Lunar Apex - Introduction
The sun slips below the horizon, and darkness creeps over the land. The chill of the cold winter night steals over your skin, and in the blackness, it appears the sun will never rise again.
The sun will not be your savior, though, and even warmth will eventually forsake you. Instead, the moon hangs quietly in the sky even when your precious sun hides her glory. Now, in the dark and the cold, the moon drifts high over your head, full and bright. She has reached her apex, and a bright glow shines off her and streams to rescue you from the black.
Is your story missing the magical glow of moonlight?
At Lunar Apex Reviews, I discover the beauty of your story and shine some silverlight on it. I have professional proofreading experience and, on a different account, won or placed in every NBR—an elite reviewing community—round I participated in. I love grammar and literary devices and would be ecstatic to share my experience with you.
What you get from a Lunar Apex Review:
~ In-depth in-line comments throughout the section explaining
~~ mistakes and awkward phrasing or characterization,
~~ how to fix the problems, and
~~ why these are mistakes so you can avoid making the same ones in the future.
~ An "Overall Impressions" review at the bottom of your chapter that tells
~~ the strong points of the section,
~~ the weak points of the section, and
~~ my personal opinion of the section.
~ A copy of the "Overall Impressions" review of your section in this book! The chapter with your review will be dedicated to you and have you and your book mentioned in it.
So what are you waiting for? Whether you need some serious content critiques or just have a few punctuation problems, Lunar Apex Reviews is here to help.
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