april 28, 2021

creo que soy demiasado amable
¿por que río cuando solo quiero ser ininflammable?

permites otras a pecan contra mí,
¿por que te agradecí?

he sido destrozado y he destrozando
¿y ahora puedas imaginar que yo mando?

termine contigo, puedes se pasan
pensaste que eres un dio, pero ahora hago el pan

this is the first poem i've ever written in spanish, so please give me some constructive criticism! this was really hard to do lol

(rough) English Translation (I wanted at least some of it to rhyme in English):

who art in heaven
i think i am too kind
why do i laugh when i just want to be nonflammable?

you allow others to trespass against me,
so why did i thank you?

i've been destroyed and i've been destroying, and,
now can you imagine that i can command?

i'm done with you, you can pass and be dead
you thought you were a god but now i make the bread