Author name: dreamboat462

Reviewer: alphacraze

Cover: 8/10

Was lacking a bit of creativity in the cover, the author can do a bit more in improvement.

Title: 9/10

A great title, makes one wonder what is beneath the covers.

Would appeal more to romance readers.

Blurb: 10/10

A good blurb, combine with the title and you have a really curious reader ready.

Creativity: 9/10.

The creativity was ok but it was lacking in some areas.

Like the characters background story line and some events they find themselves was literally too good to be true.

Perhaps the author should make it a bit more realistic.

Plot: 15/15

The plot and setting was superb and the environment gelled with the story marvelously.

Character: 8/10

Character was okay but being a cry baby who always need to be rescued could be a turn off for the readers.

Character should be able to save herself too when she coul.

Grammar: 7/10

There was a lot of errors and you could see most of the author's dialect was invading the story.

Which isn't exactly good because there's the probability of confusing reader's.

Communication with readers: 5/5

Maintained a great conversational pattern with readers and was open to suggestions and questions.

Overall impression: 14/15

Total score: 88/100.

A great read.