Inside My Head
No, this isn't a poem. XD You're all probably sick of poems. I don't blame you, lol.
Anyway, I have been working on a story these past few days called "Inside My Head". I wanted to show you guys the first part/chapter so you could tell me if you'd ever read it or if you think it's good. Though, regardless of whatever any of you think, I will still publish the story one day. I just want to see if "Inside My Head" would be appealing to any of you. :3
Welp, here's the little preview thingy X3:
Part 1: A Sheety Meeting
(I should go to the store today...)
[Yeah, gurl, you need some new designer heels. Just sayin', but those heels you're wearing? UUUUUGLYYYY!]
(And you are...?)
[I go by The Voice.]
(That's such a dumb name...)
[Excuuuuuse ME?!]
(I'mma call you Brackets, 'kay?)
[Da hell is this??!]
(.....)
[You still need some new heels, gurl.]
(You got over that fast.)
[Oh, don't worry, I'm pissed.]
(Oh, shiiiiiii-eeeetssss. Sheets. I like sheets. Love them, actually. So nice and silky and smooth and soft and pretty...)
[What are you on about?? JUST GO GET THEM NEW HEELS!]
(Okay, okay!)
It's basically like those books where two people text each other or call each other, except the [ ] are a voice in the main character's head and the [ ] has no face. Heh, anyway, yeah, that was the first part of it. And since that didn't seem like a lot, I'll also give you the current summary (though I plan on adding to the summary, but whatever ;3 You guys are just special like that).
~THE SUMMARY~
[I'm gay.]
(OHMAIGAWD, WE'RE GONNA CRASH! MAYDAY, MAYDAY! I REPEAT: WE ARE GOING TO CRA- OOMPH!)
[You crashed into the curb.]
(Oh... So, you're gay? That makes a lot of sense, actually...)
[What that supposed to mean?!]
(It means heels and milkshakes.)
[..huh?]
(You should know what I mean! You're the one inside my head, Brackets!)
[Um... You're crazy?]
(What does- you know what? I'm not even going to ask.)
•••
[...hey, where're your ugly heels?]
(Hiding.)
[...hiding? From what?]
(The mean people.)
["The mean people"? Did the mean people make you sad?]
(...)
//( ) knows she's said too much.
[Did the mean people do something to you?]
(...)
[Hello?]
~~~~~
Brackets is a voice in her head, one that suddenly appears one day. One that she can't get rid of. One that is her friend - her only friend. The only friend she will ever need.
*contains censored swear words*
~END OF THE SUMMARY~
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