Author : WeWillWinInTheEnd

Reviewer : constadd

• COVER : 6/10

Cover is very basic and not very attractive. It is quite simple. Plus it doesn't totally go around with the title.

• TITLE : 9/10

The title matches with the storyline perfectly. In the first chance Reds were betrayed by the Silvers. So, this second chance is all about forgiveness and going back to what they were before the betrayal.

• BLURB : 6/10

Blurb is quite incomplete and isn't intriguing. Maybe you could give more details on it.

• CREATIVITY : 5/10

The storyline is good but it is not presented well. Like the scenarios could be more descriptive. For example, fight scenes are summarized in 3-4 lines. Not just fight scenes, take any scenes like you could have described Red Palace which plays an important part in the story. What I am trying to say is there are so many interesting subjects in the story but they were not presented in a way that would excite the readers.
Also I have a suggestion, don't name the chapters after your characters. The chapter name should give a glimpse of what the readers should expect from it. Instead you could mention in the beginning of the chapter the character POV in whose perspective the chapter is written.

• PLOT : 12/15

The plot is interesting. I really liked all the backstories.

• CHARACTERS : 6/10

The main characters were described very well but side characters were sidelined. I still didn't get what kind of people Reds were. Obviously they hated Silvers and wanted their rights back but that's it. Atleast Calum and Regina deserved a better character sketch who were also a part of the mission.

• GRAMMAR : 12/15

Good use of vocabulary but there were few grammatical mistakes. The statements were not properly ended meaning full stops were missing. Spelling mistakes were there too.

• COMMUNICATION : 2.5/5

Can't really comment on this because there is hardly any communication with the readers.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 11/15

Since it was Isabella's journey so I would have preferred the story in her POV. I really couldn't differentiate who is the main character whether it is Isa, Cornelia or Melina. Personally I thought the story deserves better description and characterization.

• TOTAL : 69.5/100