Neil:- avni I want to tell you something..

Avni:- mujhe bhi tumse kuch kahena h..

Neil:- pahle meri baat sun to lo..

Avni:- nahi pehle m, actually m bahut nervous hu, kyse kahun...

Neil:- it's very important avni...

Avni:- please pahle m...

Neil:- ok...

Avni:- Neil I.....

Neil:- hmmm

Avni:- I lo.... Nahi pahele tum hi bolo..

Neil:- but abhi to tumhe bolna thaa..

Avni:- I am nervous naa, tb tk tum bolo...

Neil:- avni I am in love...

Avni:- really (blushed she thinks about herself)

Neil:- yaa..

He holds her palms..

Avni:- Neil...(blush)

Neil:- avni I love mitali...

Her blush goes feeds

Neil:- avni I want to marry her...

Now she has no words to say anything...

Neil:- avni I really love her...

Her eyes filled with tears...

Neil:- kya hua avni..

Avni:- I am happy for you.... (To hide her tears)

Neil:- tum kuch bol rahi thi...

Avni:- ab un baato ka koi mtlb nahi h Neil...

Neil:- kyaa..

Avni:- kuch nahi....so aage kya socha h...

Neil:- mom...

Avni:- don't worry m mumma se baat kar lungi...

Neil:- thank you...

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Avni collecting papers which everywhere in her room, in which she practice to how she proposed him, first she thought, she will send him love later, but it's old fashion,... After she thought write her feelings towards him... End the last she decided to tell him Derictly...
But how knows, her heart will break in that way...

She threw everything on the dustbin...
And lay down on her bed, and cry...

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Sweta:- avni ye Tu kya bol rahi h beta

Avni:- yes mumma, mujhe life me aage badna h or m abhi shadi nahi karna chaheti...

Sweta:- to abhi karne ke liye kisne bola h, abhi to bas engagement ho jaygi bas..

Avni:- but mumma, m or Neil sirf dost h sirf dost...
(Her eyes filled with tears when she says last words)

Sweta:- avni beta...

Avni:- mumma please...

Sweta:- thik h Tu jysa chahe, m tujhe force nahi karungi, teri khushi m hi meri khushi h...

****

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Mitali:- baby I so happy, finally hamaari engagement hogi yehhhhhh...

Neil just smiles..

Mitali:- baby tum naa is dress ke saath apni watch pahen lo, tum par suit karega...

Neil:- hmmm, m abhi avni ko bolta hu..

Mitali:- avni kyu, m hu naa m laake deti hu, bolo kaha h...

Neil:- avni ke room m, tabhi to use bula raha thaa

Mitali:- yaa but, tumhaari watch avni k room m kya kar rahi h...

Neil:- bhul gya thaa, us din, tum ruko m avni ke room se leke aata hu...

He goes..

Mitali:- avni avni avni, is avni ki wajah se tumne mujhe blame kiya thaa naa, ab dekho, m kyse avni ko Tumhaari zindagi se hi nahi balki is ghar se bhi bahut dur kar dungi(Evil smirks)

******

Sweta:- avni beta, or kitna time or lagayegi,

Avni:- bas done mumma

(She's wears pink colour lehenga)

Sweta:- ohh meri bachhi kinni soni lag rahi h, kisi ki nazar naa lage...

Avni:- thank you...

Sweta:- Aree tere jaan sune kyu h

Avni:- haa abhi pahen leti hu...

Sweta:- Aree mene jo parso tujhe jhuthe diye the, yaad h jb neil ke room m uski engagement ring select kar rahe the, wahi pahenna, bahut achhe lagenge...

Avni:- par wo to wahi bhul gyi, m dusra pahen leti hu naa....

Sweta:- kyu dusra pahenegi, wahi pahen mene khaas tere liye mangaye the...

Avni:- jiii...

Sweta goes to

After his confession about mitali she try to avoid him because she doesn't want to weak in front of him, she somehow handles herself and doesn't want to loose it

*****

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neil's room

Avni comes and stares his room for sometimes & her eyes filled with tears,

She wiped her tears and start searching her earrings....

She opens his cupboards and searches..

She sees her earrings she takes it's

And when she about to close the door...

she finds a photograph...
She smiles seeing the photograph in which ice cream of her face & neil pulling her hair.....

Flashback...

Sweta:- kinni sundar lag rahi h meri bachhi...

Neil:- sundar nahi mom bandar (laughing)

Avni:- mumma.... (She makes pout)

Sweta:- bolne de wo to pagal h...

Avni:- pagal, pagal pagal (she start teasing him)

Neil:- do chutiya bali bandar, do chutiya bali bandar, bandar...

Avni:- mumma (pout)

Sweta:- neillllll

Neil:- bandar...

Sweta:- ok thik avni ek kaam kar Tu naa fridge me jo Neil ke liye Ice-cream bachake rakhi thi naa wo bhi Tu hi khaa le...

Avni:- yehhhhhh...

She runs towards the fridge..

Neil:- no.....

She starts eating Ice-cream her mouth filled with Ice-cream...

Sweta Laughs and admire her cuteness and she thought to capture this moment but when she click Neil comes and pulls her hair...

Flashback over...

Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho..
A voice comes from behind...

Avni:- wo m

Mitali:- wo m kya haa, or tum bhul gyi to yaad dila du, ab Neil ke room m tak jhak karna thoda kam kar do ok...

Avni:- m bas...

Mitali:- pata nahi, is ghar ke logo ne tumhe apne sari par kyu betha rakha h...
Ab mujhe ayse kya dekh rahi ho jaao...

She feels sad & went away...

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Mitali:- Neil m tumhaari hone fiance hu, or tum ho ki mere bare m nahi balki us avni ke bare m soch rahe ho,

Neil:- aysa nahi h mitali

Mitali:- to kysa h, haa kuch dino m engagement h fir shadi or tum hi ki avni par hi atke huye ho, aaj tumhe decide karna hi hoga, tumhare liye important kon h mein ya avni...

Neil:- what nonsense...

Mitali:- decision is yours...

Neil:- ye kya bachpana h, avni sirf meri dost h...

Mitali:- sirf dost haa, ye kysi dosti h ki uske aage tumhaari ek nahi chalti, tumhari mom tumse jada us par yakin karti h, Aree yakin tk chhodo tumhari mom tk usi ne manaya shadi ke liye, kabhi kabhi to mujhe lagta h ki ye Tumhara nahi balki uska ghar h Or tum rent par rahete ho..

Neil:- wo sirf isliye kyuki humne se koi use ye feel nahi karana chahta ki uska is duniya m koi nahi h, neela aunty Or mom best friends the, Or ek din jb neela aunty or ashish uncle ek business party se ghar aa rahe the to unka accident ho gya or sab kuch khatam ho gya, avni sirf 10 saal ki thi jb neela aunty ne avni ki jinmmedari mom ko di thi, tb se aaj tk mom se apne akhho se dur nahi hone deti, uske paas hamaare alawa Or koi nahi h...

Just then mitali sees that avni coming towards his room...

Mitali:- to wo orphanage m bhi rahe sakti thi...

Neil:- mitali (loudly)

Mitali:- i am sorry...

Avni hears that & feel some relief...

Mitali:- ek baat such such batana, tumhe sweta aunty ki kasam, kya avni such m tumhari best friend h...

Avni waiting for his reply....

Neil:- such bolu to nahi wo meri best friend nahi h, par m uska jarur hu, mene usse dosti sirf apne faayde ke liye ki thi...

After his confrontation, a long tears drops in her eyes...

Before he says something else..

Mitali:- Aree avni tum waha kyu khadi ho...

Neil turns

Neil:- avni!!!

Avni:- wo m wo, ye mumma se ku kuch jewelry bheje the mitali ke liye ( fumbling & about to cry)

Mitali herself:- teer ek dum nishane pe laga...

Neil himself:- ohh God kahi avni ne kuch sun to nahi liya...

Mitali:- thik h tum jaao...

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Neil:- avni, mitali jab bol rahi h ki usne ring nahi dekh fir kyu baat ko bada rahi ho....

Avni:- Neil m such bol rahi hu ring mitali ke paas hi thi...

Mitali:- jhut mat bolo avni, kahi aysa to nahi ring tumne hi kahi rakh di ho Or blame mujhe kar rahi ho...

Neil:- yaa ho sakta h tumne galti se kahi rakh di ho...

Avni:- Neil tumhe mujh par yakin nahi h...

Neil:- isme yakin ki baat nahi h, galti sabse ho sakti h...

Avni:- Neil, mumma ne ring mujhe di thi but wo mitali ne mujhse le li ye bolke ki wo khud sambhaal ke rakh degi...

Mitali:- ring ke bare m sirf avni Or aunty ko hi pata thaa , aunty to use kuch karegi nahi rahi baat avni ki to jo sakta h, avni ek baar tum apni room m check kyu nahi kar leti ho sakta h tumne...

Avni:- but mene to...

Neil:- mom bhi ghar par nahi h, ek to mushkil se mani h wo Or upar se ye sab...

Mitali start searching the ring...

Mitali:- lo ye rahi.(showing the ring)

Avni:- ring (shocked)

Neil:- tum to bol rahi thi ki tumhe nahi pata...

Mitali smirks...

Avni:- par mujhe such me nahi pata, ho sakta h mumma ne...

Neil:- mom aysa kyu karengi

Mitali:- kahi tum ye to nahi kahena chaheti ki aunty nahi chaheti is rishte ko..

Neil:- avni tum mom ko blame kar rahi ho...

Avni:- mera mtlb wo nahi tha, but ho sakta h mumma ne...
Before she complete..

Neil:- wo meri mom h avni(loudly)

This words somewhere hits on her heart...

Avni:- sorry yaad dilaane ke liye (emotionally)

Neil:- i am sorry mera wo mtlb nahi thaa

In that time sweta comes home..

Hearing their conversation she stands on the door step..

Avni:- mitali such bol rahi thi, ring mene hi rakhi thi, sorry chupai thi..(without any emotions)

Neil:- avni!!!!!

Avni:- kyuki me nahi chaheti thi ki is ghar me meri jagha koi Or le.....

Neil just stare her...

Her eyes filled with tears...

Mitali:- dekha such bol hi diya naa isne, kahene ko best friend bola karti thi par , hakikat dekho.....

He still looks into her eyes....

Avni:- kash hum such me best friend hote (smiles emotionally)

Neil:- avni!!

Avni:- kuch kahene ki jaruat nahi h mujhe pata h, don't worry m tumse koi reason nahi Puchungi....

Sweta hears everything but without saying anything she went away from there...

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Engagement day...

Avni's room

Sweta:- dekh na avni kitna sona munda h, ek baar Neil ki shadi ho jaaye fir tere bhi haath pile karne h..

Avni:- mumma please mujhe naa hi mere haath pile karbane h Or naa hi neele...

Sweta:- ek baar dekh to le...

Avni:- aapko ek baar me samjh nahi aata...

Avni!!!!!! (A loud voice comes from behind)

Sweta:- Neil Tu yaha...

Neil:- yaa aapko bulane aaya thaa but, avni tum mom se ye kyse baat kar rahi thi, sorry bolo...

Avni:- why...

Neil:- what do you mean why...

Avni:- just leave me alone...

Neil:- avni!!!

Sweta:- bchhe kya ho gya h, kuch dinon se dekh rahi hu bilkul badli badli sir raheti h, kisi ne kuch kaha h kya, Neil ne Tu abhi bata m abhi iski khabar leti hu...

Avni:- kisi ne kuch nahi kaha...

Sweta:- fir kya chahiye tujhe..

Avni:- aazadi...

Sweta:- mtlb..

Showing a appointment latter

Sweta:- pune..

Avni:- m pune shift ho rahi hu, klse joining h....

Sweta:- kya(shockingly)

Neil:- tumne ye pahle kyu nahi bataaya...

Avni:- time nahi mila...

Sweta:- itni badi baat ke liye time nahi mila...

Avni:- ab pata chal gya naa...

Sweta:- haa pata chal gya but ye mat sochna ki m tujhe waha jaane dungi, m tujhe akeli clg tk jaane nahi deti Or Tu akele rahene ki baat kar rahi h, Job hi karni h, to wo to Tu hamaare company m bhi kar sakti h...par akele bilkul nhi..

Avni:- to kya chaheti h aap hamesha aap logo ki gulaam banne rahu...

Neil:- avni i think tumhari tabiyat thik nahi h, isliye aysi baate kar rahi ho...

Avni:- m bilkul thik hu, Or apne hosh m rahekar hi baat kar rahi hu...
Such to ye h ki aap chaheti hi nahi, ki m apne life m kuch karu,

Hearing her Neil anger increasing..

Avni:- aapko apne bete ki shadi karni h to aap kijiye, par mujhe kyu force kar rahi h, kahi aysa to nahi ki aapke apne bete par hi yakin nahi, aapko dar h ki kahi shadi ke baad bhi aapko wo sab dekhne ko mile jo us din aapke bete ke room m mila thaa, yaa usse jada...

Rising his hand
Avni!!!!!!! (Loudly)

But sweta grabs his hand before he slap her....

She scared to seeing his anger....

Sweta:- kb jana h...

Avni:- aaj raat ko...

Sweta:- engagement ke baad chali jaana barna, log baate banayenge..
Saying that she went away...

He started her before leaving...

She avoid eye contact...

After he went away...

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Avni:- congratulations....

Neil stared her but she ignore him...

Mitali:- thank you but where is the gift, sorry i am just joking..

Avni smiles:- sab kuch to de diya h, ab kuch bacha hi kaha h jo tumhe de saku...

Mitali:- mtlb..

Avni:- kabhi kabhi kuch baato ko adhura hi raheti h, kyuki pure hone ki kismat har kisi ke paas nahi hoti na...

Neil started her when she says...

Neil:- av.....
Before he says
she went away.....

******

After six days...

Neil pov.

Jab se avni gyi h naa tab se kuch achha hi nahi lagta....

I know m usse ghussa hu, usne jo kuch bhi mom ke saath but iska mtlb ye to nahi naa ki mujhe uski koi fikr nahi...

He took that photograph (their childhood pic)

Har din yahi soch ke aakhri band karta hu ki agli subah tum ghar bapis aa jaati but har Subah, wahi bejan sir hoti h...

Ek baar tum aa jaao naa fir mom se m mafi manguna tumhare liye, i promise m fir kabhi tang nahi karunga,

When he remembered his raising hand on her

Neil:- i am sorry (a tears drop from his eyes on the photograph)

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Sweta:- khana laga diya h khaa lena...

Neil:- mom aap abhi bhi mujhse naraz ho...

Sweta:- m apne room m jaa rahi hu kuch chahiye to bula lena...

Neil:- I am sorry mom....

Sweta:- tere sorry bolne se sab kuch pahele jaysa nahi jo jayga...

Neil:- mom!!!

She went away...

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Neil called someone..

Neil:- what...

Person:- yes sir aapne jo address diya thaa us address par to koi nahi raheta...

Neil:- aapne achhe se check kiya naa..

Person:- bahut achhe se sir Or ghar to dur aapne jo company ka naa bataaya us naam ka to koi company hi nahi h

Neil:- ok m dekhta hu...

After Call ending he throw his phone on the floor...

Neil pov.
yaha bhi nahi h...iska mtlb wo pune h hi nahi to gyi kaha, agar pune m nahi h to kaha h, jab se gyi h tb se phone kar raha but but switch off hi aata h, ohh God where is she...

When he hears voice from avni's room..

Neil:- avni ke room m kon h

Mitali:- you know what mom mene us avni ko aysa sabak sikhaaya naa ki wo apne pure life m nahi bhulegi(Laughing)

""" Dont worry mom ab to wo is ghar ke taraf dekhei bhi nahi...

Neil:- mitali!!!!!

Mitali turns

Mitali(shocking):- Neil

Neil:- get out from my house...

Mitali:- Neil meri baat to suno...

Neil:- i say get out...

Mitali:- okkk

She about to leave..

Neil:- roko..

Mitali feel happy..

She turns...

He remove ring from her finger...

Neil:- tum par suit nahi kar rahi ye ring,

After removing

Neil:- now you can go....

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