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{So this shot starts with the scene from Naamkarann when whole Khanna family doubted Avni with Ali...😒😑....But obviously with some changes....😏😉}

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"ANANYA"

The whole house echoed with the voice making Ali jerk apart from a half conscious Avni who was laying on the couch.Bcz of the sudden jerk the phn which was in the side table fells down.

Bebe:What is all this Ananya...?? (in disbelief)

Avni tries to get up but she is too weak to do that.

Shweta:Mera Tillu waha mehnat se kam kar raha hai aur yaha yeh ladki iss Ali ke sath glucharre uda rahi hai

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Prakash:Shweta jii ye aap kaisi baat kar rahi hai

Shweta:Aap to kuch buliye hi maat Khanna sahab

Avni:Mummy jii aap galat samajh rahi hai aisa ku............(she stumbled back while Ali holds her)

Shweta:Bas aur kuch nahi sunna mujhe chii chii dekho to abhi bhi kaise gale par rahi hai ye behaya ladki (disgustingly)

Ali:Aunty jii Bebe ek bar sun to lijiye aaplog jaisa soch rahe hai wais..................

Shweta:Chup ekdum chup aur nikal tu mere ghar se (she kicks Ali out)

Bebe:Ananya baataugi kya ho raha tha ye saab kuch aur tum to pregnant hona...??

Avni:Nahi bebe wo....................

Shweta:Ek min kahi yeh baccha mera Tillu ka na hoke uss Ali ka to nahi....zara si bhi sharam nahi ayi aise karte huye Neil ko dhoka dete huye uss Ali ke sath........................

Avni:ENOUGH MUMMY-JII (shouts)

Shweta:Chillao maat Avni chillana mujhe bhi ata hai,,pata nahi kaise sambhalega Neil khudko jab usse yeh saab pata chalega

Riya:Aunty jii plz don't say anything to Avni,,uski isme koi galati nahi hai woh kya hai na Avni & Ali bachpan se dost hai to inn dono mein itni nazdikiyaa toh lazmi hai na (acting)

Avni:Riya yeh tum........................(shockingly)

Riya(interrupting):It's ok Avni,,Neil samajh jayega haa usse thoda takleef hoga but main usse sambhal lungi

Avni:Just shut up Riya......U r no one to speak here (gritting)

Bebe:Kya ho raha hai koi mujhe samjhayega aur yeh Avni....Tum dono Ananya ko Avni kyu bula rahe ho..??

Shweta: Because this ladki is Avni Bebe

Bebe:Kya.....??

Shweta:Jii haa bebe yeh ladki Avni hai Ashish aur Ayesha ki nazayaz beti,,sabko laga yeh 15 saal pehle maar chuki thi par nahi maari aur ab yeh apna pehchan chupake ayi hai aur dhoke se mere Tillu se shadi karliya jabki usski shadi Riya se hone wali thi (she said glaring at Avni while Avni was numb to react anything)

Prakash:Shweta jii abhi yeh baate karne ka waqt nahi hai aap..............

Bebe:Tillu ki shadi Riya se..yeh Avni......

Avni:Bebe dekhiye aap gala...................

Bebe:CHUP (Avni flinched)..ekdum chup mujhe tujhse yeh ummid nahi thi Anany.......huhh (she turns her face)

Avni:Bebe plz listen to m...................................

Shweta:Kya sunayegi huh kaise dhoka diya wo ya koi dusra natak dusra jhuth bolna hai

Avni:Mummy jii..........................(Shweta shows her palm)....Khabardar agar mujhe Mummy-jii bola toh (giving a murderous look)

Avni:Aaplog pehle suniye to meri baat Neil ko.........................

Bebe(coldly):Nikal ja (Avni looks at her shocked),,,nikal ja iss ghar se Neil ke ane se pehle..Itna bada dhoka deneke baad tujhe koi haq nahi hai iss ghar mein rehne ki ya Neil se milne ki

Prakash:Bebe aap yeh kya bol rahi hai Ana...Avni iss ghar ki bahu hai Neil ki patni hai woh

Shweta:Aur issne hi mere Tillu ko dhoka diya ek bar nahi do bar,,pehle dhoke se shadi kiya phir ab apni pehchan chupaya nazayaz hone ka sach chupaya (Avni was already not stable & this word now hits her hard)

Avni:Bohut hogaya aap log aise na...............

Riya:Bebe ne kya kaha suna nahi tumne niklo yaha se (Shweta nods)

Avni:Main kahi nahi jane wali jab tak Neil nahi ata aur tum hoti kon ho mujhe yeh bolne wali

Shweta:Aise nahi manegi yeh ladki

Saying she grabs Avni by her arm & drags her while Avni kept pleading but none listen to her Prakash also tried to stop but Bebe didn't let him...............

Shweta yanks Avni out of the door but she dumped with something...Oh not something but someone's hard chest before she could touch the floor two strong arms hold her firmly yet softly preventing her from falling..........................

Avni slowly looks up only to meet with a pair of brown orbs which held utmost concern & care for her while hers held tears of pain

Avni(whispers):Ne..Neil

Neil:Avni...kya huya...??U were told to take rest na...??(looking at Shweta)..Mom why did u push her like this,,she is sick can't u see.....

Shweta:Neil beta tujhe nahi pata yeh ek dhokebaz nazayaz ladki hai (with disgust)

Holding his shirt in her fist she buried her face in his chest shedding tears listening this while Neil was still registering the words

Prakash:Shweta jii plz thoda chup rahiye aap bechari ki pehle se hi tabiyat thik nahi hai

Riya:Nahi Uncle yeh tabiyat kharap hone ki natak kar rahi hogi,,After all we caught her red-handed with Ali (smirking)

Neil:Avni baccha u ok na (ignoring them he cups her cheek),,Why r u looking pale hmm,,what happen tell me Avi......(his voice held care,concern,calmness & love)

Everyone else were shocked seeing him this calm even after revealing the truth of her identity as per their opinion & more shocked listening him calling her as 'Avni' that's too normally in fact ignoring all of them

Bebe:Tillu tujhe pata tha ki yeh Ananya nahi Avni hai..........??

Neil(taking a deep breath):Haa bebe I knew it bu...........

Shweta:Aur iss ladki ne phir tujhe apna besahara hone ka natak dikhaya hoga to tune taras khake kuch nahi kaha hoga,, ehsaan kar diya hoga ispe right...........

Avni looks at him with hurt filled eyes while tears were pouring out continuously & this made Neil so mad that he was ready to murder someone

Neil:Mom bas kijiye isse pehle main kuch aisa keh du ya kar du jo baad mein regret ho(gritting)

Shweta:Tu pagal hogaya hai Tillu,,tu iss nazayaz ladki ke liye apni Maa se aise baat karega

Neil:STOP IT MOM,,Kya yeh nazayaz ladki laga rakha hai

Bebe:Thik hi to bol rahi hai Shweta,,tu khud hi baata kabhi aise baat kiya tune apne Maa se par ab kar raha hai na iss ladki ke liye

Neil:Iss ladki ka ek naam hai AVNI aur haan kar raha hun aise baat kyuki Mom galat hai aur jo galat hai wo galat hai Bebe

Bebe:Aur jo issne kiya hai uska kya jo galatiyaan issne kiya hai uska kya

Neil:What do u mean....??(with narrowed eyes)

Shweta:Tillu yeh ladki ne sirf dhoke se shadi hi nahi balki apni pehchan bhi chupaya hai dhoka diya hai isne Ananya banke jabki yeh wo nazayaz Avni hai aur sirf itna hi nahi yeh ladki ka Ali ke sath affair bhi chal raha hai...She has sle.................

Neil:MOM (he shouts on the top of his lungs)...Zuban sambhal ke baat kijiye don't forget she is my wife warna main yeh bhul jaunga ki aap meri Maa hai (gritting)

Bebe:Tu abhi bhi isska hi support kar raha hai Neil............She has cheated u with Ali humne khud apne akhon se dekha hai aaj,,,pata nahi yeh baccha bhi tera hai ki nahi (with a disgusting look)

Neil:Bebe...............I didn't expect this from u (in disbelief)

Neil looks down at Avni who was now taking lumpy breath,,she was stumbling as she is already sick and their excuses were now too much to take

Neil:Sorry Baccha u called me so many times but I wasn't able to pick & DD told me tha................

Shweta:Tu kuch bhi bol Neil aaj main tera nahi sunne wali main ek Maa hoke apne bacche ki zindagi kharap nahi kar sakti aur jab tak yeh ladki tere zindagi mein rahegi tab tak tu khush nahi reh sakta yeh ek nazayaz hai ek manhus hai jiski bhi pas jayegi sirf bura hi layegi...........

Saying this she moves towards Avni who was in Neil's arms totally numb while before Neil could do something but before that Shweta yanks Avni from him pushing her further out & Avni didn't protest as Shweta's words reminded her of Dayawanti's words and she was now ready to accept that...Yes this is the truth of her life,,she is a bed omen,,she can't love someone nor can be loved by someone..............

So she just lets Shweta do whatever she wanted but how can anyone do wrong with her when there is a specific someone who has bowed to protect her,,to save her all the time,,from all the evils or monster of her life and for saving her he can go to any extent,,,he can go against anyone even if it's his own family............Neil catches her before she could stumble and fall giving a death glare at his mother...

Neil(hugging her):Avi tum thik ho...Tumhe kahi lagi to nahi na...??(lookig at them)Problem kya hai aap logo ki huh

Bebe:Problem humari nahi iss ladki ki hai Tillu tu kyu nahi samajh raha hai

Neil:Kya samjho main...What should I understand (shouting)

Riya:Neil Avni is cheating on u with Ali,,she is having an affair wi......................

Neil:SHUT UP....JUST SHUT UP (all flinched) Who r u to say this...I SAID WHO THE HELL R U (his eyes r now bloodshot red with anger) Aur kya keh rahi thi aap mom about Ali and all..........

Avni:Ne....Neil (whispers merely falling backwards making Neil immediately snap at her softening his eyes)

Neil:Avi kya huya hmm,,bolo tumhe accha nahi lag raha hai kya,,chalo andar chalo u need rest Baccha....Come

He was taking her inside when Bebe stops them

Bebe:Yeh andar nahi jaa sakti (coldly)

Neil:Sorry..............

Bebe:Maine kaha yeh ladki andar nahi jaa sakti....main isske jaise dhokebaz nazayaz ladki ko apni ghar ki bahu kabhi nahi maan sakti (sternly)

Neil:Bebe yeh aap keh rahi hai.......Avni meri patni hai bebe (but she didn't change her expression which made Neil's expression hard).....Avi baatao kya huya tha yaha jo yeh log aise behave kar rahe hai bolo Baccha.....(looking at Bebe with a expressionless look he asks cupping her cheek)

Avni:Ne..il (he nods)...I think yeh log thik keh rahe hai (expressionlessly looking at nothing specific) I should lea..ve u,,I sho..uld st..ay away from ur life...I am b..ad omen.....(she was blabbering)

Neil:AVNI (jerks her holding from both sides)....Hosh mein ho tum...kya bole jaa rahi ho (Avni looks at him like a lost child)...Kya hogaya hai Baccha hmm,,I am here na I'll handle everything Avi kuch nahi hoga....Do u get me.....??Avni.............

Avni starts sobbing while Neil hugs her caressing her back & hair,,,others were shocked seeing him like this with her.......Like he is behaving strict & stern with all but whenever he is speaking to her his voice & eyes automatically gets soften.....................

Avni was now barely conscious,,,if she wasn't in Neil's arms then she would have been kissed the floor till now

Prakash:Neil puttar Avni ko andar leja usski tabiyat aur bigad rahi hai main doctor ko call karta hun baki baate baad mein hoga

Neil:Jii Dad

Shweta:Aap kyu doctor ko call karne lage yeh baccha to Ali ka hai na to unko hi sambhalne dijiye aur Tillu bebe ne kaha na yeh ladki iss ghar mein nahi reh sakti.............

Neill:U know what Mom I never thought that my own family will be like this....Mene kabhi nahi socha tha ki aaplog ek ladki ke sath aise behave karenge uss ladki ke sath jo iss ghar ki bahu hai meri patni hai (then chuckles) Huhh bahar ladkiyon ki izzat bachane ka kam karta hun jab yaha meri hi patni ke sath mere hi gharwale zaalimo jaise bartav kar rahe hai,,,sharam ati hai mujhe aaplogo ko apna parivar kehte huye (with shame)

Bebe:Neil..................................

Neil:Nahi bebe aaj apne mujhe sabse zayada sharminda kiya hai,,mujhe aapse yeh ummid nahi tha....And what did u all say that u won't accept Avni u won't let her stay in this house,,areeh aap kya nikalengi Avni khud aise ghar mein aise logo ke sath nahi rahegi jaha uska koi samman na kar sake.............

Shweta:Tillu yeh ladki iss ghar ki bahu aur tumhari patni kehlane ke layak nahi hai tu samajh kyu nahi raha hai,,,, yeh ek nazayaz dhokebajj makkar aur characterless ladki hai isne Ali ke sath s............................

Neil:STOP.....JUST STOP IT (he shouts with blazing eyes) Not a single word against my wife samjhe aap (pointing his finger at her)

Bebe:Neil.......Tu apne Maa se aise baat karega ab yehi saansker diye hai tujhe humne iss ladki ke.............(Neil shows his palm)

Neil:Yeh ladki meri patni hai......Avni....Avni Neil Khanna is her name aur rahi baat iss ghar mein rehne ki to acche se sunlijiye yeh ghar Avni ka hai,,,maine yeh ghar Avni ko humari shadi ka gift diya tha.So now tell me kisko iss ghar se nikal na chahiye Avni ko ya jinhe Avni se problem hai,, uske sath rehne se problem hai...................(he questioned)

Shweta:Neil.

Neil:Kya Neil huhh aap logo ko hi problem hai na Avni se........But don't worry as far as I know my Avi she won't say u to get out but again now I can't let my wife stay with such peoples like u who is treating her like a piece of trash.

Shweta:Tillu to kya kehna chahta hai...??

Neil:Main exactly wahi kehna chahta hun jo aap samajh rahi hai,,,jiss ghar mein meri patni ki jagah nahi jaha meri patni ki respect nahi waha pe mera bhi koi nahi hai.We r leaving this house & u all (coldly)

Bebe:Tillu tu apno ko chod ke jaa raha hai kisliye beta

Neil:Mujhe aise apno ki zaroorat nahi jo meri pyaar ki qadar na kar sake.Avni meri zindagi hai meri puri duniya hai woh aur main uske liye kisi bhi hadd tak jaa sakta hun....(to Avni) Come Avi we should leave now

Shweta:Neil...Neil tu aisa nahi kar sakta beta tu apne maa ko chodke nahi jayega hai na bol tu nahi jayega Tillu (crying)

Neil:Main kisiko jutha dilasa nahi deta.Aur haan mubarak ho yeh ghar aap logo ko Avni ki taraf se yeh uski bezzati karne ke liye toofa iss ghar mein reh ke jab jab aaplogo ko kuch kami mehsoos hogi na tab tab aaplogo ko ajj ka din yaad ayega ki kaise aap sabne milke ek haste huye family ko todke rakh diya...............(picking Avni in his arms he starts walking)

Bebe:Yeh ladki Ali ke bacche ki maa banne wali hai tujhe isne sirf dhoka hi diya hai aur tu isske liye hume chod raha hai Neil................(tearful eyes)

Neil(closed his eyes gritting he turns):Yeh jo apne Ali-Avni ka jhap lagaye rakhe hai na plz isse band kijiye kyuki apko sacch pata nahi hai.Ali aur Avni ko aisa kya karte huye dekh liya tha apne haa bebe.......Kaash thoda acche se dekh lete aap sab nazar ata.

Shweta:Yeh dono ek dusre ke bohut kareeb the ab konsa friends itne close rehte hai aur..............

Neil:Aur apne soch liya ki yeh dono kuch galat kar rahe the right.....Now listen to me carefully Ali khud se nahi aya tha yaha aur nahi Avni ne bulaya tha balki maine bola Ali ko ki woh yaha aye aur Avni ko dekhe kyuki aap log to the nahi Avni ke pas jab isski halat itni kharab ho rahi thi ki Avni ko police station ana para mere pas.Aur rahi baat pregnant hone ki to something was spiked with her food which caused her this condition & u all assumed her being pregnant & also now u r assuming that this never existing baby is Ali's.Avni Ali ko ek dost samajhti hai aur dost se zayada ek bhai aur aap logo ne kya naam diya iss rishte ka chiii................(he turns his face then walks towards his car but stops nd turns)

Waise to aaplog safari dene ke layak nahi rahe par ye Jo ghinona ungli uthai hai na aap sabne meri 'patni' par usse main mitana chahta hu,,(he takes out a envelope from his pocket) this is her hospital report mujhe case ke silsile mein bahar jana tha to mine Ali ko yaha bulaya tha and during all the time I was on video call.....Khash aaplog sachhai dekh pate naki aisa......(he shuts his eyes then opens the car door leading Avni inside)

Making Avni sit on the passenger seat buckling the seat-belt he kissed her forehead softly then both of her swollen eyes.Taking a water bottle which was in his car he makes her drink & rubs her cheeks clearing the tear off.

Avni:Neil U can't leave ur family like this only for me.........They needs u (she barely whispers)

Neil:And what about u...??Don't u need me.....Or even if u don't need me I need u Avi.U know I love u right (holding her hands while she nods her head slowly) Then trust me whatever I'm doing is right (kissed her knuckles one by one)

Shutting the car door of her side he walks past them getting into the house while others were still in there previous place.After about good 10-15 mins he comes out with his & her cloths and other things packed in bags and puts them in the car.

Shweta:Tillu plz aisa maat kar beta plz hume chodke maat jaa (she cries Neil ignores her & walks to Prakash)

Neil:I'm sorry dad for leaving like this but I really can't stay here I'm really sorry (holding his hand)

Prakash:Nahi beta tune jo kiya accha kiya,,I am not upset with u yeh sach hai ke miss to bohat karunga mere bacchon ko but I'm also proud of u...Take care of my Bacchi (patting Neil's shoulder)

Neil:U can come anytime and meet us Dad (hugging him while Prakash also hugs nodding)

Hopping in the car he starts driving without giving a last glance at his mother & Bebe while they kept crying.

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Neil heard Avni murmuring something in sleep while he was working on laptop sitting beside her on the bed where she was sleeping but he wasn't able to listen so he lower in front of her a lil bit to hear her.............

Avni:Kuch nahi ki..ya maine,,mai..n sa..ch bol rahi hun.....Ne..il maine kuch nahi ki..ya (murmuring)

Neil:Avi it's fine see everything is gonna fine Baccha (caressing through her hair)

Avni gets up with a jerk & hugs Neil who was in front of her clutching onto him like her life depend on this hug tightly wrapping her hands around his neck crying vigorously still in sleepy state.............

[Remember this scene....😍]

Neil(hugging her back):Hey Baccha shhh it's fine dekho kuch nahi huya Avi see....(caressing her hairs & back)

Avni:Kuch nahi kiya Neil....Neil I didn't do anything plz plz believe me (she starts getting panicked wriggling in his arms while he holds her more firmly)

Neil:Avi hosh mein aao I know baby u didn't.....Shhh I'm here...I've got u Baccha calm down (slowly placed her on his lap still caressing her back)

She melts into his arms but cried clinging to him clutching his shirt in tight grip while he was saying sweet nothings for calming her down

Avni:Neilu....(she mumbled after composing)

Neil:Hmm Avi bolo......

Avni:Why didn't they trust me...?? Maine jhuth toh nahi kaha tha na....why everyone hates me so much (snuggling more into him)

Neil:Cuz they doesn't have knowledge of real gem Baby-Bear (kissing her head) Can we not talk about them....

To be continued......😁😉

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I don't know why but I feel like something about this OS is off,,I mean it's not perfect 😰😰
Please let me know if you also agree then 2nd part likhna to dur main yeh part bhi delete kardungi😁😂😂
[So kindly drop ur opinion Cutie's😩]

Till then take care & stay safe😚

Much luff to all mah Cutie's💐

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