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Ram left and she sat on the bed holding her head , she was feeling like to hit her head on the wall. Then only her phone started ringing which was kept on the table. She coming out of her thought went to pick up the call and finding the unknown number, she looked at the phone confusingly.
" hello"she answered the call after picking up.

"Miss Nandini, hope you remember me" she immediately came to know that who was the person on the other side. The person was non other Manik Malhotra.

"You must be thinking that why i said yes to you , right " he asked
"yes" she answered back immediately and she got angry when she heard his laugh.
"I was right , he is really a big psycho" she thought in her mind.

"First i want to tell you that you are a great actor. You did a perfect acting to show me that how bad you are and you just want my money. I must say , good job , miss Nandini" she got confused after listening his words.
" how he came to know that i was acting"she thought confusingly.

"If you want the answer of your questions, then meet me tonight 8pm at the same place and this time i want to meet the real you , please" he requested and his request made her more confused.

"Can't we meet now" she asked because she was going crazy , thinking about this and she wanted her answers.
"okay , if you want , we can meet now"he agreed and she immediately got up from the bed and picking her bag , she started to leave.
"and don't forget i want to meet the real you" he again made her remind and she got paused for a moment and then replied .
"Okay" saying this she cut the call.

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She hurriedly stopping her car in front of the restaurant , came outside and found him waiting for her, standing outside of restaurant. She taking a deep breath walked toward him.
" so you came" he said looking at her and she just nodded her head looking at him.
" so let's go"he said and then they both walked inside the restaurant . He like a gentleman pulled the chair out for her and she sat down looking at him for once.

"Red rose for the beautiful girl" he said forwarding the red rose in front of her after sitting in front of her . She took the rose , looking at him confusingly. His acts were making her feel like she was his girlfriend and somewhere his acts were making her fall in love with him.

"I am sorry" he looked at her confusingly when suddenly she apologised.
" why sorry ?"he asked looking at her confusingly.
" sorry because i lied to you in the morning " she finally spoke the truth realising her mistake. Seeing his nature , her heart melted and listened to her heart this time. She tried to give a chance to him , that's why she wanted to clear everything between them.

"Why you lied ?" He asked resting his hand on the table and she looked at his hand first and then at him and took a deep breath.
" i lied because I don't trust you " she said looking at him and before she could say something more , Manik spoke  cutting her words.

"Because i am rich and i am a famous singer , right ?"he asked and she nodded her head positively looking at him.
" but how do you know ?" She immediately asked because she was confused that how he came to know about all this.

"First , lets just clear everything about me then i will tell you , how do i know "he said looking at her and she remained silent looking down toward her hands.

" Miss Nandini , every rich person is not like the way you think. I am not saying that what you think , that is completely wrong. I am saying that what you think about me and my family, that is completely wrong. We love each other and we respect each other , money is nothing in front of our love. I really want a girl for me, who will love us more than our money. I want her to be a good human being. I don't care if she will love me less. I just want her to love and accept my family wholeheartedly " he told her everything what he wanted and in this they both didn't come to know when his hand held her hand.

"And i know , you are the one , who fits in my wish list and who is perfect for me and for my family" she was shocked to hear that why he thought that she was perfect for him and his family .

"How do you know that i am the one  who is perfect for you and your family?" She asked to clear her doubt looking at him confusingly and then his eyes fell on their hands . She also looked at their hands and immediately withdrew her hand.

"When in the morning, you were talking to waiter , i heard both of your conversation , i came back for my wallet which i left on the table "finally he told her about the big mystery behind all this and finally her all confusion got cleared.

"for this I thanked god also because god saved me from losing the thing which is more precious than any diamond " his words shocked  her. She felt something in heart when he said those words. There was a silence between them for few minutes and in those few minutes their eyes were talking to each other.

"Nandini, when i heard your conversation with waiter , i got shocked. I couldn't able to believe on my ears. Your words touched my heart and it also made me believed that you are the only one , whom i was  trying to find from last 2 years. I hate marriage and all , i hate it because i used to think that i will never find a girl who will love me and respect me more than my money but luckily today i found you. Yes you are what i wanted " he said whatever going in his heart. Nandini was in a shock , she was confused that what was happening with her. Her mind was still not ready to trust him completely.

"When you are telling me everything then i also want to tell you what i am feeling " she said in serious tone. Then he asked her to speak , nodding his head.
"May be , Manik , you are made for me but for now , I can't trust you. I mean that I can't trust anybody in just a one meet , in a one day "she also told him what she was feeling and she felt a relief after saying this to him. He smiled because he was happy that she shared the real problem with him but it wasn't the real problem.

"I am completely understanding you , Nandini and i am not forcing you for anything, you can take your time. Before marriage we will know each other and then only we will get marry , just give a chance to me and I promise you , i will never make you regret for your decision "he said holding her hand and she felt a current passed down her spine when he held her hand , that's why she immediately took away her hand.

"i am not asking you to marry me tomorrow , so just chill " he said and chuckled on his own words , he did this to make her feel comfortable because he was noticing that she was tensed and also she wasn't comfortable. And next moment he got heart attack.

She smiled on his words and he found her smile beautiful like an angel is smiling. Her smile touched his heart and he kept her smile hiding in his heart and  that time, he also did a promise to himself that he will never let her smile fades away. He will keep her smile safe in his heart always.

"Beautiful " automatically this word came out of his mouth seeing her smile.
"What ?" She asked confusingly.
"your smile" he said still lost in thinking about her smile and then automatically she smiled again looking down and Manik again gone crazy seeing her smile.

He came back to his senses when her phone started ringing which was kept on table. "Hello"she answered the phone call after picking it up.
" Nandu , where you went suddenly without informing me ?" His dad asked worriedly.
"dad , it was an emergency, i am just coming back , i know you must be feeling hungry that's why you called me" she said having smile on her face and Manik was lost in admiring her when she was talking to her father.
"I will be there in 15 minutes dad , now bye"saying this , she cut the call. She looked at Manik and caught him staring at her.

"I am sorry, i have to go , dad want me at home because it's his stomach call and i have to prepare dinner" she said with the smile and he also smiled , listening her words.
"You don't need be sorry and i will drop you" he said immediately. She got up from chair and he also got up.
"i have my car , thank you" she said politely with the smile , finally she started behaving like a real Nandini with him.

"oh okay" he said sadly because he wanted to spend some more time with her but his bad luck , Nandini was having her car.
" then we can walk outside together" he said having a sweet smile on his face and she nodded her. Then they started walking outside.

"Bye" after sitting in the car , Nandini said looking at him through the window of the car, when he was lost looking at her.
" Nandini , i want to tell something very important to you" he said coming close to her car. "What ?"she asked immediately. " that I don't want to lose a girl like you , Nandini" when he said this , there was a silence between them for a few seconds and in those few second , their eyes were talking to each other.

" bye " Manik said and then she went driving her car and Manik was seeing her car going away from him. Nandini was doing a magic on him.
"hope to see you soon , Nandini" he said having smile on his face.
"I don't know what magic she is doing on me , i am attracting toward her more and more. From the time , i have seen her , I couldn't able to forget her beautiful face. Her face is again and again coming in front my eyes. Thank god dad found her or else i would have never met her. I know , she is the girl , whom my heart was finding" he was lost in thinking about her standing outside the restaurant and he was smiling like an idiot.

"she has gone" Listening a male voice , he came out of his thoughts and got shocked to find Cabir at the restaurant.

" what are you doing here ?" He asked looking at him moving his eyebrows up.
"When you left the house without informing anyone , I found something fishy and I followed you and then " Cabir said and Manik was giving angry glares.
"seriously bhai , from now only you have started to meet her chupke chupke " he teased him.
" Cabir , stop it okay" Manik warned him.

"I have just started bhai and you are asking me to stop , between i must say my bhabhi is very beautiful" he said and Manik again smiled as Cabir's word again brought Nandini's beautiful face in front of his eyes.

"oh my god , in a one meet that girl did a magic on you , this is a big news, i need to tell this to everyone" Seeing his smile Cabir said and then  ran from there.
"Cabir , wait" Manik shouted running behind him but he didn't listen. 
" now cabir will tell this to everyone that i came here to meet Nandini again and then i have to answer their questions that why i came again to meet her " he thought while sitting in his car.

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When Manik stepped inside the house and as he expected , Cabir was telling everything to everyone. They all were sitting in the hall and listening to Cabir carefully. Manik taking a deep breath walked toward them.
"So how was your second meet with her" Zoya asked walking toward him and Manik smiled looking down thinking about her.
" omg , you are blushing"Zoya said and everybody laughed looking at him. Manik was just trying not to smile like an idiot.

" i want to meet that girl , who did a magic on my son in just a one day " Neyonika said looking at Manik who was still smiling
" i also want to meet her" Mukti said excitedly. " me too" When Muskan said this all laughed on her words.
"don't worry tomorrow we all are going to meet her"When Raj said this , all smiled broadly and Manik was super happy to know about this.

"Daadu , will you take.. musu with yolself (yourself)" Muskan asked cutely in her sweet language and as always listening her words , everybody laughed. " how can we go without you , sweetheart " Raj replied to her lovingly.

" Mumma daddy, Musu want a new dless (dress) fol(for)  tomolow (tomorrow) " after this her cute demand came up.
" Princess, no new dress, you have already lots of dresses in your cupboard which you haven't even wear "Zoya denied strictly and she made sad pout.
"Daddy"she cried looking at Aditya.

"don't worry princess, daddy will bring a new dress for you" Aditya said and she happily came running toward Aditya.
" Adi , you are spoiling her"Zoya scolded him.
" Mumma , i am daddy's plincess (Princess) "she said showing her tongue to Zoya and hugged her daddy.
" my princess" Adi said kissing her forehead and winked at Zoya. Everybody were laughing holding their stomach seeing the funny movie live in front of their eyes , there was only a bucket full of popcorns were missing.

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At night, Nandini was lying on the bed and she was just thinking about her meet with Manik. She was smiling thinking about him.
"May be i was wrong about Manik , I didn't find anything wrong in his behaviour. In fact, his nature is very good . Dad was right , every rich people are not same . Manik is different, i should give him a chance. So tomorrow i am going to meet his family. Dad told me about his family member, his family is big . With this marriage my dream of having a huge family will be get fulfilled. Hope so everything goes well tomorrow. finally she got ready to give a chance to this marriage putting her all doubts on side but still somewhere her heart was not ready to trust him.

Before sleeping, she opened her Instagram account and got surprised to find 10k notifications. She immediately opened the notifications and started scrolling down. There were new 5k followers and at the last , she came to know the reason of getting new followers. The reason was that the Rockstar Manik Malhotra started following her.
" i got 5k followers with his one follow, what will happen when he will post picture with me"she thought like an idiot. She opened his account for the first time in her life and smiled seeing his profile and immediately followed him back. Already 20m people were following him on Instagram.

She opened his first picture, he posted that picture few hours ago only.
" when i think about you , i smile like an idiot" she chuckled reading his status because she knew he smiles like an idiot thinking about her. She opened the comment box , in most of the comments people were asking about her. She also guessed that he put this status for her.
" girls are seriously crazy for him" she said shaking her head in disbelief. One thing she didn't know  many girls were crazy for him but he was crazy for only a one girl and  that girl , she was herself. She was smiling seeing his pictures.

"Hi"when she was busy in looking at his profile, she got surprised to get his message. She immediately replied him back hi with a smiley emoji.
"so busy in checking my profile" she blushed reading his next message.
"I must say , you are very popular , you have a huge fan following , girls are crazy for you" she send the message having smile on her face.
"And i am crazy for you" she got surprised to read his this message.
"Why?"She sent the message immediately.
"Because you are special" she smiled reading his message.
" so are you ready to meet my family , tomorrow"she received his next message. "Little nervous"she sent taking a deep breath. "Don't worry , my family will not take any test of you . I am sure that they will praise you" she smiled automatically reading his message.
"good night, i am feeling sleepy" she sent the last message.
" good night My would be wife"she chuckled reading his last messages.
he is crazy" she said thinking about him .
"He is crazy for you" her heart said to her.

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