AdriannaRaines3172

Book: Till Eternity Lasts

Title: 5/5
Intriguing! When I read the title at first, I thought of what type of book this would be. The title really brought me in and I was dying to start reading! It's a really awesome title :)

Book Cover: 5/5
I am so IN LOVE with the cover! It's so aesthetic and so simple at the same time! It's a really good cover and it definitely drew me in.

Blurb: 10/10
I absolutely love the blurb. Starting it with such a quote hooked me right in. It was simple and sweet. The ending was also really nice so I give you props for that. It's a beautiful summary and it definitely did its job.

Plot: 20/20
Wow! Just wow! Starting the story off at a festival and having her bump into Jimin which in turn caused her camera to break was definitely an intriguing setup. I also love how you made the story progress after that. I kept wondering why was she so mean to him then you revealed that he stood her up and I was like 'oh no he didn't!' I'm really amazed at how you explained everything without info dumping and her meeting Jimin again was something I didn't expect. I love how you tied in her meeting with Jimin to her job and I'm also glad that she forgived him. I'm just stuck wondering why he would actually bail on her if he liked her so much. I love the interactions between Jimin and her at the hospital with the children and Jimin helping her for the wedding anniversary. I really love the plot and I only read five chapters.

Grammar & Spelling: 9.5/10
The grammar was really good and so was the spelling. I kept seeing sun however with a capital S which does not need to be capitalized if in the middle of a sentence. Other than that, I think the grammar and spelling was really good!

Character Development: 10/10
I love Felicity so much. I think she's an amazing character. I can see that she gets to do her dream job and I think she got more confident and a little more free than she was 10 years ago. I think with Jimin, he didn't really change much since he was still his cheerful self but I think he got a better outlook on life since he started being with the children. I love the characters and I really think you did a great job with them!

Overall: 59.5/60
I really love the book! I think it's a great book with a lot of potential. The characters are lovely and even though the plot came from a prompt from the Open Novella contest, it definitely has a plot of its own. You can really write a book as I literally found close to no faults with it. I'd love to read the rest of the chapters so expect some reads from me ;). I hope you do well in the contest cause you deserve it!