There are different packages you can request, though the longer ones will take me more time to complete, so please be patient. I want to give proper reviews, not short botched ones that've been rushed over one night... though who knows? I might be able to do a quality one in that time.

Anywho, without further ado.

Review Packages:

Bramble Package:

A review of your summary and first chapter (and prologue if there is one). I will then feedback on my thoughts of your introduction, any improvements I think could be made, and whether there are any glaring gramatical errors or such.

Payment - A read and an honest comment on two chapters of one of my books.

Thistle Package:

A review of your summary and first three chapters (and prologue if there is one). You will then receive feedback on those chapters, such as any improvements, gramatical mistakes I've spotted, and my personal opinion on your chapters.

Payment - A read and an honest comment on four chapters of one of my books.

Gorse Package:

A review of your summary and first seven chapters (and prologue if there is one). You'll then recieve feedback in due course, in much a similar fashion to the previous two packages, though the more I read, the more I can comment on, since the plot will develope further.

Payment - A read and an honest comment on eight chapters of one of my books.

Thorn Package:

A review of your summary and first twenty chapters (and a prologue if there is one). Same sort of feedback as mentioned previously, but since I've read more, I'll have a better grasp on where the story is going and thus, better feedback, but the wait time for this will be longer.

Payment - A read and an honest comment on sixteen chapters of one of my books (Or sixteen chapters across incomplete books). Plus a permanent follow on this account.

Rose Package:

A review of your summary and whole book. The feedback will be in a similar style to that previously mentioned, such as character developement, plotline, originality and the like. The wait time for this review will be the longest, since it'll take me a while to read.

Payment - A read and an honest comment over either one full book, up to the lastest chapter of an incomplete work that's over twenty-five chapters, or twenty-five chapters across incomplete works under twenty-five chapters. Plus a permanent follow on this account.

Rose Package Confusion

Eg: (these are examples. no of chapters may have changed since this.)

Shattered Crimson (COMPLETED - 45 Chapters) - One full book

White Thorn (ONGOING - 32 Chapters) - An incomplete work that's over 25 chapters

Rainbow Magic (ONGOING - 8 Chapters) + Chivalry is Dead (7 Chapters) +... - 25 Chapters across incomplete works.

Whoa, you expect me to do all of this?!

It shouldn't take too long, and you can do it over time. So yes, I expect you to do this, just as you expect me to read and review your book. I'll be pretty much doing the same thing, except I won't be commenting on individual chapters - I'll be summing everything up in this book. Look at what I say about honest comments (further down the page) and it shouldn't take you too long to complete. It's what some people already do on a fair few books they read.

Second Password

For form on the next page (just to make sure you've read everything through).

The second part of the password is: your favourite flower

Note - please don't tell anyone on the next page, since I want to ensure people read both the rules and what they need to do in order to recieve their review.

Note

Payment can be done slowly overtime, and I don't mind when it's done, but the review won't be posted until the payment has been completed.

I'll try and inform you when the review is done, but feel free to PM me on occassion if you want to know how far along I am with it - but don't bug me everyday, because that won't help me get it done.

If your book is only twenty chapters long (and it's the full book) then requesting the Thorn Package is perfectly fine. The Rose Package is only for books over twenty chapters long. Same with short stories ie, if it's only seven chapters long feel free to request Gorse etc.

I will only read the number of chapters you've got up so far, so if you request say, the Thorn Package and you only have eighteen chapters up when I start my review, then I'll only write a review of those eighteen chapters you have up (and you'll still need to complete the full payment).

An Honest Comment?

What I mean when I say this, is in essence a sort of short review of the chapter saying what you liked or disliked - try for at least three lines. Either this, or you can do a few more shorter comments... sort of like what you'd do in one of the many book clubs here.

Don't worry - if you don't like something, then just say. I won't not do you review if you comment like that - that's why I asked for an honest comment. I want to know what people think of my book.

For Example:

(Good Review)

I really liked... (insert what you liked - for instant the introduction of the main character.) I couldn't spot any typos, so good job on that. I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what happens to...

Or

(Bad Review)

I couldn't relate to/I didn't like the way... (insert what you didn't like about random story - for instance the phrasing of the words, it was really hard to read and understand.) There were a fair few typos and gramatical errors, which made it difficult for me to finish this chapter...

Or

(Multiple Short Comments - at least three per chapter)

Hmm? I wonder where this is going...

She did what?!

That guy is evil...

Damn... This cliffhanger...

They don't have to follow this format to a T, this is just to give you some idea of what you could say, Good, Bad, or just completely random. I don't mind if you add in emoticons (especially for random comments) just ideally have some words in there.

I'm a nice person (I think) so don't worry. I'm not going to bite your head off (not that I really could through a computer screen ;) - even if you point out a typo.

Repeat Requests Payment/Multiple Requests Payment

Payment - Same for Bramble to Gorse, just on a different book, or just read on the same number of chapters as stated above if you're enjoying the book.

Payment - For Thorn and Rose, same on a different book, (or continue reading the same number of chapters for Thorn) but just follow my secondary account @ThornyAfterDark

My Works

Feel free to check out my different books to see which might align more with your tastes. I'll even categorise them here to make things easy for you:

WEREWOLF

- Shattered Crimson

- Scattered Purple

- The Alpha's Doll: Icy Hearts

- Skin (On other account - ThornyAfterDark)

- Unbound (On other account - ThornyAfterDark)

FANTASY

- Chivalry is Dead

- Necro

- Rainbow Magic

- White Thorn

- Raven

- Second Chance

Now... Onto the Form...