Reviewer : RaeDavis21

Author : SunshineBandito

• COVER : 4/10

The colour scheme is okay, if not a trifle bit dull. And it lacks the name of the Author. Based on readers attractiveness, it looks plain and if it meant to compete with many books of the same caliber out there, then it's SEVERELY lacking.

• TITLE : 8.5/10

It's sweet, nice and doesn't border on being Cheesy.

• BLURB : 8/10

I like it. It's quick and gets to the point. Although not much interests the reader, because it's the same Cliché Cold hearted boss /Free spirited Employee.

• CREATIVITY : 6/10

Even though the cliché story line, it was well constructed. I especially love the use of third person omniscient as a narrative. Though I could foretell the ending of the book from the first Chapter.

• PLOT : 10/15

It seems a little bit fast paced. I would have loved some back story behind the characters before they actually met.

• CHARACTERS : 7/10

Laney comes of as being Drab and surreal. I most of all, like Mr McKenna, he portrays the right emotions at the appropriate time. Unlike Laney, he seems real.

• GRAMMAR : 8.5/15

Again, well constructed. Only a few mistakes. I presume the writer means to correct her errors in due time.

• COMMUNICATION : 5/5

She adhered and replied all her Readers comments. And in a polite manner. Well done.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 7/15

I would have liked to see more. The writer CAN do better. Though I read the first 5 chapters only. But what I garnered was, a fantastically brilliant writer with a poor story line. If the plot of the story had been maybe a female Cold hearted Boss and a jovial male employee, that would have interested me. It would have been a first on Wattpad. But then, if wishes were horses beggars would ride.

• TOTAL : 64/100