Author: bored_mama

Reviewer: SavySagittarius

Cover: 6/10

The cover is a bit too simple and although I like the dark theme and it goes well with the storyline. People do judge books by the cover and if they were scrolling through Wattpad for a good book to read, they might skip yours thinking it is just similar to other stories of that genre. You want to spike the interest of future readers with the cover, make them want to click on it. Being a vampire based story, make it spookier or creepier. 

Title: 8/10

I have seen a lot of books on Wattpad about vampires, most of the books have same type of title but it's like that with yours, which makes it unique from other vampire stories.

blurb: 10/10

I love the blurb. It wasn’t too long or too short; it didn’t give too much, or it wasn’t confusing to a point of turning potential readers off. Great Job!

Creativity: 10/10

You have come up with a unique story. I am glad I got to know that your story is very different from other stories about vampires. They usually tend to be all the same, and you came up with a totally different concept. Great Job!

Plot: 15/15

Just like with the creativity. I usually am turned off by vampire stories because the plot is always the same. A human girl finding a mate and losing all independence, or vampires looking for mates finding it and losing all independence. You have no idea how pleasantly surprised I was when I saw your plot. It’s about a girl who’s learning and finding something she didn’t know about the town she lives in. It has love, mystery, and whatnot?

Character: 5/10                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Although I believe that every character has been very well thought of and developed. There was a lack of description whenever there was something about a character. It was mostly a conversation type. I had a hard time, in the beginning, trying to remember the characters is not a big issue by chapter five I was familiarized with and I love Anna. I do hope the review helps bring this amazing and make it perfect.

Grammar: 15/15                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Grammar was perfect and although there was a need for more description so I could see the scene there was a description in every chapter we just need a bit more and your golden.

Communication: 5/5                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       I must admit I was very impressed with your communication with your readers. There are a lot of people in book clubs and they tend to ignore comments from fellow book club members. And you answer every single one by saying thank you or saying that you will use the suggestions and don't lose hope that it’s always great to build a relationship with your readers.

Overall: 15/15 I love your story. I am usually not a fan of stories of this genre as I find them all to be the same and yours was unique and kept me guessing every single chapter. I love that! You have an amazing story at your hands and keep up the talented work!

TOTAL: 89/100