Author : UnicornUni2

Reviewer : srabonyislam

⚫ COVER : 7/10

The book cover is simple and nice. But, I think it can be better. Try to make it more similar with your storyline. Which will give a perfect vibe of your story.

⚫ TITLE : 10/10

Title is perfectly matched with story. It's reflect your story nicely.

⚫ BLURB :6 /10

Blurb is simple but not well arranged. It can't attract readers fully. You can write things in this way, (just a suggestion)
Jennie, who hates emma with full of her hearts. One morning, jennie came to know, emma was murder with no mercy. As she and emma had a fight in elevator the night of emma's murder. Cops arrested jennie as murderer.
But, someone have faith on Jennie. He know she is not the murderer. What will they do?
What's the reason because of their fighting?
Why they become enemy? Who murder emma? What do you think Jennie is innocent? Then who Framed her?

⚫ CREATIVITY : 9/10

Story idea was is interesting and nice. But, in some scenarios, it just rushed away. I couldn't feel all scenarios well. So, I will suggest the author don't rushed away, try to describe more and more. It will help help the readers to connect with your story.

⚫ PLOT : 11/15

Plots are nice and interesting. But, author jumped in the main story too fast. Also, many plots are rushed away. When, cops suspected jennie as murderer, when cop went to arrest her that you didn't mention. Also, where is her parents. When she came back to her house that night after fighting with emma, her father or mother didn't ask anything. Many things, author missed out. It will be nice if author add all of this. Because, as a reader I have all of this questions in my mind. Don't rushed with your plots. Take your time and try to describe more.

⚫ CHARACTERS : 7/10

Characters are good. But, I didn't get much information about all characters. Also as I said, I felt plots and scenarios are rushed away, I didn't feel that much connected with all characters it was just, it's gone before coming. So, it will be nice if you add some more information about Characters. About lead characters and their family and friends.

⚫ GRAMMAR : 13/15

Author is really good at grammar. I didn't found much grammatical errors. There were some tiny ones but, that can be improve while editing.

⚫ COMMUNICATION : 3/5

Author didn't reply all comments. Try to reply readers Comments. It will help readers to connect with you and your story.

⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12/15

Story was interesting. I hooked up with the story. I'm gonna read the full story. It's really nice and interesting. But, all of I mentioned earlier it's truly needed. Please don't feel bad or dissuade. Your story is really interesting. Keep it up. It will be more nice with some changes.

⚫ Total : 78/100

Best of luck. I hope my review will help you to improve your work.