Name:
Loonpaw

Gender:
She-cat

Appearance:
Loonpaw is a short-furred tuxedo, has large paws, long whiskers, and clear, grayish amber eyes.

Personality:
Positive traits: thoughtful, intelligent, has a kind heart others aren't aware of, and strategic in battle
Negative traits: gets tongue-tied easily, sometimes dishonest, so shy she appears emotionless, and cunning
Neutral traits: prefers thinking over talking, curious, and has a great love of trees

Clan:
CherryClan

Rank:
Apprentice

Relations:
Mentor: Thistlefrost
Father: Cedarmask
Mother: Willowstar
Siblings: None

Backstory:
Loonpaw grew up in CherryClan as an only child with no littermates. She was never considered a pretty cat and didn't bother to make many friends. The only friends she did love and enjoy were trees, and she felt they listened to her and loved them for who she was. Loonpaw still lives in CherryClan, and is an excellent climber.

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~~Rating~~
9/10

~~Notes~~
I absolutely adore this character. I love Loonpaw's three-dimensional personality, and the tuft of unkept fur was a nice touch to her appearance! I totally related to her, but that's just me, I guess. ;) Loonpaw's love of trees provided a unique trait that really separates her from ordinary OCs. Something that could've been added:
I'd have liked to see what kind of relationship(s) she has with her parents, and how she is treated as a leader's kit, and possibly if that has any contribution to her personality? I think that's pretty much it! Loonpaw's a well rounded character, good job. :)

Thanks to Jedi_4_Ever

Here's the version w/out the tag: