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{This OS starts from the episode where Avneil were finding a way to rescue Juhi from Rang-Mahal & when AvNeil were talking about Juhi Neela ma walks in & listens to their talk.....😁

Now the twist is.....Avneil loves each other & also have confessed after the bomb💣 blast incident aannndddd ahem ahem👉👈🙈rest u will get to know😳right below here👇....
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{I'll be changing some scenes according to me like aage ki scene peechhe aur peechhe ki scene aage😉😅}

In Neil's bachelor pad Avni was pacing back & forth in tension while murmuring to herself.......

Avni:Pata nhi kya ho raha honga,,abhi tak Rang-Mahal ka koi information nahi mili aur Neil ka bhi koi call nahi aaya abhi tak.....(just then she heard some sound coming from the audio setup)

Ballu:Gaari nikal mandir jana hai hume mata ki murti ke liye....Nahi nahi Pandit jii nahi aa sakti sirf hum jayenge

Avni:Mujhe Neil ko yeh information deni hongi,,yhi acha moka hai hum Ballu ko trap kar sakte hai.....

In the very moment Neil enters in the condo followed by DD,,frustration was clearly written on his face. As soon as Avni saw him she rushes towards him....

Avni:Neil....Neil mission successful raha na...?Kya huya tumhe proof mila na...?Tumne Pandit ko arrest karliya right....?

Neil didn't reply just glares at the evidence-hint-board (I don't remember what it's called😂😭😂) angrily & walks towards it.....

Avni:Neil tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahe............(she flinched as he shoves back the chair in anger)

Neil:Humari koshiso ka koi fayda nahi hai (clenching his jaw) Iss system mein kuch badalne nahi wala hai,,kuch nahi badalne wala hai,kuch nahi, kuch bhi nahi badlega...(he says all this while ripping the paper pieces,pics out from the board aggressively)

Avni:Neil....(she rubs his shoulder)

Neil:Main Juhi ko nahi bacha sakta,,,Avni main nahi bacha sakta Juhi ko, kuch nahi kar sakta main usko bachane ke liye....(he breaths shakily) Aaj mere wajah se Juhi itne mushkilo mein hai,,sirf aur sirf mere wajah se......(Avni at once hugs him tightly rubbing his back soothingly,,few seconds later Neil hugs her back burying his face in her neck)

(Well DD's reaction was worth watching there😂😭😂😭😂bechara was like...Should I close my eyes or keep them open or even better should I walk out of the room....😂😭😂😭😂😭😂😭😂)

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~In Jail~

Ragini:Hume ache se pata hai tum kya chahti ho.....(to Dayawanti)

Daya:Haan aur ek tum hi ho jo uss paap ki santan ko maut se bhi battar saza de sakti ho aur main janti hoon ke Rang-Mahal se battar koi aur jagah nahi ho sakti uss naapak ladki ke liye,,tadpa tadpa ke maarna chahti hoon main usse jaise uske Maa ko maara hai......(she says with a evil smile)

[Chii I wouldn't have wrote all this bullshits😒😑but Dayawanti has said this exactly lines in the show😖]

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Avni:Neil shant hojao. See hum koi na koi salutation zaroor nikalenge,,hum usse waha se zaroor azaad karenge.Hum Juhi ko kuch bhi nahi hone denge......(she says cupping his cheek with teary eyes)

Neil:We.........(his eyes travelled from Avni to the door & gets shock when his gaze fells on Neela ma who is standing on the doorstep with an extreme shocked face) Neela-ma....(Avni follows his gaze) Neela-ma main apko sab baata.........(she just walks out of the room with teary eyes Neil was following her but Avni stops him)

Avni:Nahi Neil tum ruku main Maa se baat karti hoon (Neil nods & Avni walks out behind Neela while Neil rubs his face vigorously)

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Avni:Maine aap se jhuth kaha tha I'm sorry Maa,,sacch yhi hai ki Juhi zinda hai.....(she says looking down with glistening eyes while Neela's condition was the same)

Neela:Aatit ka lautna kya hota hai yeh mujhse behtar aur kon janta hai Avni.......(her voice chokes while she looks up at Avni with sorrowful eyes)

Nahi baccha (she gets up & holds Avni's hand) Baccha tum Ayesha jii ke zindagi nahi chun sakti. Tumhe leke mere kitne sapne thee Avni ke tumhe ek acha jivansathi mile aur jab Neil mila.....(she stops wiping her tears) Avni....baccha tumhe wada karna honga,,wada karo ki tum aapne haq ke liye ladogi,,tum apni jagah kisiko nahi lene dogi wada karo.....(she says taking Avni's hand in her)

Avni:Main ladungi Maa I promise....(looking at Neela's eyes while she sighs in relief) But main kisi aur ki jagah bhi toh nahi le sakti na....(she quivers)

Neela:KYU (she shouts making Avni flinch) Kyu Avni jo tumhara hai uspe sirf tumhara hi haq hai baccha....(she says helplessly)

Avni:Jo cheez kabhi mera tha hi nahi uss cheez pe kaisa haq Maa... (tear drops runs down her cheeks)

Neela:Nahi Avni (she hugs Avni caressing her hairs & back) Aisa nahi hai baccha Neil pyar karta hai tumse yeh toh tum bhi janti ho na...And I know Neil will always give u the same love....

Avni:But Juhi was his first love Maa & I can see how much he used to love her.....(she cries out)

Neela:Juhi WAS his first love & he USED to love her but not NOW....Agar tum wo dekh sakti ho toh tum ab yeh kyu nahi dekh sakti ke Neil tumse 'Beintehaa mohabbat' karta hai.......(she tries to make her understand)

Avni:Jo bhi ho ab hume Juhi ko uss narak se bachana honga Maa aur uske baad Neil decide karega ki usse kiske sath apni zindagi guzarna hai, mere sath ya Juhi ke sath. And I won't ever pressurise him to choose me cz I just want MY LOVE to stay happy.......Even if it's not with me....(she said blankly wiping her tears)

Unknown to them someone listened all of their conversation & it was none other than Neil,,he bits down on his bottom lip controlling the tears which was threatening to fall down,,unable to stand there anymore he quietly leaves from there....

Neela:Avni.............

Avni:Maa please not now.......(Neela shuts her eyes in sadness) Waise aap yaha kyu aayi thi...?(changing the topic)

Neela:Nothing important...(giving a small smile)

Avni:Maa I know it's important so tell me fast...(she asks in a demanding tone)

Neela:Actually I got notice from Amol's college that he wasn't attending his college from some days but every day he leaves from house saying that he is going college so yesterday I thought to follow him & got to know he was actually going jail to meet with Dayawanti......

{I'm changing the scene here like in show Neela ma told Avni about Amol's secret meets with Dayawanti before knowing about Juhi but here she's telling now & also Avni didn't yet go to jail to meet with Dayawanti,,,hope u understood...right😐}

Avni:Whattttt.....

Neela:Hmm aur jab maine usse pucha toh usne kaha ki woh Dayawanti Mehta ko warn karne gaya tha but I think the matter is something else....I mean hum iske liye kitna kuch kar rahe hai phir bhi yeh humari sunta hi nahi....(with a frown)

Avni:Aap tension maat lo main baat karungi na usse,,samjha dungi usse ache se.....(she replies sounding tensed)

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Avni goes inside & saw Neil was sitting with a open file in his hand but he was deep in some thought. Walking towards him she slowly placed her hand on his shoulder bringing him out of his thoughts....

Neil:Neela-ma is angry na....(he asks blankly)

Avni:No,, I made her understand & now u should concentrate more on our mission...(she says in determined tone but soon stumbles back bcz of sudden dizziness)

Neil:Avniii come here...(he holds her hand in mean time & made her sit beside him on the couch)Here drink it...(handing her a glass of water) Now feeling better....??(he asks with utmost concern while caressing her hairs)

Avni:Yeah I'm fine. Maybe just lack of sleep....(she tries to reason out)

Neil:Yeah & I also know that u didn't had ur breakfast yet that's why u r feeling weak (he said sternly making her gulp) I asked DD to bring food & when he will come back I want u to eat without throwing any tantrums & take rest......(he states in a demanding tone)

Avni:Offo Neil I'm absolutely fine it's just a minor thing don't worry about it,,,tum baatao aage ka kya plan hai...?

Neil:This mission is important,,Juhi's rescue is important but that doesn't mean u r not important Avni (he cups her face from both sides) U r most important for me Avni,,,I can't let u to get hurt so please take care of yourself baby.....(kissing her forehead lovingly)

Avni:Neil see I'm really fine,nothing has happened to me so now let's discuss about our next plan....(she gets up but Neil pushed her back on the couch)

Neil:Bas Avni...(glaringly) Just do as I say otherwise u won't be a part of this mission anymore....(strictly)

Avni:Neillll.....(she sounds shock but stops as Neil gives her a look which says he is done) Okay...(she replies grumpily making Neil smile)

He pulls her to his chest hugging softly which she reciprocates happily,,their little moment got disturb by DD, who came there with their meals. DD leaves soon giving Avneil sometime for themselves....

When they were done eating Neil forced Avni to take a nap...

Avni:Neil u also need some rest,,tum bhi thodi der rest karlo please....(she gives her best puppy face which completely melted Neil)

He bends down a lil & placed a soft gentle kiss on her forehead while she closed her eyes feeling his lips on her skin....

Opening her eyes she stares at his hazel brown orbs lovingly which he returned equally....

Avni:I love you Neil...(she states subconsciously while Neil smiles)

Neil:I love you too baccha...(he pecks her nose tip & lays down beside her)

Neil pulls her close to him wrapping his arms around her,,caging her in his arms protectively. Avni kisses on his chest softly where his heart is while he kissed on top of her head.

Neil(in mind):Avni u r my first priority. And I want to remove ur this doubt as well as insecurity that I still have feelings for Juhi which I don't have Avni I don't have. I only love u,,you r my everything. U means the world to me. No one can take ur place not even Juhi & I can't lose you,,not now not ever.......(while thinking all this he closed his eyes inviting sleep to take over him)

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Neil stirs in sleep feeling something tugging on his arm,,he opens his eyes a lil to see Avni trying to get out of his hold so he just tightens his grip & again closed his eyes.

Avni:Neil please leave me.....(here comes her desperate whisper to which Neil snapped open his eyes)

Neil:What happen...?You okay...? (he asked,concern flashing on his face seeing her pale face)

Avni didn't answer just rushes towards the washroom & Neil followed her,,when he gets inside finding the door open he sees her puking her guts out. He rushed over to her side pulling the hairs out of her face & rubs her back trying to comfort her........

Neil:Avni tabiyat zayada kharap lag rahi hai kya...(he asks once she was done washing her mouth & he wipes her mouth softly with napkin)

She just hums laying her head on his chest tiredly leaning on Neil making him more tensed.

Neil:Avni u r not at all looking good baccha we should consult a doctor...(he picks her in his arms softly & comes out then places her on the bed softly like she's a glass doll & would break if he puts any pressure)

Avni:No I think it's just normal food poison bcz of the outside food I had earlier....(she sounds above whisper while Neil shook his head stubbornly)

Neil:Whatever ur problem is, it's doctor's work to find out now let's go we r going to the hospital.....(he said grabbing his phone & shoving the wallet in his pocket)

Avni:Neil don't overreact on this silly matter,,(she gets up) I'll be fine in sometimes I just have to take some rest. I prom...(she stumbles back falling on the bed while Neil freaks out)

Neil:Avniiiii......(he was beside her in a split of time supporting her by her shoulder) See ur condition,,,and u r telling me it's nothing serious...(he's now looking scared)

Grabbing a glass of water from the nightstand he made her drink it,,she takes slow sips & keeps her head on his chest closing her eyes.

Avni:Neil it feels yuck....(she mumbles in his neck)

Neil:I know baccha(patting her head softly) I also know my wifey will get well soon...(kissing on top of her head) Come.....

He picks her again in bridle style & starts walking. This time Avni didn't say anything as it won't do any work other than making him mad. So she just laid her head in the crook of his neck wrapping her arms around....

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Neil was sitting in doctor's cabin while doctor were checking Avni in the attached checkup room.....

Neil:Everything is okay right doctor...? (he asked nervously as soon as doctor came out)

Doctor:As of now I'll say nothing is serious, baki report aane ke baad pata chalega...

Neil:When will the reports come...?

Doctor:As u r in a emergency situation, U will get the reports within 20-25 min...

Neil thanked her gratefully for giving the reports today itself then walks towards Avni's room who was sleeping bcz of medicine & saw her slowly opening her eyes...

Neil:How r u feeling now love...(he asks taking her hand in between his)

Avni:Better than before...(she replies meekly giving a small tired smile)

Neil:Doctor said u r alright, they just have to confirm seeing ur reports... (he kisses her forehead while caressing her head)

Doctor:Mr. & Mrs.Khanna the reports have came before than we expected....(she walks inside gaining Avneil's attention)

Neil:Really...!That's great, so what's the reason of her this sickness...?(he sounded wary as well as nervous)

Doctor:It's just seasonal sickness & lack of self attention like not having meals on time & not giving proper rest to her body....(doctor explains making Neil sigh looking at Avni who was looking everywhere but him)

[Kon kon hai jo kuch aur hi soch rahe thee...!?😂😁]

Avni:(in mind) How I wish to break her face right now (glaring at the doctor)....(to Neil),,See Neil I told you....(nervously she chewed on her lower lip)

Neil:Thanks Doctor. I'll make sure that it doesn't repeat again...(glaring at Avni making her gulp)

Avni:Repeat...?Again...? No chance,,it will never happen again I promise...(she pinched on her throat making the doctor laugh & Neil rolls his eyes)

Neil:I was expecting that only (he denounced back coldly to which she pouts)

Neil cooed at her cute face inwardly maintaining a stern face.

Doctor prescribed down some medicine & told them that they are now free to go home, also Avni was much better than before so Avneil got up & exists,,,As they were walking out of the hospital they noticed DD with other constables walking in the hospital while Neil frowns...

Avni:Arre DD yaha kya kar raha hai...?

Neil:Pata nahi,,let's see...(Avni nods & they heads towards them) DD what's the matter...?Tum log yaha kyu....? (DD stops in his track hearing Neil's voice)

The first thing they did was to salute Neil while he nods & signs to say ahead....

DD:Actually just a normal accident case. I thought u r busy so didn't disturb u & came here to investigate but what r doing here Sir & bhabhi....?

Neil:Avni fall sick suddenly so came to have a checkup....(he said tightening his grip around her shoulder)

DD:What...?Bhabhi how r u now? (he asked frowning)

Avni:Hanjii main ab bilkul thik hoon. (smiling warmly seeing his concern)

Just then a constable comes there hurriedly...

Constable:Sir the victim's condition is getting critical, I think the chances are too low. Come fast please...(he informs)

Neil:Chalo main bhi dekhta hoon

DD:No no sir u should take care of bhabhi I'll handle here...(he told others to go ahead)

Avni:Nope I think Neil is right he should stay here,,waise bhi mujhe Maa ke ghar jana hai...(Neil looks at her narrowing his eyes)

Neil:Tum Neela ma ke paas jaa rahi ho baataya nahi....

Avni:Mujhe bhi abhi hi pata chala....(she gives a goofy smile, Neil shakes his head at her silliness)

Neil:Come I'll drop u there...(he again wraps his arm around her) DD handle for a lil bit am coming...

Avni:U r going nowhere I'll book a cab & no more arguments cz I'm totally fine now....(faking an angry face)

Neil:Av............

Avni:NO (pointing a finger at him, Neil sighs knowing she won't listen to him now)

Neil:Okay...but DD tumhe drop karke aayega....(DD nods immediately while Avni gives a irritated look)

Avni:Neilllll (she whines gritting) Stop ur over protectiveness,,DD don't have to drop me.....(she states crossing her arms in front of her chest)

Neil:I didn't ask u, I told u & yeah DD is most definitely dropping u......(DD have already left for getting the car)

Avni:U r so irritating u know that Neil....(she hissed in irritation while he chuckles)

Neil:I love you too Baccha...(saying this he kissed her forehead gently & starts walking after giving a quick peck on her lips)

Avni stand still there registering what just happened. When she looks up at him he winked at her & pulls her out of the hospital to the car where DD was waiting for Avni.....

Neil:Call me as soon as u reach there wifey......(he kisses her knuckles softly)

Avni nodded her head dramatically as he didn't let go of her hand.....Something wasn't letting him leave her hand, he was feeling restless & some kind of uncertain feeling that if he leave her hand he will lose everything, he will lose the world.....

Avni signs DD to start the car & as the car starts going ahead his grip on her hand starts getting loose. And at some point their hand loses the contact of each other when the car gets out of Neil's touch. Avni gives him her ever so sweet smile which he is addicted to while he just stands there only looking at her angelic face with his rapid heart beat which was screaming not to let her go away from him even if it's just for some time.....

'Only if they knew'

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They were half way through the drive when Avni's phone rang....

It's an unknown number,, frowning at her screen she receives it....

Avni:Hello........(her frown depends as the caller said something from the other side) DD phirse hospital Chalo jaldi....(she said hurriedly after hanging the phone)

DD:But Bhabhi......(he was cut off by Avni)

Avni:Tum bas jaldi chalo.....

DD nods confusingly & takes a u-turn to the hospital, once he stops the car in front of the hospital she rushes inside & walks towards the receptionist....

Avni:Excuse me (she said gaining the receptionist's attention) I'm Mrs.Avni Neil Khanna.....

The receptionist nods & gives her an envelope✉ without exchanging any words....

Avni opens it hurriedly going through the paper inside of it & widens her eyes. She became numb, she gets lost in her own world......

She wouldn't have come back to reality from her daze if DD wasn't there....

DD:Bhabhi,U okay...?Yeh kya hai....(he says referring to the envelope)

Avni:Huhh,wo...(she quickly placed back the paper in the envelope) DD yeh.......(her phone rang again)

DD just looked at her puzzled while she receives the call....

Avni:What.....wait (she cuts the call) DD please keep it, I have some really emergency work to done,thanks for coming tum ab Neil ke paas jao (she said handing him the envelope & again rushes out before DD could say something)

DD:Bhabhi par aap jaa kaha rahi hai bha.........(but she was already gone)

He looks at the envelope knitting his forehead thinking should he open it or not,,after a long debate with himself he shoves the envelope inside his pocket & starts walking.

TO BE CONTINUED......😁

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