Author : Sam_8813

Reviewer : srabonyislam

⚫ COVER : 7/10

Cover is beautiful. But, it's not fully reflect the story. I think, it will be good if you change the cover with something more similar also the font can be changed.

⚫ TITLE : 10/10

Book title goes perfectly with the storyline.

⚫ BLURB : 6/10

Blurb written preety well. But, it's looks kinda messy or not so well arranged. Try to arrange your blurb with a short description of your story which can grow intrest among the readers. If you are using some conversation for the blurb then, write it with more suspense and emotions, which can touch the readers easily. You write Warning in the blurb it's good. But, write it after writing the blurb.
Example :
Warning :
*I warn you guys, if you have any past memory or anything don't read the story.
*This story contains violence, sexual activity, mature content.
*Please forgive me, if I hurt anyone.

(After writing the blurb you can point out warning like above. It will look arranged)

⚫ CREATIVITY : 8/10

Author is really creative. Story concept was nice. I read some contract marriage book but, this book is really nice.

⚫ PLOT : 10/15

Story plots are good. But, I couldn't feel many scenarios. It just rushed away. Plots are not that well arranged. From the beginning, when both lead characters meet. It was rushed. I couldn't feel it. What was they feeling when they first saw each other? Then when, Yunlan's dad fall sick, I also didn't feel connected with his emotions. When Wei offered Yunlan about the contract when Yunlan signed the contract. Then in hospital. Really, I didn't feel connected with plots. Don't rush with your plots. Take your time and arranged it perfectly.

⚫ CHARACTERS : 7/10

Story Character's are described nicely. But, as I say earlier, I felt plots was rushed away. So, the Characters also. If you fixed the plots Characters will be also fixed with the flow. If you rushed your plots, your story characters development also came first. So, I will suggest you to slow down your plots which will also help to correct all characters development.

⚫ GRAMMAR : 15/15

I didn't find grammatical mistakes. There were some tiny errors in which can be corrected while editing.

⚫ COMMUNICATION : 5/5 

Replied all comments. Author maintain really good communication with readers. Which is really important. Good Job.

⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 11/15

The book was nice. As I say earlier, I couldn't feel all scenarios and it's need improvement. Otherwise the story was interesting.

⚫ TOTAL : 79/100

I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.