this is story my best friend and I are writing. Its a work in progress. Let me know what you think of it so far.XD -Mrs.King

My name is Lo, short for Lofn, but that's because it sounds like a damn loaf of bread. I've been hunting a buck for a week. I was a peasant in the land of Asgard. My father's words crept into my mind. 'Don't be caught after nightfall. Especially in the village because the gods are searching Concubines'. The village was a horrible place but everyone else there forgot about it due to the fact all they cared about was worshiping the 'Gods'. I would give anything to have the riches they have and still, they want more!

I was considered somewhat an outcast. I was the only female who could hunt like the men, better than some actually. I had to. My so called mother abandoned my father and I after she bore me. My father isn't able to care for himself anymore. That left it up to me to keep us both alive. And since I cant sell myself in my fathers brothel. It makes it even harder to make money. Thus I am hunting. I save some for our food and I sell the rest.

A twig snapped and I turned my head. The buck, right. I put my bow to my quiver and raised my arm. I was about to let go when the great beast paused and looked up. He seemed to be staring directly at me, but I knew that was impossible from where I was hiding he looked frightened and on edge as if he knew what was coming. But he didn't move. I didn't want to kill him, but I let go. There was a silence as the arrow shot through the trees and then finally making a soft thud as it went through the heart of the buck and then the sounds returned. The buck was dead and I headed towards my kill.

I slit the throat at the jugular and watched the blood pour out. It was a gruesome process but it was necessary to preserve the meat. After all of the blood was drained, I skinned and butchered it. I packed the meat and headed home.

I heard the music from the brothel. I walked in and one of the girls walked up to me. "Lo, Youre back!"

"Wheres my father?"

"The bar"

"Hello father"

"Lo! You catch anything?"

"A buck."

I handed some of the meat to him. "Do you want me to go sell the rest?"

"Its dark outside"

"Father, I will be fine. I will not take long"

"Fine. Be back soon"

I headed outside. It was to quiet. I headed to the market square. I was selling my meat and I heard the village clock strike. Screams came out of nowhere. I heard horse hooves.

"The guards! They're here! Hide you're daughters!" One man screamed as he ran by. Oh hell. I was caught in the situation my father warned me about. I looked around for an escape. I found one. A roof top. I began to climb up the vines around it. My foot got caught and I fell. Before I could get up, a foot pressed against my stomach keeping me down.

"Hello love. Going somewhere?"

"Not with you" I spat.

"A feisty one eh? Sorry love, you have no choice in the matter" Then my world went black.

Loki's Pov

"I don't see why father rounds the women up like cattle. Though theres not much difference. I can have anyone I wish. In fact, I had one last night and the night before that. Though I suppose it does save a trip. I want a challenge though. No woman has said no to me nor will they. I guess that's the price of being a god." I said to Thor.

"You're horrible brother"

"At least im getting laid. Ive never seen you get any action since....well ive never seen you get any action at all"

"My sexual conquests should not be of any interest to you brother. And for you're information, ive had many a intimate moments"

"With you and you're hand."

"Loki....i....i would never touch myself! How dare you suggest that!"

"Why? I do. When I get tired of not being satisfied, at least I know Ill get the job done"

"I do not wish to discuss this anymore"

I heard struggling.

"That sounds like its coming from the womens room" Thor said.

I shrugged. "Maybe one of the guards is doing something he shouldn't. Not my problem."

A scream sounded out and Thor ran towards it. I sighed and followed. When I came to where he was, he was frozen in place. I looked ahead and saw ten men pulling one woman off of one guard. Her bosoms were half exposed and bodacious. In fact, I saw the reason Thor had frozen. When they finally pulled her off, her hard breathing wasn't helping the matter any. She had long dark brown curly hair. She had rage in her big blue eyes. She was slightly shorter than I was and had a slender figure. She had skin as pale as marble. Her lips were plump and light pink.

My gaze turned toward the guard. He was on the ground, tears were falling down his face causing me to laugh.

Her eyes shot towards me. "What the hell is so funny?"

"A woman beating a mans ass to the point of tears. That takes talent"

"Ive done worse than that" She said nodding her head at the sobbing man. Thor and I both laughed at that.

"Let her go and go deal with the other women" Thor told the guards and the walked away. Thor walked up to her. "What is you're name?"

"That's of no concern to you"

"Actually it seems you are a concubine. So you'll be here for quite a long time. So again what is youre name?"

"When did you grow a pair, Thor?" I asked him.

"Shut your mouth Loki"

"Lo"

"Lo?"

"My name is Lo. I thought you asked my name"

"Oh, youre feisty." I told her. She ignored me.

"Welcome to our kingdom Lo" Thor told her. Seems like brother has taken a liking to her.

"What kind of name is Lo?" I asked her.

"My name"

"Listen you pompous ass twit. I asked you a question." I grabbed her neck and thrust her against the wall. I just wanted to see what she would do.

"Get. Youre. Flithy. Hands. Off. Me. Unless you want to end up like that guard." She attempted to push me back. I smirked at that.

"Oh that's right. Youre a god. Which makes you think youre better than everyone else"

"Oh, I am better than everyone else"

"Only in youre eyes. Im sure even youre own brother agrees with me" My amusement turned into hate and we glared each other down.

"Brother, let her go." I did and walked away.   

Lo's Pov

That bastard, that unbelievable conniving bastard! How dare he test my patience, clearly that guard was a display of my capability to express my anger, yet he still felt the need to try my temper. Gods are so full of their own arrogance. Even the one next to me, Thor, who had acted the most civil out of the pair was still an arrogant fool. He looked at me for a while and I looked at him, the fool. He came a little closer before I gave him a look that basically said "take one more step and I will kill you." He ran his hand through his hair, brimming with confidence.

"Why are you still here, don't you have somewhere to be instead of gawking like a damned fool?!" thor just chuckled.

"On the contrary I am where I am supposed to be but you are not. Guards! Take her back to the others" He exclaimed before walking away.

Thor's Pov

I wanted her. I would get her.

Loki's Pov

I thrust harder as the girl underneath me moaned louder. I released my load into her and pulled out.

"Leave" I told her. She obeyed. I sighed. That didn't work. None of them were....dominate enough. I did all the work. I wanted someone who just as challenging as me. Just as rough.

Lo's Pov

Its been almost a week. Thor has been trying to get my attention. Loki and I are always sending each other hateful glares and when we get near each other we were at each others throats. Tonight was a party of some sorts. For the gods to meet the concubines. Maybe even get some into bed. I was in a red revealing dress that was laced with black. I loathed this. I just wanted to go home.

The only thing that could make this night worse was the bastard. Speak of the devil and the devil shall appear.

"I must say you fit in with the other tonight"

"Don't compare me to them"

"Why? That's what you are now" I almost hit him when arms pulled me back.

"Calm down love"

"Let go of me Thor" He did and I headed where the other women were. We were led into a ball room. I grabbed a bottle of something and headed to a corner. The only way I was getting through this night was my dear friend liquor. Im not sure how long went by but I made my way out of the room. I had no idea where I was going. I tripped and just stayed on the floor. I would probably end up with Thor. As his wife or just his whore, I didn't know.

"Hes just not my type" I slurred aloud.

"Whos not?"

"Go away. I do not like you"

"The feelings mutual. Would you like to get off the floor?"

"No."

"So you don't like Thor?"

"No. Hes attractive but no"

"I would get over it. He wants you. You don't have a say"

"He would never satisfy me"

"Who would then?"

"Certainly not you"

"Would you bet you're life on that?"

"No. I would bet my life on being the better than anyone you've ever had"

"I doubt that. You would be as good as a dead whore" I looked over at him with hate. He was sitting beside me with a smirk. I punched him in the face and got up.

"How dare you hit me? Im a god. I rule you" He hissed and I felt a hand grip my arm hard. I turned around and he slapped me across the face.

"Rot in hell Loki" I spat and he threw me against the wall. I flinched.

"I hate you"

"Not as much as I hate you." He stepped closer to hit me again and I pushed off the wall. I tripped on my dress and I fell on him. My lips fell on his. I pushed him back. Disgusted I wanted more.

"Get out of my sight before I hurt you" He hissed.

"Hurt me then because im not leaving" I slid back down to the floor.

He yanked me back up. "Ill make you a deal. If I satisfy you, you have to be my whore even if you end up with Thor. If you are better than anyone ive had, you're free to go"

I thought about it. I hated him and I was a virgin. I knew some tricks though thanks to my friends at the brothel.

"Im a virgin" I told him.

"Even better"

"For you" I spat and he smirked.

"Fine." I agree.

He pushed me against the wall, this time his body against mine. I knew we were both drunk or this would never be happing. We still hated each other. His lips were back on mine. They were rough. I had never kissed anyone before but I had watched it enough. I let my hand make its down to his area. I grabbed it and he moaned. I took the chance and slipped my tongue inside his mouth. His hands travelled up my dress. I suppressed a moan when he grabbed my thighs roughly.

He lifted me off the ground and wrapped my legs around him. Our tongues battled each other. He still hasn't made me moan yet. I yelped when I was thrown in the air. I sighed when I landed on a soft bed, he chuckled. I looked at him and almost moaned. For a bastard he was gorgeous. He had taken his shirt off and was working on his pants. When they dropped my eyes widened. How was that going to fit in me?

"Ill take it slow...at first"

He grabbed my ankles and pulled me to the edge of the bed. He pulled my shoes off and helped me get my dress off. He began kissing and biting my shoulders. I shivered. When he bit a certain spot, I moaned.

"Finally" He whispered.

He pushed me back on the bed. He crawled on top of me and grabbed my waist. He lifted me up and made his way to the head of the bed. He set me down and attacked my neck again. I grabbed his hair roughly and pulled his lips back to mine. He pulled apart and kissed down to my breasts. He took one in his mouth and I moaned loudly. I thrust up and when I felt his hard lower region, I gulped. He moaned softly.

"You're body is perfect" I heard him say as he traveled south. He left kisses all over my stomach and inner thighs. His hands kept going down. I moaned and one finger entered me. That wasnt so terrible. My nails were digging into his arm. He added another. That one hurt a bit. After I bit, I was moaning and writhing with need. He added another and the process repeated.

"Loki" I hissed.

"Lo"

"I can not take this anymore." I all but begged. He saw the look in my eyes. I never noticed how blue his were. He climbed back up and I wrapped my legs around him. He pressed his lips to mine before pushing in. I cried out but it was silenced by his lips. I felt tears roll down my face.

Just like before even though it took longer, the pain went away and this time was replaced with a unknown pleasure. I thrust down and we both moaned. He began thrusting into me. Taking it slow like he said. I didn't want slow.

"Faster" His eyes widened but he listened. I was in pure ecstasy. I pushed him off enough so I could flip us over. A look of surprise filled his eyes. I was honestly surprised with myself. I moved myself up and then back down. I threw my head back and moaned. I felt his hands on my hips. He helped me lift myself.

He began thrusting up to meet my thrusts down. That had us both moaning. He flipped us back over. He thrust harder and his hands gripped my thighs roughly. I was sure that was going to leave bruises. His hands left my thighs and he put one on either side of my head, propping himself up. It let him go deeper inside of me. I moaned and needed something to hold on too. I wrapped my arms around his back. When he hit a certain spot, I moaned louder than ever. I dug my nails in his back.

"Harder!" He listened. I felt something happen. I felt my body shaking and I moaned loudly and dug my nails harder in him. I felt him release inside of me before falling on me. Our breathing was heavy.

"So who won?" He asked still out of breath.

"Was I the best?"

"Were you satisfied?"

"Yes" We answered at the same time.

"Ill guess we will have to have a tie breaker"

"Ill do whatever you say as long as you send money to my father"

"Fair enough"

He kissed me before rolling off and pulling me into his chest. I quickly fell asleep.

"Lo.....Lo!"

"Go away" I moaned. I was so tired and sore.

"You might want to get up before the other women realize you are gone" My eyes snapped open and everything from last night came flooding in. I looked over and saw a naked Loki.

"Oh hell. I really did go to bed with you"

"Thank you" His voice was dripping with sarcasm.

"I did not mean I disliked it. I still hate you though."

"The feelings mutual. The sun has not risen."

"I do not care if any one finds out I am to tired"

"I care. You said you would do whatever I say as long as I send your father money. Did you not?"

"Fine." I growled before getting up. I winced in pain as soon as I stood on my feet. I looked around for my clothes.

"Your clothes are ruined, love."

He handed me a shirt. I had not noticed he ripped my clothes last night.

"Come here" I followed where his voice was coming from. He showed me a bath.

"I do not need-"

"You are covered in blood" I looked down and saw he was right. I sighed and stepped in the water. It was hot and I could fall back asleep. Instead my mind went through images of last night. I was sore but I did not care. I opened my eyes. He had left the room. Good, I told myself. Avoid him as much as possible. If you need the comfort of a man, find someone else, Thor even. Anyone was better than him, even though you made a deal with him, he is bad news.

"Do you mind?" I looked up and saw he was standing in front of the bath. I shook my head. Stupid! My body was thinking different than my brain was.

"I usually can not get you to shut up" I rolled my eyes. If he would just keep his mouth closed, he would not get on my nerves. I stood up to leave. He grabbed my hand and turned me towards him.

"Let go of me" I hissed.

"You have not cleaned yourself yet." He looked like he was studying something. On my body.

I looked down and saw what he was looking at. Bruises. I knew that would happen. His eyes traveled up and stopped at mine. I was blushing slightly. No one has ever looked at my body. I was not thinking about that last night. Truth be told, I was thinking but one thing last night. Now, I was embarrassed.

I snapped myself out of whatever I was feeling and pulled my hand from his grasp. I sat back down and began to cleanse myself. I turned my back towards him so I would not be tempted. He was to beautiful for his own good. He was a hateful, manipulative bastard. I hated him from the moment I met him. That feeling would never change. But even I could not deny, he was the best looking in all of Asgard. I knew most girls liked Thor. He had a wonderful body. He had the better personality. He was next in line for the throne and he was a warrior. And through all that, he was so full of himself.

I was pulled out of my thoughts by lips trailing across my back. "You are tense." He muttered against my skin.

"I am fine. Leave me alone" His hands went around to my chest. He ran them over my stomach and my breath caught.

"I do not think you want me to"

"Yes. I do" His hands cupped my breasts. He lightly rubbed the peaks and squeezed. I let out a soft moan. I pushed my back against his chest. He pulled me back to where he was sitting. My legs were thrown across his knees. I was sitting on his lap, my back still towards him. He had my legs spread so wide, If someone walked in they would see everything I owned.

His hands made their way down. I moaned when the touched my clitoris. It felt like electric blots where spreading through my body. I tried to turn around but he would not let me. He continued to pleasure me with his hands until it became torture. I needed something more. I was whimpering with need. I was so close.  Then he stopped. I growled.

"Easy love"

"Then give me what I want" I hissed. He let go of me and I quickly turned around. I slammed my lips to his and moaned at the contact.

I wound my fingers through his hair. His were on my buttocks. I slid onto him and hissed in pain. He pushed me back a little and began touching me again. My breathing grew louder. The pain turned to pleasure quickly.

"Mmm...Harder" I moaned. He stood up and I could not help but move against him.

"If you do not stop that" He snapped. I used my strength and pushed us down. He glared at me since he landed on the ground and I was on top of me. I smirked and moved up and down. He flipped us over and thrust in hard. I was whimpering and moaning. I felt my nails digging into his back again. I cried out as I finished.

I felt him come inside me and he pulled out.

"You are going to have to be more quiet." I rolled my eyes as I tried to catch my breath.

He picked me up and we were in the water again. After we had cleaned up, again, he helped me sneak back to the room. The other women were still asleep. I grabbed a dress and hurried back out.

He helped me tie it. "I expect you in my room tonight after the others are asleep" I nodded and without thinking, I pressed our lips together. He froze. I pulled back and frowned. Then I realized what I did.

"I apologize" I curtsied and he smirked. I glared at him before walking. I was forced to do that since he was a god. I found myself out side in the gardens.

"Lo?"

"Hello Thor"

"Why are you up so early? Did I not hear women were supposed to sleep long for beauty?" I bit my tongue.

"She is already beautiful brother" Oh the wonderful brother duo.

"Loki" Thor greeted him.

"Can I have no peace?" I muttered.

"I am glad to see you Lo. I was wondering if you would like to spend the day with me?" Thor asked. My eyes flashed to Loki. He smirked and shrugged. Bastard. Of course he was not going to help me. I glared with hate.

"Or did you have plans with my brother?" Loki shot me a look.

"I did not"

"You may choose. My brother or myself"

Loki sent the same look and then nodded towards Thor glaring. I knew what it meant. I better choose Thor.

"Well you are better than your brother." I told Thor before standing up. Thor chuckled. Loki had already angered me. He knew I disliked Thor. Yes, I hated him but at least we could do something fun. Thor made me want to throw myself off a cliff.

After six agonizing hours of hearing Thor go on about himself. It was time to eat. Thor insisted on me eating with him. I wondered if there was a knife there I could end it all with.

I stayed quiet throughout the meal. I ate only because it was the best food I have had in my whole life. Loki was shooting daggers at me and was sending them right back.

"So is she who you want as your wife?" Odin asked Thor.

"I am not sure yet father" Please do not pick me.

After dinner Thor walked me to the room.

"I do fancy you Lo. I know you will not feel the same yet. I will try my best though" He leaned down to kiss me and I kissed his cheek instead. I quickly went inside and sighed in relief.

It was not long before the others were sound asleep. I quietly slipped out in just my gown. It took me awhile to get to Loki's room. I knocked and the door flew open to reveal a fuming Loki. He yanked me inside and slammed the door. Before I could get a word out he began talking.

"So Thor is better than me. I know you hate me and I hate you, believe me. I also know that you hate being around Thor. You know he wants to make you his. You despise him, He only talks about himself, am I wrong? So how is he better than me? I have always lived in his shadows, yet I have never said anything." I stayed quiet. I felt sympathy for him.

"What are you going to do when he makes you become his wife? What are you going to tell him when he finds out you are not pure?" The sympathy was gone.

"You are the one who made me go with him!"

"You could have just gone. You did not have to make it seem you liked him better. You just made him think he has a chance"

"He is better than you!" I yelled. He grew quiet until he moved towards me. He ripped my gown off and threw me against the wall.

"So he is better than me? Hmm" He took his clothes off and stepped closer to me. I stayed quiet. He grabbed my legs and threw them around his waist. He slammed in me and I gasped. I held onto his shoulder as he pounded in harder with each thrust.

I was moaning like one of the girls from the brothel. I felt him slow down.

"P-please do not stop" I begged.

He picked up speed, even harder than before. I was on the verge of screaming from pleasure.

"Is he better than me now?" I had forgot about how we started this. I think I had said Thor was better than him.

Loki's Pov

I saw red when she said my brother was better than me. I wanted to show her, he was not. He could never have her moaning and writhing like this. I just know it. Thor is to gentle and would only want to satisfy himself anyways.

"I asked if he was better than me now?" I snapped. She looked lost. I thrust hard and she cried out in pain.

"ANSWER ME!" I yelled.

"Yes. Gods yes. Please do not stop" I smirked and continued thrusting in her. She screamed as she finished. I carried her to my bed and laid her down.

I closed my eyes and sat down. My brother was going to make Lo his. I knew it. He gets everything he want. I moaned when I felt something wet on my manhood. I snapped my eyes open and saw she had wrapped her mouth around it. She swirled her tongue around. I pulled her hair involuntary when she  began sucking. When her tongue flicked over the tip I came with a groan. I looked at her disgusted face as she swallowed. She was lucky I did not thrust in her mouth. I leaned down and kissed her. I knew even if Thor married her, it would be me who see came to for pleasure. I smirked at the thought and pulled her on top of me.

"Ready for more?" I whispered. She nodded eagerly