the same time; he managed to walk till inside the house and as he sensed the smarting get unbearable; he held her face in gentle hands and said, in a low voice Pareshaan mat hona zyada Nandini. Main theek hoon. And before Nandini could properly register anything; he collapsed on the bed, losing his consciousness as per the grave consequence of leech bite. Horror struck and also unnerved; she gathered him in her arms; yelping his name; and patted his cheeks - deliriously asking him to wake up. Drenched in tears and utterly bewildered; she began checking him for the cause of his blackout - any injury or a wound - and was all the more spooked on espying the blood seeping out from his back. She wailed in agony and her sobbing became hysterical; as she peeled the blazer and shirt off his body and saw three leeches preying on his back and making it bleed intensely. Reacting reflexively; she grasped one of the leech and wrested it in an attempt to detach it from his skin but according to its character - the organism dug his suckers deeper into his skin; rigidifying its grip and Manik squealed owing to the sharp tingle. Realizing that she is being impulsive and also that she needs to act wisely - she took a deep breath to compose herself and then it struck her that the only convenient way; in the absence of medical assistance; of getting rid of the leech is by using fire. But the only thought of subjecting his skin to fire - made not only her body shudder but also made her soul tremble. She tried working out some other way but nothing was knocking brains into her and so; reluctantly giving in to the only treatment; she hastened into the kitchen and came back as fast as she could after collecting some ice - cubes; cold water, a cloth and a candle. Lighting up the candle; she held the flame close to his skin and tore the leeches off his skin one by one; on which he shrieked painfully; and then threw the creepy creatures out of the house. His each cry was shredding her heart to threads and every next drop of his blood was murdering her - she couldn't bear even a minutest cut on his skin and here; she herself was giving him burns. Her fingers were badly burnt but she paid no heed and putting all her leftover energy - she lugged him to the room and laid him down on his stomach. Weeping silently all the time; she cleaned his injuries and rubbed some ice over to mitigate the pain. Then running back into the kitchen; she prepared a potent remedial paste at warp speed and applied it on his cuts; ever so softly and with all her care. When the ointment dried; she tenderly kissed on his back and his lips took the shape of a sweet smile; smile of relief but She didn't even blink for once and was too scared to sleep and hence spent the entire night in kissing him; loving him and looking vacantly at him with endless tears.

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On regaining his senses; somewhere at midnight; Manik slowly opened his eyes and smiled; on seeing her sitting stiff beside and praying; her eyes closed and hands folded. Struggling with a heavy head and blurry vision; he stirred and hissed on feeling the twinge in his back and thats when everything dawned upon him. He recollected all that happened until he passed out and the lines of tension and toil on her forehead and the crow's feet round her eyes; bespoke that whatever followed was discomforting and hellish for her. Worried to the moon and back for her already; he took her name in an undertone and on hearing it; she shot open her eyes and he assured, brushing away her tears Don't worry Baby! Main theek hoon. Mindfully; she enfolded her in his arms and just hmmed; and savvying her state - he held her close and provided his much needed warmth. Keeping his fresh wounds in mind; she pulled apart and after a lot of humming and hawing; he enquired about what happened and she gave him the low down; emotionally and skimming her fingers on his back. Signaling her with eyes to not cry; he raised his hand to pluck the pearls from her eyes but as his hand touched her cheek which was highly feverish; his own eyes brimmed and tension peaked within him comprehending that she had got sick out of fear. Disregarding the pangs; he abruptly sat upright and exclaimed oh shit! Baby tumhe toh ten bukhar hai.

To be continued...

For those who asked me to put the dialogues in bold here u go I hope they r fine now....N mumbai wala who all are going to muharat? At juhu?