I've done it again. I filled up the book with too many storylines. Most are necessary, because we're starting with characters who didn't know each other before.

To try and help with lessening the load for you, I've decided to go on a break before we get to Agoraville. You can reread parts (and I actually recommend this, or atleast rereading the training sessions again!) or let what you've previously read sink in, if that makes sense?

The break won't happen yet, as we've still got a few storylines to get through!

An important question—do you think the story is too packed? I feel like it's packed, but the development for the trainees isn't there yet. I'm really sorry about this.

DoodleYeet

LeMystical-Puffle

ruesbennett

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