Unpublishing

I'm going to rewrite quite a bit of FFTT(Fighting for the Truth, if you don't know). That story was the result of writing an entire book over the course of three months, and a lot of mistakes were made. So, I'll be unpublishing it for a while sometime until I've had a chance to revise and edit all the chapters. Corona, in my opinion, is a bit bipolar in her beliefs. Also, I'd like to give Starla a larger role in the plot, and make the beginning less of a love triangle.
-Lunar-Darkness- , you've read it often XD What else should I work on?
Anyone else have constructive criticism for me?

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