Author : AlexisYorke

Reviewer : constadd

• COVER : 6/10

The cover is basic and nice but doesn't suit with your title and blurb. There isn't any effort in the cover, maybe a different picture with a better font will look good.

• TITLE : 7/10

The title is nice. Well all the revelations start right from the 2nd chapter. I guess you took the title too seriously.

• BLURB : 7/10

The blurb is informative but not intriguing.

• CREATIVITY : 6/10

Well the history and backstory of the vampire world are way too good. I really enjoyed reading them. But as I mentioned in the title part, all the revelations start quite early which doesn't create any suspense and excitement amongst the readers. It's like, in one paragraph, the MC's mind is filled with questions but in the next para, she gets all the answers. I also felt the presentation is a little bit poor. For instance, the character Clara is given a mirror rippling entry in the story which was described nicely in Agnes's room. So, the readers know it. But you have explained it two more times when Agnes and Mom asks 'who is clara?' . You could have just written 'I explained everything that happened at Agnes's house' instead of writing the exact same thing at three different places.

• PLOT : 13/15

The plot is very interesting and fresh. I could say that I have not read something like this before.

• CHARACTERS : 8/10

The characters are very well developed. Only 10 chapters are up but those are enough to give a better understanding of the personalities of the characters introduced till now.

• GRAMMAR : 12/15

There were few grammatical errors. Like spelling mistakes: from became form, Prey became pray, and many more.
Articles and prepositions were missing at some places.

• COMMUNICATION : 4/5

Communicated nicely with the readers.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 11/15

The story is really nice but too upfront. I think some secrecy and suspense would do no harm.

• TOTAL : 74/100