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Hello there readers! Please read this informative section before reading this book!
Land of Armonia was written by me as a young teen. I worked on it for years and eventually published it for my senior project when I was 17. However, this doesn't mean the level of writing is that of a 17 year old. I wrote this version of the book when I was 14-16. This is not to dissuade you from reading, I just want to remind you my writing has improved a lot, and this is a reflection of my growth.
Some things you may want to know:
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My main characters are native american. However, Armonia is a completely fictional place, not our world or even Earth. This means that it is only loosely inspired by those cultures but is not at all an accurate representation of them. My characters may say or do things that are inspired by native culture, particularly Lakota, Cherokee, and Sioux, but they are not of these tribes/nations.
This means the tribes are fictional as well. Many words the tribes use are completely made up, as are some of their traditions. This was for my own worldbuilding so again, this is NOT a native american story and you should not take what you read here as a true representation (especially to replicate later) The cultures in this story are diverse but completely fictional.
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Again, I wrote it as a young teen. I'm aware of its flaws. This is to share it and encourage people to buy it, but particularly it's sequel, The Southern Sun, and the final book coming out hopefully late 2025, The Eleven Dragons.
3.
It is enemies to lovers!??!?!? I didn't focus much on the romance in this book but there is definitely a lot of sprinkling so you can call it a slow burn. I let this thing COOK.
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That enemies to lovers is a hetero relationship. There are queer characters in this but because of where I was when writing this, they are more implied than they are said (for this book particularly. In books 2 and 3 I explicitely name them and queer characters are better represented, I was just a scared kid when I wrote this and didn't want people to think poorly of me for having queer characters).
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I LOVE ALL OF YOU FOR READING THIS AND I WILL HOLD YOUR HAND IF YOU NEED ME TO. I know the areas where it is rocky and not great (many have told me that it is very slow in the beginning and that was because I didn't know jack shit about pacing, I just wanted to ease yall into the story) (Book 3 gets so wild. Absolute oposite. It is so fast and jumping from one point to the next it might give you whiplash)
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Thank you for being here. I love you all. I am really trying to encourage you to buy a physical copy just to support my upcoming series titled Nel Made Devils, which I'm hoping to get actually published, not self pub. NMD is going to be heavily illustrated and therefore will take a lot of time so if you like my writing from wherever else you've seen it, or even from this I guess, please do buy a physical copy (maybe of loa book 2 cause it's better lol). You are getting this for free! So I apologize if it seems I am begging, but I really would like the support if you are able.
Some self advertising:
Please follow me on instagram for art (fanart and oc art) and updates on Nel Made Devils and LOA book3; The Eleven Dragons. (@/crimson.monsoon )
Please also subscribe to me on youtube for my animations! You can find some old content for Land of Armonia and see into the future of Nel Made Devils! (@/Crimson Monsoon )
Lastly, follow me here on wattpad because I love you and you love me :) I am not manipulating you (I am not) *I am*
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(Chapter 1 coming December 21st, 2024, to celebrate Land of Armonia turning 2)
You can look forward to weekly updates every Saturday at 6pm EST after that.
And I will also put fun facts at the end of every Chapter. LOA is like... My baby. My ugly baby that only a mother could love.
(Psssst You could also leave a review on amazon or good reads lol)
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Some fun stuff to hype you up while you wait (if you read this before the previous given date)
I am introducing you to my characters here for funzies!!!!!! Pls bear with me they are my children.
Herogi (Strong Woman): (depicted on LOA's ORIGINAL COVER from the unrevised version, 2021-2022)
Known as the most egotistical, selfish, prideful nobody from the Cretos, Herogi really does think she's just all that. She wields a small golden hatchet crafted from the heart of the Tri Peaks which crown her home. She's absolutely trash when it comes to using magic, only able to pull off random stunts with "bursts of energy" which she can use in dire situations (and she has no idea how she does it). She prefers her physical strength when it comes to handling situations, and will probably throw a punch before discussing a conflict reasonably. She struggles to understand her own emotions but gets upset when other people don't understand her. She's only seventeen years old, born in the month of the Full Worm Moon (March 15th).
-Protagonist
-I created her in 2017
*Amante and Herogi's first conflict, comic teaser 2023, Patreon*
Amante (Kind Lover): (older ref, 2023 design)
The most feared Chaton from the new generation of warriors, Amante earned his fame in the Sky War where his brutality and strength outmatched and terrified all who beheld him. However, most would be surprised to find Amante is actually a gentle, kind, and slightly nervous eighteen-year-old boy who only wishes to keep all tribes at peace. He wields a long drake-jaw tipped spear decorated in dried tendons, beads, and feathers. He is naturally talented when it comes to learning magic, making him a powerful asset to the Chatons and a force to be reckoned with. He often will fidget or play with his extraordinary long hair, and enjoys singing to himself when no one is around. He tends to fall ill easily, and is considered a child of misfortune due to being born in winter, during the Full Snow Moon (February 1st).
-Dueteragonist (second main character)
-Also created in 2017
-Tends to be the most favored character of people reading my book lol
*Amante and Herogi's first conflict, comic teaser 2023, Patreon*
Misty (Misted Mountain):
*Misty and Herogi GIF, LOA Book 2; The Southern Sun (Trailer), 2023, YouTube*
Coming from the trickster tribe, the Sly Vulpes, Misty is a sassy, brutish, carefree girl with far too many secrets. She is a skilled archer, but her true talent lies within her ability to craft illusions through tribal magic. She's quick witted, and can always come up with something to say to anyone in any situation, whether it be to humiliate them or answer their quandaries. She enjoys hunting and gathering but has a secret passion for dancing, becoming most excitable at powwows or even in the Pujik Ballroom! She's young but bursting with talent at sixteen-years-old, born in the Full Worm Moon (March 30th).
-Part of main cast
-ALSO created in 2017
-One of my most popular characters!
*OLD LOL, scene from book 2 so no spoilers, EARLY 2023*
Juntul (Small Rabbit):
Surrounded by cannibalistic humans all her life, Juntul is a quiet vegetarian bursting with curiosity but limited by her fear. Supposedly "cursed by a witch," Juntul was forced to live as a rabbit with a human head after she turned eleven. While her people are beyond brutal and morally insane, Juntul is probably the sweetest girl you'd ever meet. Her skill with tribal magic is extraordinary, and her navigation skills even better! She's young and childish, absolutely bursting with energy and joy. She easily trusts people and doesn't find it hard to make friends with people she's never met. This twelve year old gets to celebrate her thirteenth birthday in this novel during the Full Hunter's Moon! (October 11th)
-Part of the main cast
-Created in 2017
Chang:
Coming from a small village, Chang stands out as one of the few harpies living among the Nojoch as citizens. He is remarkably the second harpy ever to inherit tribal magic, the first being his own mother! Chang's weapon of choice is a silver sword which is issued to all Nojoch warriors. At only twenty-one years old, Chang is already climbing up the ranks to become a general. His unique abilities are useful in combat and survival, and he's especially good at reading people and their intentions. He's the only known harpy to be supposedly male, which is certainly curious. As a harpy, Chang ages much faster than humans, and was born on the Full Buck Moon (July 12th)
-Part of main cast
-Created in 2017
*I don't have any good images of Chang that are recent enough for me to put here so have this little herogi sticker instead*
Princess April of the Pujik:
The first thing to catch a person off guard when meeting April is her age. She's only eight! The second thing would be her magical talents. April is a giddy young girl with explosive magic, practically bursting at the seams. Sometimes, she can hardly contain it! However, her highness is afflicted with a nameless illness, which is slowly beginning to number her days. With no cure in sight, she wishes to see the word and live out her childhood normally.
-Somewhat part of main cast, mostly here for the ride
-Created either 2017 or 2018 I don't remember
Badger:
Princess April is never seen without her most faithful, fatherly caretaker, Badger. Badger is the forty-five year old fat red-headed centaur always bustling about the royal Pujik castle, keeping things in check and acting as the only fatherly figure April has. He would never admit it out loud, but he sees Princess April as his daughter, and would rather lay his life on the line than let anything touch her. He has no wish for fame, he only asks to be given a decent amount of respect.
-Side character traveling with main cast
-Created 2017 or 2018
-Based on my sister's horse! lol don't ask me why I really don't know
Black Day:
The rambunctious, careless, gossiping maniac known as Black Day is practically the brute strength of our gang. She's fearless (or just stupid) and bold (stupid). She is easily recognized by her slightly deformed, shrunken right eye which hinders her vision slightly. She's a powerful centaur with incredible speed, but even so, it's likely she would never become the pride of her tribe. She's already thirty-seven years old and considered worthless by most. So, that's why she's willing to defy her tribe without fear of their rejection! Black Day has a sense of humor, and she isn't afraid to use it!
-Part of main cast
-Created 2019
-Based on my horse lol (MY HORSE IS A DUMB ASS I HAD TO MAKE A CHARACTER FOR HER)
*another comic teaser from 2023* *not Black Day* *I don't ever draw Black Day*
A further character index of side and background characters, you can learn about if you want:
Amora (Divine Gold):
Amora is the powerful council leader of the Cretos, known across the land as being the "best example of a Cretos." Many know her name, and therefore, she receives respect from outsiders.
-Created in 2017
Amora (Living Sky):
This is Amante's mother, who shares a name with Amora of the Cretos. She is often harsh with her words but possesses tenderness beneath them. Amante often dreams of her for his own comfort.
-Created in 2018?
Chief Ajawo (Chief Lion):
The Chief of the Cretos is most easily recognized by his iconic albino lion at his side. He is soft spoken but his words can carry quite the heavy punch. He isn't one to get angry very easily.
-Created in 2017
*that is a singular frame of Chief Ajawo and he is ugly as hell*
Kalbak (Sitting Elk):
One of the Chaton's many captains, Kalbak is Amante's father. He's brutish and often violent, but surprisingly smart and rational. He's very prideful, and hates when people defy him.
-Created in 2019?
-ANTAGONIST
Momo (Bull):
Another captain of the Chatons, Momo is a foolish, trigger happy man who runs head first into situations before thinking to understand it more. He hates Amante, almost thinking of him like a rival.
-Created in 2019
-ANTAGONIST, very specific to Amante
Kalem (Two Birds):
Herogi's annoying, mischievous older brother. He's a secret softy and a surprisingly good caretaker, though he does not see himself this way. While Herogi thinks he only dreams of chasing girls, Kalems interests are oriented toward the war and questions of creation. He doesn't trust people easily but he's willing to put that aside if that means getting their help. He's already twenty-one years old, but that doesn't mean he's growing distant from his little sisters!
-Created in 2019-2020ish
There are honestly so many characters but I will not pester you with them
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MORE ART
Above is art I made in celebration of completing the third book of Land of Armonia. That is Amante in a modern AU!
*Official cover for Book 2; The Southern Sun* GO BUY IT IF YOU CAN it is on Amazon and Kindle, available in paperback or ebook (same goes for book 1 which you are about to read)
*Southern Sun poster* Not a fan of this one. Didn't turn out the way I wanted but I do have prints of it if for SOME REASON you want it lol
*Herogi and Amante kiss?! REAL?!* Origianally a concept for book 3 which was slightly altered.
You of course can find more art for LOA and my other project, Nel Made Devils, on my instagram.
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THAT IS ALL! See you next chapter! Again, I apologize in advance for how disapointing the writing may be. It is old. It is a very old example of my writing.
Thank you for your support!
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