I ain't critiquing randomly. I have these factors that I personally chose as my guides. Make sure to read them para alam mo kung ano ba yung titirahin ko sa gawa mo.

i. Book Cover

The book cover has a big impact to the first impression of the readers on your story. Kahit naman sabihin nating, "Don't judge the book by it's cover," hindi naman natin maiiwasan na husgahan ang isang libro mula sa pabalat nito. Not just that, from the book cover, readers tend to build their expectations, that is why make sure your cover reflects the story, konektado dapat. From the background, portrayals, font style and even from the mood- I will go through it.

ii. Story Title

A title that suits your plot. A title that is not too long that it already tell the story. A title that will create countless questions on your readers' mind. That's the title that we are aiming.

iii. Story Description

When a reader got interested on your story by the power of your title, the next thing that he or she will read is the description or when a reader is confused and want to give your story a chance, description is your last chance to tame his or her attention.

iv. Prologue

There are many ways on how to start your story specifically on how to write your prologue. Whatever style you used, you have to make sure that the content was enough to make the readers go wild about your story.

v. Characterization

This is all about the characters on your story. Their traits, kailangan hindi nagbabago. Do something that will impress the readers and make them remember your character. Kung kontrabida siya, kontrabida siya. Characters are not just fictional, kailangan realistic din sila. Kapani-paniwala, karelate-relate. Reach for the emotions of the readers.

vi. Writing Style

I have my writing guide, 'Be Aware.' Expect na mababanggit ko ito dito. Ginawa ko kasi 'yon para hindi paulit-ulit yung pagta-type ko. Inside that book, you'll see the common mistakes of the writers.

➝ Dialogues and Narrations
➝ Language
➝ Grammar

Grammar, typos, proper capitalization, punctuation marks and construction of sentences. I know, they are inevitable but atleast we can lessen them and I can give you some tips or lessons that can help you.

Plot is not included
Yes po, you've read it right. I did not put it 'cause who am I to judge the work of your mind. It's the least thing that I wanted to critic. Ayaw kong pakialaman ito. Ayaw kong guluhin yung utak niyo. Besides, mahihirapan din ako dahil hindi lahat ay completed ang story at kung completed man ay wala namang kasiguraduhan na tatapusin ko hanggang dulo 'yon. Sana nakuha niyo yung punto ko.

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