Quick announcement. This story is going under heavy rewrite, most of this story will most likely be deleted and replaced by the redone versions. But first new stories will be made by me and JohanSwarts, and maybe Omegacrow, but I have yet to have any confirmation.

Here's the rewritten version of the first chapter done by Omega, JohanShwarts, and me.

At the Loud House, Lincoln Loud was sitting in his room, in his underwear reading his favorite comic book, "Ace Savvy", he looked up at the fourth wall.

Lincoln:(to the viewers) Hey there, nice to see you, you know I'm glad to say this, cause it's been a great day for me.

<SLAM!!>

The sound comes from downstairs then Lynn Loud's voice blares out.

Lynn:(from downstairs) THIS F*CKING SUCKS!!!

Lynn Sr.: (from downstairs) Lynn Loud Jr.! Swear Jar! Now!

The sound of Lynn stomping up the stairs blares out as loud as her shouting.

Lynn:(from the hallway) TAKE IT OUT OF MY ALLOWANCE AND STICK IT!!

Another door was slammed harder than the front door.

Lincoln:(muttering) I guess Lynn isn't having a good day.

Lincoln put his comic aside then put some clothes on, he opened his door to reveal Lucy Loud, who was holding a pillow, and Edwin in her arms.

Lucy: Hello brother, Can I sleep here tonight?

Lincoln: Sure thing Luce, I'm gonna go talk to Lynn.

Lucy: I'd advise against that.

Lincoln: Still gonna do it.

Lucy: I'll start looking into how to raise the dead then.

Lucy quickly closed the door behind Lincoln, Lincoln walked over to the door of Lynn and Lucy's bedroom, he put his ear against the door to hear a faint muffled crying, Lincoln knocked on the door.

Lynn:(from inside) GO AWAY!!

Lincoln: Lynn, out of respect for your privacy, I'm simply knocking on the door. But, as your caring brother, if you don't open the door now, I'm coming in anyway and I know the door isn't locked because you broke the lock, playing hallway hockey.

Lincoln waited for a response but nothing came, Lincoln put his hand on the doorknob and turned it.

Lincoln: I'm coming in. (thinking) Okay, knowing Lynn, the first thing that will be thrown at me is...

Lincoln opened the door and tilted his head then a bat flew over his shoulder.

Lincoln:(thinking) Her bat, thrown like a spear...

Lincoln sidestepped a basketball then shut the door, then he looked at Lynn, who had her football helmet on while it was backward.

Lincoln:(thinking) Then a basketball, thrown like a dodgeball...

Lincoln called out the sports items thrown at him before Lynn ran out of items to throw at her only brother, Linc sat on the bed and Lynn held down her helmet, Lincoln gently put his hand on the helmet and raised it, Lynn didn't resist, Lincoln took the helmet off of his sister's head to show she had been crying, Lincoln gave her a sympathetic look.

Lincoln: What's wrong?

Lynn: I hurt my arm yesterday, and when me, mom, and dad went to the doctor, he said I had to take it easier on the sports, but when I got to practice someone let it slip that I was hurt and had to go easy on everyone and coach said I was kicked off of all my teams and replaced me in a second, my teammates didn't even try to stop him...

Lincoln frowned deeply then held open his arms as wide as he could.

Lincoln: Well... I can't do much, but I can comfort you the best I can.

Lynn leaped into her brother's arms and cried into his shoulder, Lincoln gently stroked her hair as she did. A few minutes earlier, in a different room of the house, Luna Loud was strumming at her guitar lightly in her room on her beanbag, she had been having a good day like Lincoln, but then she heard Lynn screaming her head off, she was almost always the one to help a sister or brother out with their problems, but when she put her guitar down and raised from the beanbag she heard Lincoln knocking at Lynn's door and smiled at the sound of her brother's unyielding determination to help Lynn, she flopped back onto the beanbag.

Luna: Good on ya, bro. Good on ya.

But before she could grab her guitar, the sound of the front door burst open followed by running sounded out, then Luna's room door was slammed open by Luan Loud, but she was covered in red paste, she had a black eye, and she looked like she had been crying for a long time, Luna jumped up and ran over her sister.

Luna: Dude, What Happened?!

Luan: T-The p-p-popular girls a-a-a-at s-s-school p-p-paid e-everyone a-at s-s-school t-t-to p-plet me w-w-with t-tam-mat-tos a-and o-o-one o-of t-t-t-them t-t-t-thr-rew a-a r-r-rock, t-they e-e-even t-t-t-tap-ped i-i-it.

Luna's eyes widened in shock, then she scowled.

Luna:(thinking) Those bloody c*nts are always pulling this sh*t!

Luna put her hands on Luan's shoulders and smiled.

Luna: Well, let's get you cleaned up, and then we can worry about the video.

Luan nodded and the two went into the bathroom, Luna only going in with her to put medicine on her black eye after she got out of the shower, in another different room of the house, Lisa Loud was working on some small device, it was overly high tech watch, she was moving delicately wearing earmuffs, she was about to move an extraordinarily small part inside the watch, minutes seemed to fly right by her as she focused.

Lisa:(quietly) Careful, careful, almost...

Lisa moved no more than a millimeter and the watch began to let off a light humming noise, Lisa sighs in relief and takes off her earmuffs.

Lisa: Success! Temporal Stabilizer Online!

Lynn Sr.: Good work, Lisa, with what that means.

Lisa: AHH!!

Lisa jumped up as she screamed, her glasses flew off and she fell on her butt then after putting her glasses back on, she turned to see Lynn Sr. standing behind her.

Lisa: Father, why did you approach me like our Spooky Sister unit?

Lynn Sr.: You looked like you were busy, so I waited until you were done.

Lisa: I see, so why are you here?

Lynn Sr.: We're about to go to the grand canyon, I've packed your things for the trip, now let's hustle.

Lynn Sr. picks up Lisa then carries her out of her room.

Lisa: But I'm On The Edge Of Astronomical Discovery!

Lynn Sr.: If you got there once you can get there even faster the second time.

The two got downstairs where everyone but Luna, Lincoln, Luan, and Lynn were there.

Lisa: Wait, where is our Elder Brother, Fifth Eldest Sister, Fourth Eldest Sister, and Third Eldest Sister?

Lynn Sr.: I still don't know why you call them that, anyway, Luan and Lynn had a rough day so Lincoln and Luna said they stay behind to comfort them.

Lisa: Uh, Could I stay behind as well to assist my siblings?

Lynn Sr.: The last time I believed that I found Lana sleeping in the junkyard with the dogs and Lola tried to board a plane to France!

Lana: I was just making friends!

Lola: I was just making my debut!

Despite Lisa's attempts to stay home, she was dragged to the van, when it was out of the driveway and down the road, with the four siblings, they were in Luna's and Luan's bedroom, Lincoln and Lynn on the beanbag, and Luan and Luna on the bottom bunk bed, Luan had an ice pack strapped to her eye like an eyepatch.

Lynn: Dang those bitches got you good.

Luan: Yeah, I think it's gonna be a while before this will heal.

Lincoln: I know a way to get it fixed up in a jiffy.

Luna: How so, little dude?

Lincoln: You know all those fights I'm forced into with you girls and I get the worse front of it?

The girls looked away from their brother sheepishly.

Lincoln: Well, I talked Lisa into making something that will fix up injuries in a snap and it's usually how I can walk around normally like it never happened.

Lynn: I always wondered about that.

The three sisters followed their younger brother to Lily's and Lisa's bedroom, Lincoln opened the door and went inside, Lincoln went to the drawer as the other three entered the room, Lincoln pulled out a small bottle of green tablets.

Lincoln:(takes out two tablets) Here you go.

Lincoln tossed a tablet to the two injured girls, Luan and Lynn ate the tablets, Luan's black eye completely vanished and Lynn rolled her arm.

Luan:(takes off the ice pack and winks) Nice!

Lynn: Whooh Whooh!!

Lynn picked up Lincoln and started spinning him around.

Lynn: Thank You Lincoln!!

Lincoln: Lynn, We shouldn't be horsing around in here who know what-

Lincoln's foot knocks over the table where Lisa's high-tech watch was and it starts sputtering out of control when it hits the floor.

Luna: Dudes, What Is That?!

Luan: Lynn, What Did You Do?!

Lynn: Not Sure Right Now!!

Lincoln: Get Out Of The Room!!

The four siblings turned for the door but then the reality was warped inward toward the watch, then reality snapped back to normal but a great chunk of the house was gone, then Vanzilla pulled back into the driveway.

Lisa: MY RESEARCH!!

Rita:(shocked) MY BABIES!!

Lynn Sr.: LISA!! WHAT HAPPENED TO THE HOUSE!?!?

Lisa: It seems the four siblings were caught in a temporal flux and were transported somewhere else.

Lynn Sr.: WHERE WERE THEY SENT?!?!

Lisa: If my device did what it was supposed to then they were sent to another world entirely, if not they were sent into the sun.

The family was shocked to hear that and began crying, Lisa simply glared as she looked at the hole in the house.

Unknown Area...

Lincoln slowly opened his eyes to see that he was still in Lisa's room, but the door leading to a field toward a forest, as he stumbled to his feet, he heard the others wake up, Lincoln turned around to see his sisters slowly getting up.

Lincoln: Guys! Are You Okay?!

Luna: I'm good Dude.

Lynn: Me too.

Luan: Me three. that was a blast wasn't it, hahaha- Sorry that was outta habit.

Luan's siblings groaned as she rubbed the back of her neck, then there was a low growl from outside, Lincoln peeked outside to see a black bear with white stripes on its body and long arms.

The albino boy immediately retreated into the room, out of curiosity, the girls peeked out as well, only to run from the door and to the far back corner of the room, they all felt a sudden tremble.

Lincoln:(whispering) Guys, I think we're on a cliff get over here!

Luna:(whispering) No Way Dude!

Lynn:(whispering) What if it's just a small cliff?

Luan:(whispering) And what if that thing smells us?!

Lincoln:(whispering) If there's a large cliff then we'll fall to our death!

Luna:(whispering) Sorry bro, we're not moving!

Lincoln was about to say something when on the outside of the detached room, which was on a very high up cliff, a bird that resembles an archaeopteryx, its body is green, while the feathers on its wings are multicolored, landed on the top of the room.

The bird's landing was short as the room tilted and the bird pushed off the room, sending it off the edge.

Lincoln/Luan/Luna/Lynn: Ah, Crapbaskets!

As the Loud siblings were tumbling inside the room, down the cliff on a cliffside road, there was a large group of men, the biggest man was a spiky black-haired man with his hair in a ponytail, tan-ish skin, and bags under his eyes, wearing a white shirt with gold buttons, white pants, white shoes, a white coat with gold frills on the shoulders and the kanji for justice on the back, and bandages on his arms.

Most of the other men had a few things in common, like being muscular and wearing white sleeveless shirts, blue pants, blue ascots, and white hats with the words "Marine" on them in a teal rectangle.

They were pulling some stone boxes, chained up and in wagons, there were wagons with food and water jugs.

???:(with venom in his voice) Alright, men. I know you don't like it but we must deliver the packages to Blackbeard.

The men grumbled then one spoke up.

Man #1: Why do we have to do it, Admiral Chashi?

'Chashi': Well, it will keep the Blackbeard Pirates happy and from attacking the marine base.

The men pulling the wagons with stone boxes stopped and wiped their brows.

Man #2: Admiral Chashi, permission to take a break?

Chashi: Fine, grab some water and lunch, we'll continue onward.

The men parked the wagon and they all went over to the wagon filled with food, then they heard loud rumbling from above.

Man #1: What is-

<CRASH!!!>

Out of nowhere the room that the Loud siblings were in came crashing down on top of the wagons with the stone boxes, then continued down the cliff, taking the wagons with it, the men and Chashi backed away from the crash area and hit the deck when the room passed by Chashi stood back up.

Chashi: IS EVERYONE ALRIGHT!?!?

The men stood back up, all uninjured.

Chashi: Good, what was that?

???: Whatever it was, it took off with the packages.

Chashi and the men turned around to see an enormous man, standing around 689 cm tall, his hair was black and tan skin, he wore a black jacket with grey paw-like prints and a white crosshair, a grey hat with black paw-like prints and bear ears, brown gloves, grey with brown spots, and black boots.

Chashi/Men: Kuma!!

'Kuma': I can see you've lost the items.

Chashi:(angry) What are you doing here?

Kuma simply looked at Chashi. With the Loud siblings, they were out cold, the room was completely busted open, and the stone boxes were near them, Lincoln woke up and looked around, he looked at the girls.

Lincoln: Luna, Lynn, Luan!!

Lincoln looked over his sisters, they were slightly battered but fine overall.

Lincoln:(smiles) Okay, they're fine.

Kuma: Targets found.

Lincoln turned around to see Kuma, he shook in fear at the sheer size of the man, Kuma approached the Louds, Lincoln was frozen as Kuma passed him, all he could do was have his eyes follow the man, Kuma grabbed one of the boxes by its chains.

Kuma: Items acquired, each unharmed, (looks at the Louds) I should deal with the assailants.

Lincoln's eyes widened at Kuma as he took off his gloves revealing panda paw pads on his palms, Kuma reached toward Luna.

Kuma: I should be quick about it, I don't want a mess.

It didn't take a genius to figure out what he was gonna do to Luna.

Lincoln: S-stop... (Kuma ignores him) S-Stop... (Kuma's hand nears Luna) STOP!!!

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Kuma felt like he was being pushed back away from Luna, Kuma got into a guarding position but then one of the stone boxes struck him in the face, knocking him down. Lincoln had grabbed the boxes and swung into the massive man's face like a wrecking ball, then Luna, Lynn, Luan stirred awake, they looked up at their brother.

Luna: Lincoln?

The sisters stood up and Lincoln looked at them happily but his expression changed soon after, Lincoln dropped the chain to the box.

Lincoln: Girls, we need to get out of here!

Lynn: What? Why?

Suddenly, Kuma appears behind Lincoln holding the box that Lincoln used to strike him, time seemed to just slow down for everyone, Kuma was in his thoughts.

Flashback

Back with Kuma, Chashi, and Chashi's men, they were staring down at each other.

Chashi: So you gonna answer me?

Kuma:... I'm here to steal the packages...

Chashi: You're already in trouble with the Admirals for letting the Straw Hats escape, why do this?

Kuma: The same reason as you...

Chashi's eyes widened at Kuma.

Kuma: I don't wish for these items to come into the possession of the Marines' leading forces.

Chashi sneered at the massive man.

Chashi: And what are you gonna do with them? With most of the Marine higher-ups glaring down your metallic ass for you letting the Straw Hats go free. You can't just carry them around.

Kuma: I'll give them to someone who I believe can be trusted with them.

Chashi clicked his tongue.

Chashi: Do what you want, but this conversation never happened.

Kuma: What conversation?

Flashback End

Kuma:(thinking) I've found the perfect owners.

Lincoln: RUN, RUN RIGHT NO-!

Kuma swiped his hand at the albino boy, putting the box in his arms, a sound similar to a bubble popping rang out and Lincoln was gone without a trace, the girls were speechless, their brother was gone and nowhere to be seen.

Luna:(slowly walking) You... You... YOU... YOU SON OF BITCH!!!

Luna grabbed a loose piece of wood and swung it at Kuma but the massive man vanished and reappeared behind the rocker girl with another one of the stone boxes.

Lynn: LUNA! BEHIND YOU! BEHIND-

Lynn's words were in vain as Kuma swiped his hand at Luna, putting the box in her arms, a sound similar to a bubble popping rang out again and Luna disappeared into thin air, just like Lincoln did, Lynn was about to go into a fit of rage but Luan stopped her.

Luan: LYNN, WE NEED TO RUN, NOW!!

Lynn was about to but then she spotted one of Lisa's scalpel collections, she quickly picked it up and hurled it at the massive man, hoping it would at least slow him down, or cut him up, but Kuma blocked the scalpels with his paw pads, the scalpels were suddenly sent flying back at the girls, Lynn pushed Luan to the ground but before she could take cover, one of the scalpels sliced her upper left arm, Luan turned around on the ground to look at Lynn but froze immediately, behind Lynn was Kuma holding the last two boxes.

Luan: LYNN!! MOVE!! MOVE-

Lynn was swiped at by Kuma, she and the box vanished just like her sister and brother, Luan slowly backed away from Kuma but the massive man soon swiped at her, Luan screamed at the top of her lungs but she was soon silenced as she disappeared with the box in her arms.

Kuma:(puts on gloves) Now to retreat.

???: YOU'RE NOT GOING ANYWHERE!!!

Kuma turned around but was blindsided by a massive shadow.

With Lincoln he was laying in a panda paw-shaped hole in the ground, the box beside him broken open, the albino woke up slowly.

Lincoln: I'm gonna get brain damage if I keep getting knocked out like this.

The albino boy then remembered what happened, he got to look around but found he was in a completely different area than before, he was in the middle of a cloudy tundra, Lincoln hung his head in shame.

Lincoln: I couldn't protect my family... I'm a failure.

Lincoln noticed the box and looked at it in confusion.

Lincoln: I thought he was there to get this thing.

The albino boy walked over to the box and flipped it over revealing the contents, there were two things inside the box, the first was a cyan fruit with swirls on the skin and two yellow leaves.

The second was a sword out of its scabbard, the sword had a golden handguard with a ruby in it, a black handle, and a bigger ruby for the pommel.

Lincoln's stomach growled.

Lincoln: Well, guess it's lunchtime. (picks up the fruit) It must be good if they were guarding it.

Lincoln quickly ate the fruit and the moment he swallowed the fruit, his face turned green and purple, he began gagging and dry heaving in an attempt to throw up the fruit but yielded no results.

Lincoln:(thinking) Why won't it come up?!

Suddenly Lincoln felt searing pain all over his body, his body started letting off electricity, the skin of his neck began turning into blue scales, then he started to vibrate at high speeds, he opened one of his eyes to show a slitted yellow eye.

***

Elsewhere, with Luna, The rocker girl was laying in a panda paw-shaped hole in the ground, the box was beside her broken open, Luna snapped awake and jolted up.

Luna: I'M GONNA F*CKING KILL YOU FAT F*CK!!!!

Luna took deep breaths as she looked around her, she was in dense marshland, she flopped onto her back, then started hitting her head.

Luna: DAMMIT, DAMMIT, DAMMIT, DAMMIT, DAMMIT, DAMMIT, DAMMIT, DAMMIT, DAMMIT, DAMMIT, DAMMIT, DAMMIT!!! THAT SON OF A BITCH!!!

The rocker girl stopped herself and looked at the sky with tears in her eyes.

Luna: Lynn... Luan... Lincoln...

Luna rubbed her eyes to stop her tears from running then her hands hit the box, she looked at the stone box.

Luna: What the?

The rocker girl flipped the box and saw two objects, the first was a plum-like dark purple fruit with swirls on the skin and a crimson stem and leaf.

The second was a golden ball.

Luna: Well I guess I can eat my frustrations out.

Luna took the fruit and threw it into her mouth, then as she chewed it, she picked up the golden ball.

Luna:(thinking) I've seen Mick Swagger chew on a metal ball, maybe this is just a fancy version of it.

The rocker girl swallowed the fruit and tasted the fruit, it was so gross, words couldn't describe it, she then felt searing pain all over her body, she fell on her back and the ball fell into her mouth.

Luna:(thinking) Maybe I can bite it to-

When Luna bit the ball, it broke with a loud crunch, then the pain got even worse than before, Luna's screams of pain suddenly started to grow louder by the second, her body started growing thick fur, then she touched the ground and it began to shake violently then she began to grow, one of her eyes snapped open to reveal a slitted light blue eye.

***

In another location, with Lynn, the sports fanatic was laying in a panda paw-shaped hole in the ground, the box that came with her was beside her broken open, Lynn rolled over on her left side touching her wound, she jolted up the moment she did.

Lynn: OW SON OF A-

Lynn looked at her surroundings, she was in a jungle, she quickly ripped off a piece of her shirt and wrapped it around her wound, she then spotted the box out of the corner of her eye.

Lynn: Well, let's hope there's something that can help me.

The sports fanatic opened the box fully, she saw a rolled-up scroll the size of a large football wrapped around a stone scroll rod and tie together with a reddish-brown strip of fabric,

And a red and black pill is no bigger than a small bean.

Lynn took the scroll and opened it, it had millions of pictures and words, but all words were in kanji.

Lynn: Thank god Lincoln likes the Japanese dub manga, otherwise, I'd never learned to read Japanese.

The sports fanatic traced across the words with her finger, the first quarter of the scroll was the martial arts that she's heard of but they were practiced way differently and dangerous, the next quarter has martial arts that she never even heard of.

Lynn: D... D-D... Diab... D-Diable Ja... Jam... Jambe......... What the f*ck is that?!

Lynn read through the words as best she could, but then her wound made itself apparent.

Lynn: OW! Son of a bitch!

The sports fanatic rubbed near the wound then her eyes landed on the pill.

Lynn: Maybe it will help with the pain.

Lynn picked the pill up and held it like she was about to flip a coin.

Lynn: Pass the lips, through the gums, look out stomach here it comes!

The sports fanatic flipped the pill into the air and caught it in her mouth, she clapped and raised her hands.

Lynn: It's Good! Lynn Loud For The-

Lynn felt extreme amounts of pain and found it hard to breathe, she fell to her knees, her body suddenly started growing, then as she screamed in pain and then two strands of her hair started turning themselves, white, one in the back, one in the front, Lynn soon passed out as her body grew larger.

***

With Luan, the comedian was laying in a panda paw-shaped hole in the ground, the box that came with her was beside her broken open, Luan jumped awake screaming, she soon calmed down where she noticed that Kuma wasn't there anymore and that she was now on the top of a mountain.

Luan: How- When- WHAT THE F*CK JUST HAPPENED?!?!?!

Luan stood up and looked for a way down, there was no other way down, except by climbing down.

Luan: AW THIS IS JUST GREAT, I CAN'T EVEN THINK OF A PUN TO CALM ME DOWN!!!

The comedian kicked the box, as it flew open, Luan held her foot in pain.

Luan: OH, BAD IDEA, BAD IDEA!!!

Luan looked at the box, she saw two things, what looked to be a silver ball, and a red shell with a red-pink color inside.

Luan picked up the silver ball, the faint smell hit her nose, she found it coming from the ball.

Luan: Medicine is normally scentless so this must be some kind of rich person candy, maybe it will help me calm down, very "sweet" of that man to give me some, ha ha ha ha ha, Get-

The comedian remembered that she was the only one upon the mountain, she sighed and flicked the ball into her mouth, it was quite sweet and almost like taffy to chew, it didn't get caught in her braces, it almost felt like it was just sliding through it, soon after she started chewing, she felt a strange feeling in her eyes, the feeling suddenly turned painful, she tried to scream but the moment she tried her jaw shut itself and continued to chew, she kicked as she tried to force open her mouth, her foot landed on the shell, a loud gong blared out and Luan soon found that the ground under her was now a big and deep crater, she soon passed out from the pain, her jaw hung open after she passed out and the silver 'candy' was completely consumed.

***

With Kuma, he looked like he was beaten up by a 50-foot tall monster, bits of his clothes were ripped to sunder and mechanical parts were sticking out.

Kuma: (in thought) I sense great potential in those four young children. Perhaps they can become as strong as them.... I do believe I made the right choice since my time is up. Let's see just how strong those children become...

That's it for now, I'll add pictures at a later date, I hope you liked it.