( this is just an Idea for a story I might write, so here's the first chapter of it and give me feedback)

Author POV

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Just outside the gates of kohona,  lay an unconscious girl.

She was left there in the night, how she got there was unknown.

Her clothes were tattered and burnt and her back symbols tattooed on it.

Many questions arose on why the girl had tattoos at such a young age and why she was allowed into the village.

but they were all ignored by the Hokage, sarutobi hiruzen.

he sensed intense chakra from the girl and knew she was special.

Her name?

oh, that's easy.

it's Y/n L/n.

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Y/n POV ( five years old)

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" FIREBALL JUTSU!!" I yell quickly weaving the signs.

the practice dummy burst into pieces.

I smile at my accomplishment, before quickly hiding it.

Dear diary,

Many people fear my smile.

Unlike everyone else, I have razor sharp canines.

but that's not all.

my cheeks have an orangey tint to them along with three black stripes on both sides.

kids at school call me names like a kitty cat, oranges, and mango. but if they're feeling mean they'll call me a loser, weakling, or orphan.

But Hokage tells me to ignore them because he says if I get too angry I'll do something I'll regret.

I like to listen to Hokage since he isn't scared.

one time I gave him a hug when he came to visit me and I cracked his back.

I asked if he was okay and he just sweatdropped before smiling and saying I'm too strong for my own good and that he's okay.

Another time, At school, some kids were picking on me and calling me a new name"freak" and I was going to tell them to stop but instead I roared at them and they ran.

It felt good to be the one they feared but when I told Hokage what happened he grew nervous and told me that it's not okay to be feared

So I stopped.

He tells me that I'm special and the others just can't see that, I believe him.

I have to go now.

BYE!

{Three years later}

Y/n POV( Eight years old)

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"Monster!"

"FREAK!"

"YOU DON'T BELONG HERE!"

I had fallen behind and gotten swarmed by hateful villagers.

Something inside of me wants to say something but I'm too scared of losing control.

SoI continue to stare at the ground with tears in my eyes while villagers yell at me.

"Don't listen to them." A deep voice mutters to me.

I look up and see . . . Kakashi walking beside me.

My stomach flips at the sincerity in his voice.

Smiling shyly at him with my soot covered face, blushing.

Taking my hand, we walk to catch up with the others.

Dear diary,

I lost control today.

My bullies were beating me up in an empty classroom and I was crying but they wouldn't stop.

they called me mean names and one kid hit me with a rock.

That hurt REALLY bad, then somebody told me to get up.

I looked around to see nobody but the kids and me, but I stood up anyway.

when I did a sudden strength surged through me and a fiery aura surrounded me.

Then I blacked out and came face to face with a Gigantic Tiger!

he told me that he lived inside of me and that we were going to be friends.

I asked him how'd he got there but he just said he'd tell me later.

then he told me to wake up, I didn't know I was asleep.

but when I opened my eyes I saw that the entire classroom was on fire.

My bullies were burned to a crisp on the floor.

I ran out of the classroom to get help.

when it was all over I  was blamed for it and angry parents made Hokage move me to the farthest part away from the village.

I didn't want to go, but Hokage said I had too.

so I did. 

On the bright side, where I live now is much quieter and I have a lot more room to train.

I told Kakashi that I want to be the strongest there is and he said he'd train me.

he still makes my stomach feel weird so I told Hokage about it and he laughed and said I have a crush on Kakashi.

N-no! I do not!

But I might.

BYE!

{3 years later}

Y/n POV (11 years old)

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He rejected me!

Kakashi said that he's too old for me.

I wanted to cry but I couldn't let myself so I just nodded and came back inside the house.

It's so lonely out here.

I'm not allowed to leave until I can control myself.

Ever since what happened I've taken a vow of silence.

I've found out the name of the tiger in my head!

it's Y/N/C.

he says that he'll help me gain abilities I never knew I had like heightened senses. 

teachers come down here to teach me before running back to the village.

Hokage was right.

being feared isn't something I want.

But according to Kakashi, I'm getting really strong.

I gotta go but I'll write soon.

BYE!

{Five years later}

PRESENT DAY

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Y/N POV (15 years old)

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I yawn sitting up from my bed.

What time is it, P/N?

Time to get up.

I frown.

Someone is in a mood.

I am not! were going to be late!

My eyes widen and I throw my blankets off of me.

Shit. shit. shit!

Language.

I roll my eyes.

After showering I put on my ninja outfit before looking in the mirror.

I checked to see if my back was covered and it thankfully was.

the outfit was perfect.

It covered my cheeks and mouth.

Running down the stairs I pull on my shoes and grab my kunai's.

Ninja Academy, here I come!

Here we come.

R-right!

I smile softly.

{time skip}

I run through the village dodging people the entire time.

Man, today is really busy.

We need to hurry.

yeah yeah.

The academy comes into view and I speed up.

I run through the gates and dodge students as I start to slow down.

Suddenly, I see a flash of pink before I'm suddenly trip and fly forward.

Putting my hands out, I catch myself.

students gather around watching.

Are you okay?

Y-yeah just scratched my hands.

Okay. . . .LET'S FIGHT!!

W-what!? NO!

Why?

You know why.

Suddenly an obnoxious voice rings out.

"HEY! Saskue did you see that?!" A shrill voice calls to someone.

Remember Y/n, your eyes.

I slowly rise, my eyes towards the ground.

"Saskue! wait!" the voice calls starting to rush past me.

a little fun won't hurt.

YES!

I stick my arm out and close line the girl.

The entire crowd gasps while I stare down at her with angry eyes.

on the ground lays an embarrassed pink-haired girl with a giant forehead.

Not seeing her as a threat I turn and start walking away.

"H-HEY!! WHERE DO YOU THINK YOUR GOING?!" she yells after me getting up.

I sigh before turning to face her.

this girl is really annoying.

I stare at her blankly before shrugging and walking inside.

(TIME SKIP)

"We have a new student. would you please introduce yourself?"Sensei asks.

My palms start to sweat.

I haven't talked since I was 11.

Quickly making up my mind, I wave my hand at my throat hoping they'll get the message.

"Oh? you're a mute?" sensei asks curiously.

That'll work.

I nod my head and I hear someone snicker.

Glancing sideways, I spot the girl ( I now know as sakura) whispering to a girl with blonde hair.

Deciding to ignore them, I turn back to sensei.

"How about you write your name on the board and three things about you," he says smiling warmly at me.

I nod before grabbing the chalk and writing.

after finishing I step away for my classmates to see.

this consisted of:

I'm Y/n L/n

I plan on being the strongest.

I like being alone.

NO ONE IS ALLOWED TO TOUCH MY MASK.

Everyone sweatdrops after reading the last thing on my list.

" what? are you hideous under there?" sakura asks obnoxiously.

I turn to look at her and she freezes.

letting out a tired sigh, I grab a book off of sensei's desk and launch it at her face.

it hits her square in the forehead and knocks her out her seat.

Everyone stares at me in shock while my face remains calm.

"Y-y/n, please take your seat next to Naruto." sensei stutters pointing towards a blonde kid who hasn't stopped staring at me since I entered the classroom.

I give him a curt nod before walking towards my seat.

It seems as if the closer I get the redder he gets.

strange.

I sit down next to him.

"HI! I'M NARUTO UZIMAKI AND IM GONNA BE THE HOKAGE! BELIEVE IT!" He exclaims loudly.

I like this kid's ambition.

Something about that chakra . . . hmm.

what did you say? Y/N/C.

Nothing.

My eyebrows furrow at Y/N/C's weird behavior but I shrug it off.

I give Naruto a thumbs up before turning to listen to the lesson.

this is gonna be a long day.

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Hey readers!

so for the really late update but at my school, we've been testing this entire week and I've been giving it my all.

so this is just a potential story I might write but who knows.

and yes I have it more put together.

Until the next chapter.

Writer_chan101

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