💜🥳Fantasy Results💜🥳
Thanks to our two amazing judges prinsesia judging this genre. Winners pm the form 'winner's form' to me at the bottom of the results for your stickers, if you're unable to download it. If you didn't win this time, there's always next time. The original judge didn't judge all the books and the other judge, wishes to remain anonymous that judge two of the fantasy books that were to be judged by Angela_virgo.
🥇First Place Winners🥇 (it's a tie)
The Green Guardian CroodsGirl
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Atlantia: Rise of Rebellion Yanzieyy
🥈Second Place Winners🥈 (it's a tie)
Cursed To Live: The Awakening TheSpadeAndAce
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The Claimed Rashika's Resistance spelunkadunk
🥉Third Place Winner🥉
Hooded
🏅Honourable Mention🏅
River's Shadow Nightfall_21
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The Bride of Sephiroth BreanneLHeureux
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Other scores and reviews
Books judged by Angela_virgo
The Claimed Rashika’s: Resistance spelunkadunk
Title:9/10
Cover:10/10
Blurb:10/10
Grammar and vocabulary:20/20
Writing:20/20
Plot:10/10
Originality:10/10
Overall enjoyment:10/10
Total: 99/100
Review: The Title is very catchy,Not too long. It predicts the content that the author is going to write. A hint of lgbtq there with the (w/w) love the diverse right there. The cover fits with fantasy very much. The title is displayed on it,which is great. It says (wxw),it's nice to express lgbtq in books. The picture on the cover looks as if there are people who are fighting for something.I assume that what the author is writing is passionate and creative. The blurb has stunning vocabulary. Readers would understand what they're going to read. You've mentioned all the achievements your story has reached and I admire that,Great job. The Grammar and Vocabulary is amazing.If the story were to be published as a book,'d read it.Readers can zone out and just imagine a bizarre world of fantasy with your writing.It looks as if writing this was effortless. The writing. It's great,Very descriptive with the words,readers would be able to visualise all the actions the story carries.You included visuals,of the maps and timelines.That's good for readers to understand much better and to have a mindset on what to think. My overall enjoyment
I look forward to reading this story,to see how it unfolds and what happens to the character's.Good job. The Plot's pace is steady.Its exciting and relatable.I like how the author acknowledges the misogyny in many stories,that hold a man as the big strong armour person. It’s original, Very original,this showcases women being strong,including lgbtq.Love its diverse energy.The words are explained with onomatopoeia as well,giving the reader a thought of what it sounds like.
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The Unfortunates huffleRoses
Title:10/10
Cover:10/10
Blurb:10/10
Grammar and Vocabulary: 1720
Writing: 20/20
Plot:10/10
Originality:10/10
Overall enjoyment: 8/10
Total: 95/100
Review: There are only two stories on wattpad with that title,so very original. The drawing for the cover was creative. It had many chapters as well. The Unfortunates" It stands out. It's not too long, Fits with the genre of your book. Love the creativity behind the story.
You put the author's name,which is good for recognition. The title is there,which is great so readers can know what they're going to read. Short and simple,Not too long. Readers would be able to understand what the story is about. Uses good vocabulary. Grammar mistake in the second paragraph. I didn't spot any misspelled words in the first few chapters. Good cliff hangers
Good description of what is going on. It's steady,not rushing into thingsReaders would understand what's happening. It's surprising.
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The Green Guardian CroodsGirl
Title:10/10
Cover:10/10
Blurb:10/10
Grammar and Vocabulary:20/20
Writing:20/20
Plot:10/10
Originality:10/10
Overall enjoyment:10/10
Total:100/100
Review: Eye catching. Makes sense in fantasy stories. I would rate more,if I could. The title is on it,great so readers can know what they are reading. The author's name is on it,great for recognition. The picture of the cover matches the title. I see the inspiration came from your older brother.Creative! You explained the story's background with good grammar. It's good that you wrote a rating for the book. Good transitions with the words. The word choice is nice. Perfect grammar and strong vocabulary. Very good at describing things in the story. The plot is very interesting. Excellent communication skills when it comes to writing,for the reader to understand. It's exciting and interesting. The plot isn't too fast or too slow,it's steady. It grabs the reader's attention immediately. Very original and I think this would be the winner for fantasy entries.
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Cursed To Live : The Awakening TheSpadeAndAce
Title:10/10
Cover:10/10
Blurb:10/10
Grammar and Vocabulary:20/20
Writing: 20/20
Plot:10/10
Originality:9/10
Overall enjoyment:10/10
Total: 99/100
Review: The title is very original.Readers would think,why would it ever be a curse to live. Basically you'll get them questioning things and want to understand the concept. The cover is really eye-catching and it fits into its genre.The author name is there for recognition and the title is there as well. The blurb uses great vocabulary and It explains the summary very clearly. The grammar is very pleasant.When the author is describing something in the story,the readers are able to understand,visualize the picture or the story in their minds. The writing is great,The way the author sculptures the Plot,along with the story is nice.It involves what's happening in their environment and their thoughts. The plotis steady, not too slow or fast.Readers will be able to understand how they got in the situation they're in.With the back story and how the characters think in the process.Very different from other stories,when you focus on the plot. I recommend wattpader's to read this when they want a good descriptive fantasy.
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Books judged by anonymous
The Chronicles of Soraya Thenayu
Title: 8/10
Cover: 7/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar/Vocabulary: 20/20
Writing Style: 20/20
Plot: 8/10
Originality: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 8.5/10
Total: 86.5/100
Review: I loved this story and as you can see, the scores that got marked down, I think it can be improved so this story can be the masterpiece it’s supposed to be.
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Mask of Bone MS_Chavez
Title: 10/10
Cover: 10/10
Blurb: 10/10
Grammar/vocabulary: 18/20
Writing style: 19/20
Plot: 8/10
Originality: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 8/10
Total: 92/100
Review: I loved this tory so much. The cover and the title itself is eye catching and intriguing.
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Books judged by prinsesia
The Last Guardian: River's Shadow Nightfall_21
Title: 10
Cover: 8
Blurb: 8
Grammar and Vocabulary: 18
Writing: 16
Plot: 10
Originality: 10
Overall enjoyment: 8
Total: 88 / 100
Review: The story's plot is unique. I enjoy reading your story for quite some time. I never encountered such a plot so I'm kinda amazed on how you put it that way. I must say that this story's plot is really one of the best fantasy stories that I read.
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2.Hooded EliPH99
Title: 10
Cover: 6
Blurb: 10
Grammar and Vocabulary: 20
Writing: 20
Plot: 10
Originality: 10
Overall enjoyment: 10
Total: 96 / 100
Review: The story's plot is really unique. I never expected the plot to be like that. The spacing is good and I also like your choice of words. I must say that the book/story is worth reading and supporting. I really enjoy reading your story because for me it is one of the hidden gems. I hope you continue writing more fantasy stories. God bless you and keep bleeding!
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ALANTIA: Rise of RebellionYanzieyy
Title: 10
Cover: 10
Blurb: 10
Grammar and Vocabulary: 20
Writing: 20
Plot: 10
Originality: 10
Overall enjoyment: 10
Total: 100 / 100
Review: This book really got my attention and interest. I must say that this book is one of a kind, this book is a hidden gem. The first time I read it's blurb, the book unconsciously piques my curiosity on what is written inside the book and what the story is all about.
I really enjoy reading your story. I must recommend this book of yours to those readers that really likes to read fantasy-adventure stories. Keep writing as a co-author, and may the Lord continue to bless you and your stories. Keep bleeding!
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4.The Bride of Sephirot BreanneLHeureux
Title: 10
Cover: 6
Blurb: 8
Grammar and Vocabulary: 16
Writing: 16
Plot: 10
Originality: 10
Overall enjoyment: 10
Total: 86 / 100
Review: Your story is actually good. I can imagine scenes by reading your narration in the story. The story also piques my curiosity. Like, what did Seph do to be a child in the daylight and a man at night? The story really got my attention. The more I read every chapter, the more I want to read the whole book of your story. Keep writing co-author, may the Lord continue to bless you and your stories!
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My eyes glow in dark!VarunzHaights
Title: 6
Cover: 6
Blurb: 6
Grammar and Vocabulary: 16
Writing: 14
Plot: 10
Originality: 10
Overall enjoyment: 8
Total: 76
Review: The first time I read the first chapter of the story, I actually said that this story is one of a kind. The plot is really really unique, I mean it's my first time reading a story like that but not my first time seeing a plot like that. The plot is really interesting and intriguing. I really wonder what happened to her that the female protagonist got an abnormal body. The first time I read the blurb the line 'A humanoid girl' already got my attention. I must say that you are one of those hidden gems in the writing industry. Keep writing co-author, God bless!
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