Author : maybebutunlikely

Reviewer : Aesthetically_Lazy

• COVER : 5/10

I don't like the cover. It gives a completely different vibe than what the story is about. The first thing I thought when I looked at it was a mystery/thriller concept but that's completely different from what I read in the chapters. It's not a bad cover but I don't understand how it fits with the story.

• TITLE : 8/10

You explained the meaning of it in the blurb and it's definitely a unique title. But again, how is this relevant to the story? Is there something at the end where you explain why you chose the title through the story? If yes, I would definitely like to know!

• BLURB : 10/10

I want to give your blurb an 11/10 because it immediately attracted me! Giving that tiny excerpt from the story was amazing and it wasn't completely irrelevant either because I understood what the story was about and also how the characters in the book (especially the MC) were going to be portrayed! Good job.

• CREATIVITY : 9/10

I have read many stories similar to this on Wattpad so it was kinda predictable BUT you added your own little twists and magic to it which made it cooler. It's not particularly a cliche from what I read in the first four chapters but I hope that it doesn't turn into one later on in the story.

• CHARACTERS : 10/10

I love Clair's character. From the blurb, I could imagine what kind of person she was going to be and you portrayed her perfectly well. I am not completely sure about Kai at this point because I didn't really fancy him at the beginning but with the way you have portrayed Clair, I am certain you have done a good job with Kai as well. Good job!

• PLOT : 15/15

The pace is perfect and there are a lot of ups and downs which always makes the plot ten times more interesting. You don't really need to change anything here. Good job.

• GRAMMAR : 14/15

Your grammar was on point except for a few punctuation errors here and there. You can just edit everything after you are done with the story.

• COMMUNICATION : 2/5

I didn't see your reply to a lot of comments. Try replying to as many as you can.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15

The cover kinda threw me off at the beginning but your blurb made up for it and pulled me into the stories.
The chapters were great too! It's a good story.

• TOTAL : 88/100

Good job! If you have any questions, pm me. Stay safe :)