Mammals feel it everywhere
Dashing and leaping without any care
Breathing in the clear fresh air
Prancing through the flowers there

Birds feel it in the sky
Flying up and up so high
Singing sweetly for a time
Spreading wings of feathered light

It is wind gusting strong
It is water in its bubbling song
It's the road you've traveled all along
Its name is freedom and it's never wrong

Feel it inside your heart
See it in the old and young
Watch it play the strongest part
Freedom strong as sunsun

Sunsun is a very strong African wood. I'd like feedback from you guys because I've never written a poem, unless you count my terrible prophecy from The Mage Prophecy. As this is a school project I would like all the pointers I can get.

May the speed force be with you!