Author : Priya_dh_K

Reviewer : constadd

• COVER : 8/10

A beautiful cover which beautifully depicts the essence of the entire story.

• TITLE : 8/10

The title is mysterious and intriguing. For now I can't really comment on if it matches the storyline as the story is still ongoing.

• BLURB : 9/10

The blurb is very nice. I literally jumped back to start to see if I could get any hint of how the story will unfold ahead but all in vain. It manages well to keep the mystery.

• CREATIVITY : 9/10

The story is presented very well. In this fast moving world where every emotion is reduced to emoticons I loved how the characters conveyed their feelings through the letters. I really liked the content of the letters. I felt the instant connection with it because even I like to keep an account of my days spent especially with her moving out scene. The same happened with me too.

• PLOT : 13/15

The plot is quite different and unique. I really liked how you've kept the mysterious man still a mystery. I don't know why but I really thought that El and Jas would end up together but here comes the mysterious man. I am eager to see how the story unfolds.

• CHARACTERS : 8/10

Your wordings brought out the personality of the characters beautifully. I really liked the fact that even the supporting characters got to use the limelight.

• GRAMMAR : 13/15

Each and every line of the story showcases a good use of the rich vocabulary. But I felt in places that you have made a wrong choice of words. For instance the line below is in ch 2:
It was a least expected accident that took their life in progress.
It would have been more nice if you wrote 'process' instead of 'progress'.
Also there were few spelling mistakes.

• COMMUNICATION : 4/5

Communicated well with the readers yet there were few comments left unanswered.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15

I really enjoyed reading your story so far. It made me divulge into my own memory lane while I was parting away from my school friends and moving out of my old house. Like El, even I wrote down all my emotions and various memories of that place in my diary before leaving. Please update regularly. I can't wait to read more.

• TOTAL : 86/100