Author :  amygdala-

Reviewer : Sam_Frazier

• COVER : 7/10

I think you were trying to be aesthetic, but it doesn't really convey the plot well. Maybe it's like a metaphor or something? It's plain, so I do feel it could use some creativity.

• TITLE : 9/10

It may not be powerfully eye-catching, but it does fit the plot and is unique too.

• BLURB : 8/10

Firstly, there was a ton of irrelevant info repeated in the blurb, which needs to cut out from the blurb to make it look interesting. Info like, how his relationship with his friends is like, or how many years he has been friends with those people and other not-really-necessary back story. Keep backstory in the blurb only and only if that's the only thing the plot is about.

Apart from that, it didn't have any run-on sentences, or big grammatical errors, so good job!

• PLOT : 13/15

It's pretty unique and I must say I love the way it's going. I'm not really sure what the main conflict or obstacle in the plot is, but the theme is nice.

Apart from the lack of a conflict, I don't think I was able to find any weak points for the plot.

Tho I have a question, (just curious)
What's the difference between genderqueer and non-binary? You can talk about it in the book if you want, it'd be really helpful for readers to know more about the subject.

• CREATIVITY : 9/10

The story idea was pretty creative, and I think it is a pretty good novel so far.
It may not have had the best of narratives, but that can be worked upon later.

• CHARACTERS : 8/10

Firstly, it feels really great to finally read something diverse, so thank you for the wonderful characters.

All of them had their own flaws and imperfections, and the character arcs were well written too.

The only thing I felt lacking was Jesse Lee's character. Her character intro and description wasn't done as good as the others', or maybe I feel like that because it was just one chapter. Maybe later in the book we'll find out?

• GRAMMAR : 13/15

There wasn't really much I remember to be written wrongly, except for the occasional typos and tense errors.

Occasionally you switched from present tense to past tense, so make sure that you don't repeat that. As majority of the story has been written in present tense, I'd recommend you continue to do that.

Other than that, I didn't find anything specific, so good job!

• COMMUNICATION : 3/5
(WITH READERS)

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15

I enjoyed reading it!

• TOTAL : 73/100